Questionable Questing

Go full Coffin of Andy and Leyley, where half the story is the kid discovering this demonic power, testing and growing it, and then making a few mistakes that spiral out of control?

The Demon means well. They are really his friends. However, he thinks showing them how their mothers and sisters and crushes are whores and sluts craving use and mastery is best. He sets up what they love to fall and offers to tutor them on how to keep possession of what they want and how to whore them out.

It's a demon of lust. It's gift is emotional and social violence taught and tutored

Am back. Had to take the trash out today, almost forgot. lol.

But well meaning, yet equally manipulative demon, or demoness because currently I'm thinking Makima from Chainsaw Man, trying to convince some dumb kids to seduce their moms with their power and become the man they were destined to be. Why the interest? What makes these boys special or this town special?

Okay so that VN I told you about? AI art Makima is a character. Boys and girls. And honestly, they are the Demon's friends. That's the spin. They were the demon's friends and it loves them for it. The lewd idea is if you make your mom or sister a bimbo slut, they are going to fuck others because their super horny bitches now.

Demon doesn't see a problem with that as it just tells the kids go collar and milk them or spank them. Lust is the answer to love.

Alright, so helpful demoness, who's version of help is making every mom a lust filled addict slurping their sons cum. Who are the characters and family's? What are the demon powers and how do they work? What is something special to help drive the story or provide some conflict?

Not just their sons cum. Neighbors too. Lust is absolute. As for characters, not really sure. This is a splurt idea. Not super attached to its value unlike Bastard's Glory. How goes mark?

Been busy with Job hunting, but hopefully I will write tomorrow. Really I've been kind of busy all the time because of job hunting. Really been pushing that lately. Trying to find something I'm happy with.

I'm sorry I don't have much to show, I know you've been really excited to read it. But you know how it is. The personal stuff is more important.

We can talk about Mark and some of the idea's I have if you want. Or anything else.

No smut talk. More Pale Light

Go ahead. You're the expert here and I am the novice. lol.

Our story starts with Tristan Abscral. A boy who's father was killed because of horrible divine experiments to give him multiple God contracts driving him mad. Tristan is Contracted to Fortuna, a red dressed Goddess of Long Odds who is constantly around him but unseen by everyone else.

Tristan in book one grows to like having companions after a orphaned lifetime of criminal survival as a thief. It's interesting. As he gets closer to people we see he's naturally longing for kindness and can try to save others. He also if asked by a friend will kill virtually anyone he considers a threat through devious schemes

And he's only one of our protags.

But on the surface and before the character development, he's distrustful and greedy. Nice, thief with a heart of gold is a classic trope for a reason. How does Contessa, excuse me Fortuna lol, work? Is it like a gut feeling he gets sometimes? Weird dreams and precognition? Or is it a voice directly talking and giving vague hints or goals?

He can pull on fate to give good luck at the price of bad luck backlash. The luck hurts worse if his good luck harms someone directly

Luck powers are always fun to watch if done correctly and aren't too over powered.

Then there is Angharad. She who in spying on a guy and pretending to be into him is seduced by his milf mom noted to be a young mom and guilty about fucking her target's mom sets up a match with a girl who likes him. Her getting into horny misadventures is a repeated theme between book one and two

Girl failure lesbian spy, sounds like the MC of something from Tumblr. But it could definitely work. lol