Questionable Questing

That story tells me you are a writer and awesome. I wanted to consider something. Mark's flight dash. How much force is being added to his attacks when his body is zooming and his punches have the energy of his rocket flight?

"Even with brusies fresh from the fight, he couldn't hide that proud smirk when he plopped tiredly into your office. You don't know if he was going to try and become friends with bomb boy like All Might said. The way he referred to him as Kaachan made you tempted to give the definition of Stockholm syndrome as homework,"
Haven't read fully yet but this was funny

I'm back. Pizza is so good. And I'm glad you caught that. I have a pretty dry sense of humor when I'm writing so I like it to sneak it every now and again and I'm happy people are noticing it.

Doing editing but got some Debbie art to share and we can talk Omiman's romantic route or the villian route of Debbie and Mark

And with Mark's dash, I can't have the full dashed get transfer over. Viltrum's can canonically fly faster than the speed of light given enough time and that's just such a bullshit power, that i'm saying no for the sake of guys like Batman not getting squished in five seconds. But Mark can still punch hard enough to rip apart buildings and make Superman bleed given enough build up.

The flying faster then speed of light is nonsense.

I love Invincible but it has the dragon ball issue of Viltrumite/Sayian master race. Allen is literally just a Viltrumite powerset and same for the Immortal

It falls into the trap a lot of comic's do where to raise the stakes you make the bad guy stronger and have bigger lasers, without really caring how it effects the world building or power scaling. Or smartly taking advantage of your preexisting power system.

Invincible did not care about detailed superhero lore worldbuilding.
For sexy, Mark and Debbie sending pics and videos to each other as their relationship evolves? At first it being her trying to stay in contact with him on dangerous missions and putrifying from there

I really like. Maybe have it be a full blown group chat with it starting with Eve and Mark's burgeoning relationship and Eve wanting to help his mom and include her in trying to help Mark deal with some of his ongoing issues, not just the sex stuff but he had a bit of a rough period after failing the flaxeon invasion and all the civilians that died, includes her in it and over time more and more girls join in.

And slowly over time the group chat turns into a harem group centered on Mark and Debbie as the leaders with Mark tempting Debbie to gather more and more power over the girls and that is how she bonds with him. Becoming a sexual tyrant

It's also a nice way to transition a normal more wholesome activity into something rougher and more sexual. Kind of mirrors Mark's viewpoint.

Girls have to start reporting they are wearing the clothes mandated for the harem and are masturbating and training their holes. Show how eager they are to be bred and keep breeding. More and more control as Mark goes Viltrumite and Debbie joins in

I also like the interaction between all the girls, the slowly forming community and how each girl is given a role to play.

Which speaking of for My Therapist, I need a good role for Mina. I already have a few good idea's but I'm always open to more.

She the purple?

She's the pink Alien queen. Which is the actual hero name she choice. lol.

First story role then porn role. So what is her personality and beliefs like

Her personality is that she's very bubbly and hyper. Likes being around people, likes being the center of attention. Not very good at more academic work or patience. But a bit of a movie nerd and has always identified more with freaks and weirdos.

Currently Miss Robin has had one secession with involved incorporating very suggestive dances into her studying, that has pushed her towards what I call the exhibition and the groomer path. Depending on what the readers choose next.