Questionable Questing

Bob is bob

Demon doesn't see a problem with that as it just tells the kids go collar and milk them or spank them. Lust is the answer to love.

Andy333

Alright, so helpful demoness, who's version of help is making every mom a lust filled addict slurping their sons cum. Who are the characters and family's? What are the demon powers and how do they work? What is something special to help drive the story or provide some conflict?

Bob is bob

Not just their sons cum. Neighbors too. Lust is absolute. As for characters, not really sure. This is a splurt idea. Not super attached to its value unlike Bastard's Glory. How goes mark?

Andy333

Been busy with Job hunting, but hopefully I will write tomorrow. Really I've been kind of busy all the time because of job hunting. Really been pushing that lately. Trying to find something I'm happy with.

Andy333

I'm sorry I don't have much to show, I know you've been really excited to read it. But you know how it is. The personal stuff is more important.

Andy333

We can talk about Mark and some of the idea's I have if you want. Or anything else.

Bob is bob

No smut talk. More Pale Light

Andy333

Go ahead. You're the expert here and I am the novice. lol.

Bob is bob

Our story starts with Tristan Abscral. A boy who's father was killed because of horrible divine experiments to give him multiple God contracts driving him mad. Tristan is Contracted to Fortuna, a red dressed Goddess of Long Odds who is constantly around him but unseen by everyone else.

Bob is bob

Tristan in book one grows to like having companions after a orphaned lifetime of criminal survival as a thief. It's interesting. As he gets closer to people we see he's naturally longing for kindness and can try to save others. He also if asked by a friend will kill virtually anyone he considers a threat through devious schemes

And he's only one of our protags.

Andy333

But on the surface and before the character development, he's distrustful and greedy. Nice, thief with a heart of gold is a classic trope for a reason. How does Contessa, excuse me Fortuna lol, work? Is it like a gut feeling he gets sometimes? Weird dreams and precognition? Or is it a voice directly talking and giving vague hints or goals?

Bob is bob

He can pull on fate to give good luck at the price of bad luck backlash. The luck hurts worse if his good luck harms someone directly

Andy333

Luck powers are always fun to watch if done correctly and aren't too over powered.

Bob is bob

Then there is Angharad. She who in spying on a guy and pretending to be into him is seduced by his milf mom noted to be a young mom and guilty about fucking her target's mom sets up a match with a girl who likes him. Her getting into horny misadventures is a repeated theme between book one and two

Andy333

Girl failure lesbian spy, sounds like the MC of something from Tumblr. But it could definitely work. lol

Bob is bob

She's a dualist who is notablely described as muscled and curvy and likes dresses when she isn't in a dashing sword master fashion for fighting her enemies. Even ignoring her future sight Contract, she is fantastically good with a blade

Andy333

Getting sleepy. Will sleep soon. But how does the romance with the mom end up? Wait, you know what don't spoil it for me. Don't want it ruined.

Bob is bob

Read and find out

Andy333

But at the very least when the mom does find out the truth eventually, are there actual consequences for that event? Or does it get brushed over or ignored?

Bob is bob

Read