Questionable Questing

More Pale Lights. Porn has grown to bore me. I like it and plan to write it but so much of it is dross. Weak shit

This may surprise you, but I do have nonporn idea's too. lol. But go on with pale lights, we're at the part where the main group has entered the watch and formed a team.

Well that is book two. Book one is a whole bunch of other stuff as Tristan and Angarahd meet only briefly a few times in book one. Tristan is with Maryam who scouts him for herself and Song is with Angarahd. Song and Maryam are friends but Maryam dislikes Anargrahd for being a Malini noble while Song thinks Tristan is a shiftless man without principles.

This is made interesting in book two as Song starts to rely on Tristan and sees how he values kindness. Because of how broken and coldly alone his world is, Tristan thinks kindness is one of the greatest treasures in the world. Which is part of the reason he bonds with a old clockmaker who joins his trial crew in book one.

Also I like your porn ideas as they are creative and have story attached to them. Others though, I refer to how fucking trope laden it is.

Your My Therapist is a delight to me and I really want to see the breeding conquest of Mark as he makes girls live a harem bimbo life.

But also their personalities and goals and them fighting the viltrumites. Quality

Well I think a big reason why I'm into pron is less the mechanical act of it, and more of that I'm really interested in exploring the psychology attached to it. Why would someone willingly be someone's slave? The proning answer is that the dick is too good. The fun one is that she's crippling alone or indecisive, then explore why she is that way and how the man takes advantage of that.

Then you can explore why the man needs a slave to begin with. He has money and power. He already has other woman. Why does he specifically need a slave. An inability to trust other people? An inability to be vulnerable even around loved ones? A desire to hurt people. Then you take that and explore the relationship. How they make each other worse or better.

Mark's dick being big, that is weak. Mark being a super strong born to war killer who gets girls horny because he is bathed in the metaphorical virility of a mantle made from the gore of his enemies, hands dripping with bone and viscera? Now that is actual fucking good seduction.

All of that is the fun part to me. The introduction to seemingly normal or put together characters, and the unraveling as the closer and more intimate they become with their lovers the more you see the broken glass shards hiding underneath and see why they have the fetish and desires. The sex is the introduction to all that.

Broken glass shards. Good language. And more Pale Lights? I do like that book series and in general with porn, there's never anything except big dick. Given the infinite power to write phermone abusing raping werewolves, savage raiders, vicious mafia sons. To make monsters and heroes. People default to vanahila or wimps. For fuck's sake

More pale lights. How does it's magic system work? And yeah porn, I feel like has been getting a little better in the last couple years. If only because the vastness of the internet allows fetish and communities to form that couldn't ever in the past. But that also comes with a flood of some of the lowest effort slop that makes finding anything good harder than ever. Even if it is out there.

AI has not helped and ontop of this consider how little story matters and when it is good, it is enslaved to tropes. People write porn to get off, not to make stories. And never to have a dominant cool interesting protag. God forbid. Or you get a inhuman monster like in Crowned Conquest.

So there are Contracts with Gods and Signs. Want to hear of Contracts or signs and witchcraft first?

Contracts. Sound the most interesting.

You would be wrong
Contracts are made with Gods. Often the Contract is designed in a way to feed a God. Fortuna is the goddess of Tristan and she will make it so when he takes extra good luck, he gains in return bad luck.

The stronger the Contract, the more often the price will be harsher. However, evidence in the story suggests for people loved by their gods like Tristan they'll get a fair or reduced price. One girl who could sense the most likely cause of her death for the next three hours only had to make tiny shrines every year or so. Contractors are not priests. Those are different. We don't know a lot about High Priests yet.

We have seen two examples of their power and it is greater then a normal Contract. Contracts in general are limited magic. Once in a while you get a flaming sword that at the price of eating away at who holds it will burn and cut everything, but more often than not its a minor gift like superhuman thunder claps. Or knocking someone asleep with a touch. Greater magic is for Gloam signs and witchcraft.

Well don't leave me in suspense. What's witchcraft? lol

Signs and witchcraft are the same but different. Both use Gloam, both draw symbols in the air with it. However, Signs tend for what I would call greek style logical metaphysics. It aims for a science. To understand principles. Gloam is shaped with its properties in mind.