Questionable Questing

Andy333

But yeah I want Naruto to be likable enough for the readers to understand why the girls feel in love and even on level like seeing him kick ass, but also ruthless enough for the readers to be scared for the girls at times.

Bob is bob

He can't let go of his love so instead of killing the traitor girl he tortures and brainwashes her when he finds out? Saskuke a head concubine and enforcer for him?

Bob is bob

Tsuande main wife?

Andy333

Tsunade is the best girl and always deserves to be head wife. Plus by focusing on her that opens up the obvious body modding potential. But no I don't know who the traitor should be. I was kind of tempted it should be Sasuke and have naruto brainwash him into his wife as punishment but I think that would be too obvious.

Bob is bob

Sakura? One of his first disciples?

Bob is bob

Having someone not a girl be the traitor like Jiyra or Kakishi?

Andy333

I'll think about it, but I'm getting a little tired. I'll sleep on it. Night. Hurrik was fun to read and I'm pretty excited where it's going to go.

Bob is bob

Sleep well and thank you

Bob is bob

Want to hear of werewolf sexual Apocalypse or more shitting on starmaker?

Bob is bob

You good?

Andy333

Yeah, I'm good. Just got tired and had a little nap after dinner. This week has been really long. How are you? And shitting on shitty porn games is always fun. But then again sexy apocalypses are also my jam.

Bob is bob

The werewolf idea is violence and sex werewolves wandering a destroyed world in search of bitches and fighting.
Starmaker has it you can steal your brother's goth slut girlfriend from him or share. And there's great story potential in the sharing of her not really being into him and more into you and how to react to that but it does nothing with it

Bob is bob

. You can seduce a rich corrupt mayor's daughter to help the guy turn her into his new wife and there's no multi phase storyline to it. Its all shallow as fuck and the art is AI by the way. Not a good sign of quality. The designs are awesome. But there is clearly no greater effort in narrative building

Andy333

You can make AI artwork, but usually anyone who uses it tries to make up for it by making, or at least saying, the story better. But goth slut girlfriend, how do you screw that up and make it boring?

Bob is bob

Not having any depth or notable character writing in dialogue or any good kinky sex scenes. It is a shallow weak game

Andy333

But there's potential for a good or even great game in there and that's why it's pissing you off. lol. I get it. Nothing worse than something that's neither mediocre or good, but somewhere in between.

Bob is bob

Porn need dedicated creative people like any other art and all the good shit goes to the fucking stupid fucking godamn ntr corruption comics

Andy333

I don't even know why ntr is so popular? I mean sure I know that a lot of people who enjoy that fetish are also willing to pay a decent amount of money for it, but that's because it's pretty niche. And if it's that niche why is every VA or porn game dedicated to it? lol.

Bob is bob

Me trying to find a proper fucking bimbo mind control master protag porn game

Bob is bob

NTR or fucking boring generic urban life of some blandshit kid or some other who gives a fuck dude in a vanilla harem