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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Read and long shift
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Bob is bob
Idea with Starfire. Have her be honest and proud she stole Dick from Barbara. Look past the nice girl persona to the savage alien warrior race. She broke them up and won't give him up. When Mark starts gathering his harem, Star as another primal lust driven warrior alien says to Mark he tries to dominate her, she'll burn him alive
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Bob is bob
Second idea. To make the Viltrumite war impactfull, design one or two doomed characters. Have them get close to Mark as friends or lovers. Get to know then really well. Have the reader invest in their ambitions after the war
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And kill them. Brutally ensure a tragic fall and make Mark watch and feel it. Have it be painful and unstoppable and let it burn.

Fuck everyone involved with the harem and Mark's social circle up
Andy333
Andy333
Yeah with Starfire, she knew exactly what she was doing with Dick. She's still a relatively sweet girl on the surface, she's just willing to do whatever it takes to get what she wants. Kind of want her and Blackfire to be a lot more alike than the Justice League is comfortable admitting, because remember I mentioned how if it wasn't for Omniman speaking out for her, they would've arrested her.
Andy333
Andy333
But you point also ties in with the big question I'm thinking of which is how brutal do I make the Viltrum war. Now obviously their going to be the shock as they indiscriminately butcher through civilians, can't way for Superman or Batman to respond to the train scene, but how many of the justice league should I kill off is the question.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Honestly decimate the young heroes first.

And with Blackfire you can have her and Mark bond over being genetic warriors and conquerors. Even have Blackfire fuck with him while being mostly a loyal daddy's slut
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Andy333
Andy333
I've seen that artist before, I really like them. And the futa scene with Ashara is really hot. lol.
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Bob is bob
How you like the part with Lucan and how you enjoy Lyanna's scaring the devils?
Andy333
Andy333
The part with Lucan was awesome and directly tied in with some of the stuff I said awhile back about generations of families and talents being flushed down the drain. Tywin's made himself a paper tiger and he's too arrogant to care. I kind of want to see him explode and get his handed to him by Lyanna or Robert. He's to prideful, no matter what. He's a ticking time bomb.
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I'm watching Invincible and Debbie offers to go on a tropical vacation with Mark. Cannon is fucking with me
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