Questionable Questing

A fighting aura martial arts harem. Also allows you to worldbuild on Aura fighting styles and philosophy. Having their relationship built on battle turned to seductive violent sex. But plot, where does our tale start and what is our first arc with Jaune and family and friends.

Jaune's first day at beacon. it seems like the average set up for you stereotypical strong Jaune fic's. You know the one's. He comes in super prepared and trained, he causally kills all the grim by himself in a way that causes all the girls to have goo eyes for him, the only thing is I'll keep adding little bits and pieces just so he seems this slightly bit off.

Stuff like knowing where Grim are even before he shows up, not needing to sleep as much, or picking up on information way faster than reader's are used to jaune seeing, and then all of the sudden initiation is over, he's celebrating with his new found team and he suddenly says he has to call his family and tell them the good news and he gets a text that they have a surprise for him at a certain address.

So he shows up, and again the readers are thrown for a loop since why would his family be involved, and boom Salem's there along with Cinder and they surprise him not just with some sexy time but also that they've decided to stay in Vale with him while he goes to school. End scene.

You end on showing that Jaune has been at this point in a porn parody hentai dynamic with his adopted sister and mother. I like. And you can start to slowly show Jaune acts, odd. He understands normal modern things but there are bits of prince weeb that show off. Like he was raised a noble of another time.

Basically I want to do a bait and switch with the readers. it starts of your stereotypical Jaune Harem fic, only boom first five minutes Mommy valley girl Salem shows up. Then the first part is revolving view point between all the different girls and Jaune as the reader slowly get bits and pieces of the backstory and scheming being played.

What does mommy valley Salem dress and act like? And how does cinder act as she is introduced to Jaune's new friends and in particular Phyrrah?

Well I mentioned when she's acting like a queen and a goddess around her subjects, real expensive and fancy dresses, around Jaune in the house she's butt naked, but around Jaune's friends when she's pretending to be normal?

I'm thinking bright sunny summer clothes like sun hates and shorts and she's just very aggressively nice. Very loud, very happy, a little bit of a shit stirrer since in this form she won't be able to resist causing just a little bit of drama for Ozpin. She basically acting stupid, but still hiding that devious mind underneath just waiting to strike.

While Cinder introduces herself as Jaune's adopted older sister and acts a little stand offish and cold but slowly warms up to the rest of the cast.

So bimbo super mom who only lets herself be a little clever in public while Cinder is hanging around Jaune and staking her space but gives up as time goes on

That's the idea. Anyway sleepy time. Hopefully new chapter tomorrow but if not it'll be Wednesday for My therapist.

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Heyo ameigo. How you?

Pretty decent, just had some pizza. What's been going on with you?

I'll repost from my server.

I'll just rephrase. A coworker of mine went to Boston and my boss talked about a story of the Boston Marathon which led to me saying I don't care about the Boston Marathon Bombing as it blended into a mirage of violent deaths that have happened for years around me with shootings and other destruction.

Which turned into a argument about how I'm an asshole while I said I care in the abstract but not in the absolute as I didn't know these people and couldn't claim to feel full empathy.
And this kept going and going as my other coworker started getting what I meant in essence and explaining it to my boss while explaining my boss's point to me.

I'm guessing your boss lived in Boston or had family who did, so he was a lot more personally invested into it. My advice with situations like that is to just say some empty platitudes and ignore it. Its kind of like with the conflict in Isreal, myself personally I don't really care one way or the other. I mean my childhood was the war on terror and seeing the horrible after effects of that.

But a lot of people really do care, so I just my head when ever they say something and I just say that I hope the war ends soon and no civilians are hurt. Its the best way not to get too involved in a lot of that stuff. Which is for the best since when people are emotionally attached to something they stopped acting reasonable.