Questionable Questing

Yeah, that one was just fucking rough. I don't know what the author had against her, but God damn. I thought I was reading some edgy knock off when I saw it the first time. Same with Mirko getting three of her limbs blasted off. It just felt needlessly edgy and cruel to add some stakes to a story that increasingly felt like it had none.

Fortunately I can go ahead and spoil it for you. lol. But where not having that in my story. I'm not going to say it's impossible for some characters to die, but it would take the readers doing some pretty stupid stuff for that to happen. Especially right now, since Miss Midnight's a pro hero and All for One's trying to stay under the radar. The legitimate death risk comes later.

And why did the story have no stakes?
Also, milf mind control corruption changing their outfits to slutty

And by then Miss Midnight is already pushing herself out of her semi formal retirement thanks to Miss Robin's prodding and her powers going to get a little bit of a buff from canon thanks to the specialized training she's doing. So if she does get taken out, it'll be a much harder fight.

Mutant Babies

More like this with clothing and hair changes

But I think the lack of stakes really hit when they asspulled Bakugo coming back from getting his heart blown out. And of course for a Japen supposedly being a country at war against literal terrorist armies at this point of villains, why wasn't their any guns? Why weren't there any army units? Why were the heroes still talking about the villains surrendering?

I'm not saying Izuku or even any of the kids should ever start murdering people. Beyond maybe the team arguing about it and refusing to stoop to that level. But if you wanted a great way to not only increase the tension in the story but also add some moral dilemmas and political commentary MHA was so fond of, having all the pro heroes getting increasingly brutal and angry towards the villains would've been perfect.

Really hammer home this is a war. There are a lot of casualties, and every day Izuku fails to stop All for One is another day where they slowly win. Not in the strategic way, but in forcing all the heroes down to his level and corrupting them. All for One was supposed to be a master manipulator, show him actually doing that instead of having a bunch of meaningless monologues.

Didn't Best Jeanist have to save Bakugo and die himself?

Did MHA really want political commentary or wad it as I think always a side bit

Yep Best Jeanist literally turned himself into a heart. Somehow and since he was a stronger heart it gave Bakugo a power up too. lol. Sounds like a meme. I turned myself into a pickle! I turned myself into a heart, Morty!

But with the political commentary, I think the author wanted too but was held back by the stupid amounts of success and was either getting reeled in by his publishers or he felt pressured to make something that rocked the boat less. All I know is that anytime he did an interview it looked like he was seconds away from running, since he hated the attention so much. So somewhere in the middle probably.

It had to stay classically Shonen. The meta liberation army bit threw me for a loop and Milfs being corrupted art?

Also Best Jeanist is the heart? Thats wacky

I like this one too. A little plain, but the piercing and the subtle face changes sell it for me.

The face change is good. Got more?

Pregnancy specific ones or more general Milf ones? And hows your writing?

Did tiny bit last Thursday. Milf ones

This one is really great, but I wish the writing was legible.