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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
They stumbled upon a second version of Nui Harmie, this time made with their DNA instead of solely Ragyo's. So in a kind of ironic sense they are genuinely related like a mother and son. It's just the father was Ragyo and also technically Ryuko. With unbeknownst to them, was meant to be a fail safe to resurrect Ragyo if she died as she also made several clones of herself and a few technique to transfer her soul.
Andy333
Andy333
But Hari's programming wasn't full finished. So he has no idea about any of it. But as the story would continue. They sexual tension between him and his family would increase, again unbeknownst to him he was an infiltration model specifically designed to spy and emit special pheromones to help control emotions and is also why their relation is overly close. Until eventually a breaking point.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'm somewhat digging this but have thoughts. Such as honing this into a original setting, working more on that secret magic warrior weapon idea, and getting more serious meat in this story. But there's potential here
Andy333
Andy333
With the breaking point resulting in a fight and the big reveal, with the family realizing just how much he's accidental mind controlled them and not caring. And Hari traveling to that abandoned lab and through muscle memories from that half finished programming, accidentally did the ritual to re-summon Ragyo.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
This is getting wild
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Personally I see Miss Dallion reborn here for where to go. Life fiber clothing and bimbo hypono super suits work perfect together.
Andy333
Andy333
Speaking of Miss Dallin, Ragyo was totally get seduced but she wasn't changing her personality either. Still an evil bitch. Still a mad scientist. She just loves her family a little too much and see's all the experimenting as just a way to protect them, and would really love if her very rebellious and willful daughters would just listen to mommy for once.
Andy333
Andy333
Which oddly enough now that I think about it, Ryuko and Satsuki are now the same age as their newly resurrected mom. Lol, makes the dynamic's between them even more crazy.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Is this the clone of Ragyo loving her family now? Something like Mercer from Prototype having his clone be the better version of him.
Andy333
Andy333
Yep, this clone has less personality issues to say the least since while the brain scan copied over the personalities and memories, it was done on a healthy normal brain in a healthy normal body rather than Ragyo's very crazed and half Frankstine and experimented on original body. And also over time this "new" Ragyo will slowly realize she is not Ragyo regardless of her memories.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ah. There are bits to change here and there. I think the living clothes symboites is a good base for a original setting if you want to do that.
Andy333
Andy333
Also the imprinting problem. Which to explain that basically every clone has this special emergency brainwashing implanted inside to make sure as soon as their awakened they imprint and automatically love who ever has a certain pheromone trigger. It was there to make sure they don't turn against their creator. Hari has that pheromone and made "Ragyo" a bit of a yandere for him.
Andy333
Andy333
And living clothes, I did want to have different costumes have different powers. Could be a pretty fun way to also slide in some other lore I had. With the monsters being an inter-dimensional pest for the lack of a better word formed from negative emotions and arrived in the Eighties, don't want to have to rewrite human history with magical girls, after scientist accidentally opened the door to that dimension.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Question. Are you keeping the OG setting, doing a original, or cheating and saying AU?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Costume colored coded powers leads to Shego which is fucking good shit. And power ranger type cool outfits
Andy333
Andy333
While the living clothes could be aliens from that dimension that want to help us and form bond specifically with children because they have strict rules about being used as weapons of war.
Andy333
Andy333
This is definitely an original setting, that's just using the characters. Although if I wanted to I'm sure I could make the costumes a very AU version of the life fibers. And yes I am in complete agreement, no color requirements. My idea rather was that each costume would have special themed attacks and powers, with for example a bikini made of seashells granting a control over water.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Okay. So we need to target the porn a bit and make it more a focus on cool. Pheromone spy boy isn't amazing. I like the idea but make it more of a greater weapon with him naturally bonded to some super tyrant overlord clothing.
Andy333
Andy333
That could work pretty well. I did plan on him slowly learning he had copies of his mom's powers, kind of hint at his artificial nature since all magical girls have their own unique abilities and having a copy kind of breaks that. Also fits perfectly with the idea that he is supernaturally attractive to a bunch of people even though it makes no sense for why.
Andy333
Andy333
The idea being even before the story starts he has a bunch of girls after him of wildly different ages. Again to try and hint at how odd he is. Kind of a deconstruction of those sloppy harem fic's where the very boring guy has a bunch of very interesting girls all chasing him.
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