Questionable Questing

Very nice. Sometimes I wish i was an artist instead of a writer. Some of the idea's I have would be gorgeous if I could actually draw.

I once had a dream about that water plant I talked about, where I was walking down this beach and the sun was setting right as another was rising, creating this effect where the violets and blues of the evening was fighting against the pink and orange of morning. And in this small section of night, six armed orange monkeys where jumping from tree to tree eating white spotted moths and other bugs.

While small fruits the size and shape of Avacados, but colored this bright orangeish red feel down, the tree specifically evolving with weaker branches so when animals walk on them it helps their fruit fall and get spread around. God I wish i could draw that image. Even describing it doesn't feel like its doing it justice.

That is why we polishing writing more so we can get closer to that. And for Debbie, who does she kill first and why? What pushes her assassin skills?

That's a really good question. I'm debating between some nobody, a faceless monk that here to spy on them or some random home intruder since it'll be a direct show of how vulnerable her family is and how she needs to become powerful now.

I think spy intruder is best. A inspiration from the show's Omiman killing the agents in his house.

But I also think her killing Angstrom Levy would also be really thematic as well. Not only because in the comic's its implied he raped Debbie as an act of revenge against Mark and I think Debbie deserves that revenge. But also on the more thematic side, Levy was obsessed with stopping Invincible to stop a future timeline where Mark takes over the earth with his father.

But Levy's fatal flaw was the as strong and smart as he was, and despite having the ability to see across timelines and futures, he was so obsessed with hurting and killing Mark he completely disregarded and under estimated the potential Debbie has.

Wait he fucking what to her and do you really want to bring in rape? Not fun hentai dub con rape. Real rape

That's purely in the comic's and something I have zero intention of bringing into my story. it's one of those things that I actually really dislike about Invincible because its feels completely gratuitous and unnecessary. Just something for Mark to angst about and for the readers to be digusted by.

At most I'll have Levy talk about torturing or maiming her, something to that degree.

Gotta love how much better it is to bleed and break someone's body then rape them in fiction

I don't create the tropes, I just write them.

I like this use of Angstorm. The first person killed by Debbie to protect her daughters and son

As well as the danger to her family, that really forces her to go all in on enhancements and what will eventually push her to marrying Mark and creating the evil version of him Levy was so afraid of. Creating an almost inverse version of Jocasta where instead of the incest and trying to stop fate bring's ruin to the family, it brought ruin to everyone else. lol

I like the idea that is what causes the incest corruption that will have her turn Mark into a warrior instead of a hero.

You can make a intense fight scene where Debbie kills Angrstrom by making use of the traps in the house left by ravager and the weapons

I was actually thinking while Debbie is the one who deals the final blow and Levy will be weakened from the battle against the whole superhero family, minus Omniman who Levy will have distraction planned for him, Levy will also have a superhero team with him. I'm currently just trying to think of the villain's who are either crazy enough or with a big enough grudge to attack Omniman's family.

You would have to be Reverse Flash petty to risk dealing with a enraged Omniman and while I could think of a couple who could work i would love some suggestions for villains the rest of the family can be busy dealing with to help Debbie kill Levy.

Deathstroke for Ravager and Trigon cultists