Questionable Questing

But Mark right after getting almost killed by the battle beast jumps right into the Flaxon invasion a couple days later without a care in the world. He's a fucking maniac. lol. Its like no matter how hard he get hits or hurt, he just jumps right up to get more. Mark might be a hero and he does genuinely love to help people, but he's hiding a blood warrior underneath that would make Yujiro Hanma proud.

Add in dirty jokes, love of snapping back and forth with people, more rough then he appears and a moma'a body with weird amount of time spent with her

Mark likes fighting. He likes his fist hitting so hard they feel like their going to crack. He loves spitting blood out of a broken smile into someone's face. He loves fighting and killing, and he secretly hates himself for it. He doesn't want to be like his dad. he doesn't want to hurt people. But he loves it too at the same time, and no matter what he say's his dad is still his hero.

He's a mess of contradictions and its why most of the multiverse is filled with evil Marks because it's so easy for him to embrace those feelings and stop caring about what other's think. Its why he loves his mom so much, its one of the few relations without any guilt or shame involved. When he looks at her he knows no matter who he is, Mark the human or Mark the Viltrum, she'll love him.

Mark acting wild and pumped during combat. Not cruel or sadistic unless he's mad. Brutally thrilled m, enthralled and reveling in the physicality and pain and struggle

Watching show and thinking of comic. The flight for Viltrumites. Sometimes we see them dash for super speed and other times it's forgetton about. I like the one where Omiman flows so fast when he flies he explodes someone. Really exploring that rocket body flight speed dashing for Mark

My neat little explanation for those inconsistency is that it takes them a little while and a lot of space to build up the momentum to do that. they can't just go from 0 to 60. So if their stuck in a building they don't want destroyed or their trying to save someone and can't take the risk of blasting them to bits or on a time limit, it forces them to fight more normally.

Instead of immediately pulling out the super speed. Which is a very needed nerf because fucking super speed is so bullshit when you start thinking about it.

Flash has every major villain have super speed.
First chapter do you want to slowly ease readers into changes or start strong AU. Force field Superman, ninja darkness justice league level batman, Omiman looking out for the young heroes. Make it appear this is a Omiman fix it fic and Mark will be better.
To lie

I think half the fun of this story is having everyone focus on Omniman and comparing his power towards superman or wondering what his plan is, while Mark is the true villain. But at the same time it'll only take one interlude from Omniman to reveal he's going good in this one.

So I guess its a balancing act. Introducing the information about the AU as fast as possible so the reader's don't get confused, but not too much the games over in five seconds.

Here's my question. How do Mark and Debbie corrupt each other. Each adding to their villain arc and seducing the other. How does the relationship develop physically and emotionally and when do Mark and Debbie become breeding fanatics

Well, I mentioned Debbie wanting to become stronger to protect mark as well as wanting to help him deal with those new Viltrum urges that he get's really depressed over as it ruins his relationship with Amber and is sending him down a self hating spiral.

Debbie starts to enjoy their time together, it starts escalating, starts getting to be more and more openly sexual, and Debbie's body is changing and evolving more and more into something she never imagined, and now I'm stuck. lol. I know where I want to end and how it starts, its just here in the middle things get a little fuzzy.

How does she develop her self image into a Antalore Bimbo Queen? An aspect of his art I particularly feel is inspiring is the employment of vivid colors in cresting beauty. Passionate shades to express eroctic slutdom and personality.

Debbie considers being left abandoned by Mark because she's too human or becoming one of the slave mother wives she's learned about and rejects humanity

Well Debbie's need to bimbofy herself comes from some deep routed fears of aging and her husband and children abandoning her when they realizes she's not as special as them. So her becoming strong is less about feeling the need to be strong herself, but in wanting to keep up with her family and be as special as they are.

Treat the sensesations of bimboifying as amazing. The transformation improving her physical and emotional life. A better mom and a better pursuer of awakening personal passions in her. Focus on the enhancements to being super with the massive sexual need and bond to Mark being but a cherry on that

She grows to love the intense feelings she generates in Mark and he generates in her. She likes manipulating his girlfriends into a shared harem with her as queen. She likes being master bladesmen and marksmen
She loves being super and doing as she loves

Some fun idea's. Oh shoot I just remembered something. I hate interrupting, but I was working a lot on My Therapist and I'm stuck on something. Well I was stuck on two things, but I figured the first one out which was how to balance the Principle being suspicious without coming across as too antagonistic. But no the one I'm stuck on is All Might.