Questionable Questing

Awesome

The cookies pun was adorable

And how goes chapter one of Mark

That pun really was awesome. It's actually a problem I see with a ton of RWBY fic's where people just throw in puns since it's an easy trait they remember without actually seeing if it fits the scene or works. Way too many fic's just have the invitation chapter ending with Yang making a shitty pun and everyone staring at her awkwardly. It's such a weird trope and I was just waiting for an excuse to rant.

But Mark chapter's taking longer than it usually is because I've been busy with a lot of personal stuff, but it does seem like it's clearing up, so fingers crossed.

Pun has to fit the moment to show a unique aspect of Yang or Ruby's character and how is Mark shaping up?

Not sure how to answer that question to be honest. I have a pretty scattered approach to writing, at least in the beginning before the story is established. I'll just type at random scenes trying to get the characters right in my head, and then I'll start filling in the rest.

But speaking of that, I'm going to turn in a little early, get a head start on that writing. See if I can finish a scene so I can show you it. Night.

Write good and sleep well

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XtXbh8Z7Yt8 Watch. Made me think of a redo of Danny Phantom as a darker series. Play up more his Evil Ghost side from the movie as a shadow self that is fighting for control of his body but also shares his interests. Make Ghost Danny love his mom and sister and even his dad, but without morality

Read till 11 for school. How day?
And Maddie and Jazz Fenton variously pregnant

Day's been alright. Not much happened today to be honest. feels like a Friday and to be honest I really wish it was. lol.

Been looking around, found some art but it's not very good. Either pretty blurry or super wonky proportions. But this Jazz and Maddie is pretty cute.

I return. Maddie and Jazz Fenton pregnant or bikini pics? And any fun reading?

Very good well lit art

I've been enjoying the good wife by Stephen King lately, which I'm pretty sure I told you about. Plus I'm thinking about shopping around for a good detective novel, once I'm done with what I have now.

And this pregnant Maddie's pretty good. Mr. Potato party does a lot of good pregnancy stuff.

I also read Roadwork pretty recently too, although it was a very hard read.

Good wife? And Dreadsen files man

Good Wife is the one where the housewife finds out her husband of thirty plus years is a serial killer, it becomes a bit of a psychological horror as she tries to figure out how, but more importantly, if she should stop him considering the amount of damage it would do to her children and her life if he was caught.