Questionable Questing

Yeah I wouldn't use this idea. I like it, but it's way too scary for anything romantic or smut related, and really it's the first one that's the deal breaker for me. I love sappy romances too much to ever go full horror writer, no matter how much I may flirt with some scary stuff in my stories. lol.

That's exactly why I'm chuckling so hard. It is so uniquely terrible I have zero clue who or why they made it. Or even what kind of audience would enjoy it. I can honestly say it's easily in the top five or three for me in the worst Star wars themed smut I've ever seen.

That's why I said if you had actual plans to do a Danny Phantom story I wouldn't design this for myself as I can go dark mixed with softer shading. This would be me writing it but if you have ambitions for a Danny Phantom AU I'll drop it. And read update

I'll be honest while I do like the setting and have a few ideas, I haven't seen Danny Fenton in so long that I would have to religiously read the wiki and a few episodes to get caught up enough on the characters, locations,and just general timeline to do it justice, and that's just not an investment of time I'm willing to do for it right now.

When mark writing this week and in that case my idea for myself works. Replace ghosts with demons ala the Warp from 40k and Danny is now half ghost demon.

Trying for tomorrow through to Friday, kind of depends on a couple things. But I'm at the part in Hurrik where he's having a vision with Ygritte and he's seeing different versions of himself, and their daughter's being offered to him return for allegiance to certain paths. Pretty trippy, but pretty cool too. And the warp? How corruptive and connected is it with the material world?

Unsure. Idea I had was that in death it is shown that emotions as the core of will dominates. The flesh is a prison. Once there is no flesh, there is only the soul in a realm of feeling and thoughts colored by feelings.

And how you liking the smut and daughter slut cultivating?

Souls floating around a realm of pure emotion like storms of colors and sound, sounds really cool. lol. Not really in a smut mood right now, to be honest, but daughter cultivating and grooming is very hot. Love the lines about how while the daughter is the focus on the throne bouncing on daddy's lap, the mom can be seen in the background massing her body and whispering in the daughter's ear.

How do you like the wolf and dragon spirits? I did a lot for those and Jackal did too. I want to know if they are cool and what you think of what they represent.
Storm of color and sound is really good.

Well they called themselves power and family, and while that was definitely a lie or at least an exaggeration, it isn't that far from the truth. The dragon isn't just power, it's ambition. It's chasing more. More power, more money, more wives, more family. It seeks more not for some nebulous goal, but the purist of it is the purpose itself. Chasing the dragon's tail so to speak.

While the wolf, is less about family and more about settling. ABout being satisfied with what you have. With staying with your pack and building that up, by breeding your wife, mother, and daughter's, lol, rather than chasing something glittery at the ends of the earth. The wolf sees the dragon as a distraction from what really matters, while the dragon sees a simpleton.

And sorry it took me awhile to answer, am busy doing laundry, cooking brownies, and looking after a very needy puppy. lol

I like that dragon chasing a tail metaphor. What do you think of their personality?

The puppy is cute and it trying to get brownies?

Puppy is currently still teething, so he's chewing on everything paper, toes, and his current obsession electrical cords. He really likes eating Iphone chargers and I caught him chewing on the cord to the vacuum earlier.

Foolish creature

La criatura tonta indeed.

But while I do see the dragon and wolf ultimentaly being feed from and partially formed by Hurrik's innermost emotions and insecurities, you can tell they are their own entities at times by some of the little mistakes they make. Like for example when the Dragon offered glittery gold as a temptation I knew right away that was a mistake. Since while Hurrik likes gold and won't turn it down.

He doesn't care about the look of it or the feel of it. He doesn't chase wealth for wealth. What he likes is the power it holds. The power to build castles, form alliances, and ultimately the freedom it offers as basically portable power. He doesn't have any sentimentality about it, so the world glittery is wasted on him. It's a nice example of a little mistake you can miss if you're not paying attention.

There is no way Jackal thought of that intentional detail but if you noticed it than he is doing something right subconsciously