Questionable Questing

Heyo. How are you? What's been going on?

I've been writing for My therapist a little bit and the couches came in today! Whoo! They look really good.

As for pictures, I really like this one for the demon mentor. It kind of fits the idea I'm going for. less the coloring or the horse cock, but more of someone with really obscene exaggerated sexual traits, yet wears them in a very elegant and controlled way.

Relax night so can chat. Read update and give thoughts. I helped edit the Ashara bits only

I agree on the dress and pose. Those breasts and ass need to be bigger

I really like the idea that the mentor's body is constantly shifting around in size and shape, along with her voice to fit the mood or feelings the listener is in. Their body almost seemingly made partially of smoke with how often it changes. With the demon having to learn incredibly self control to keep herself in a semi solid shape because of how susceptible their body and mind is to other people's emotions.

Smoke for the fire symbolism?
Lava and semen combination? Milk too for liquid with lava imagery

I was more thinking of how in a lot of Arabian and Persian myths, succubus's came from Adam's semen tossed into the fire and the smoke formed them. Kind of funny how that mirrors, how Aphrodite formed from Zeus throwing his semen into some sea foam. Something, something all religions are formed from bits and bobs shared between each other.

But, the fire analogy also works pretty well.

On, here's a little Gloria comic I found that made me laugh a little It might be just how weird the proportions are.

I really like that mythic inspiration and read update. Then we talk of more pics for demon mentor and pics for corpo mom and femboy son who were becoming good friends to Gloria and David respectively before their betrayal

Can I have David raping and gaping the assholes of these jerks in the comic?

I don't think Gloria would ever be desperate enough to prostitute herself, if for no other reason than she would hate for her son to be disappointed in her. But I could have a little cameo where a pair of arrogant corpo teens are acting as cheerleaders at the race and David has some fun with them.

Femboy son and his corpo mom talk and read my update Jackal made. Also, demon mentor and getting her alien but also sympathetic and likable character down

Just finished the update, and court room drama was fun, Ashara is a bit of a hypocrite, and I don't really like Lyanna anymore. Not in that she's a boring character to watch, the amount of drama alone she generates just existing makes her fun to watch, but more of if I met her in real life I would try to stay away from her.

I think I've said it before, but Lyanna doesn't really care what other people want. She focuses and changes them to fit what she wants, and she had the magic, charisma, and overwhelming power to gas light people into thinking it was their own idea and she was just giving them what they really want.

So Lyanna is always fun to read and you want to read more of her but you don't like her as a person. That is perfect. With Lyanna and in general with the quest I hit hard on ya know, massive mind control corruption smut is fucked up. What you think of Hamish and Tyrion?
And Ashara how is she a hypocrite and what you think of how Jackal has characterized her life since the Rebellion?

Ashara liked playing the same games of seduction that Lyanna does, the only difference is that she doesn't have the power or magic she does. And while she can talk all about how she regrets it and how she's grown past it, Ashara never apologized to guys like Ned that she played with or ever fully walked away entirely from it.

Even in her own internal monologue she mentioned the power of magic and how she should be avoiding it instead of jumping right in like she was doing. Or that if she didn't want to be caught up in the weekly orgies and drama she should avoid Lyanna, but like a moth to a flame she can't help herself.