Questionable Questing

"Emma took it as a challenge to plant as much cum as possible in her pussy whenever she got the chance, sweating and heaving and whispering vicious, degrading little things in her ear with sadistic glee as she claimed her old friend's twat for all it was worth."

Extremely good smut

Snippet twelve with Lisa is also really wholesome and good. But with the cult you don;t need to do any convincing, the ability to heal practically anything and the superhuman powers would be enough for most people. Not necessarily to commit incest, but to look the other way when it happens

And then over time in this new found community with a supernaturally beautiful, empathetic, and charismatic matron they get convinced even if they swore they never would. A slow fall they though their natural cynicism would protect them from.

They lose because Gloria and the demons are too loving and David too heroic. If David and Gloria say their relationship is awesome and adds to their lives, why not try

Basically the people are used to threats or violence, but genuine love and affections just breaks them.

So what powers David get and how many chapters to the revival ritual from start of story?

Its what makes the demons so powerful, because they genuinely think they're doing good and genuinely want to help you. They love and care about people and to them since pleasure is good since the opposite is pain, the ultimate pleasure of families fucking and breeding in an endless orgy is the ultimate good.

I haven't even started writing it other than few snippets here and there, so I have no clue how long it'll be yet.

Got it. So Lucy here, does she get the corpo mom and son for Gloria to use as sacrifice?
And have the Corpo son be a rival racer who went from bully to friend yo betrayer of David

Lucy as the corpo mom and her son being the traitor is a cool idea. But I think I'll stick with Lucy being a younger potential love interest/rival to help balance out all the milf's. With her not betraying David, not just because she likes him but out of principle too since she wants to succeed in the jets races despite with or without her copro backing, purely because of her own talent.

No I meant Lucy leads the corpo mom and son to Gloria after losing her mind from grief of David dying

Oh, that works too. lol. Also a symbol of her rejecting her old life for a new one.

Have the expectation the corpo mom is going to need a Karen only to show through the ritual preparation to sacrifice and rebirth her to save David she has similarities to Gloria and how even the corpos suffer under the domeninering cyberpunk hellhole

She far less close to her son. Part of the reason the son befriended David after bullying him and getting beat up by David. Fuck with emotional reaction combinations in readers

I like. just because I want the cenobites to be a little more wholesome and loving, doesn't scrub away there evil either.

Cenonbites say David can punish his former friend and help him. Turn him into a femboy assassin slave and fuck his mom and sisters while showing his friend how to breed his mom and sisters. Dammination and redemption

I'm going to write before bed. Talk more tomorrow as day off

Damnation and redemption, I like that line.

I was actually about to mention I was getting tired and going to bed funny enough. Lots of chores tomorrow, stuff like grocery shopping and furniture shopping. Going to be getting up pretty early.

Goddamit I thought I typed something here. Anyway getting in tub and talk after.