Questionable Questing

Is her character interesting and how was Kelsey?

And with Meli in particular, she's going through a pretty rough time. Not just with going from one of the strongest magic users on the planet to basically a nobody in a couple of years, but also from what it sounds like R'hllors been struggling with the transition and the number of new gods on the playing field as well.

And you combine all that with being forcibly exposed to a brand new continent away from everything she's known filled with new religions, it was bound to cause some introspection even in the most paranoid fanatic. Plus I think she's likes Hurrik and his wildling toy a lot more than she'll ever admit so it's been forcing her to really think about what he wants and what she herself lacks.

She's not taking the everyone has magic now so I'm not God's special girl well

She acts more like a bratty little sister screaming that her brother won't pay attention to her, than the supposed few hundred year old sorcerer she claims to be. lol.

I like that. Easy to humanize. Question, you want to chat your Hazbin Hotel AU?

Sure, if you're in a Hazbin mood. It's been awhile since I've focused on it so I might be a little rusty though.

So what was trouble last time?

What trouble?

You said you didn't like first chapter result

2 very devoted daughters.

Oh, I thought we already talked about this a couple times. I rushed in too quickly and didn't give enough focuses to the action, emotion, or world building needed for a satisfying first chapter.

I like Charlie best. Would you have a story where Charlie or Lucifer is protag

Charlie is the best girl. If I do any Hazbin idea, she is either going to be the MC or the main love interest.

One of my favorite pictures of her.

I sleep and I love her smile in the pregnancy one

But when Hazbin first came out, and I saw the pilot on Youtube not Amazon, I had this idea of Charlie getting summoned by some random cult in some sort of death world like 40k or even remenet, and in-between trying to build a thriving town and protect her people from monstrous hordes out of a couple of crazy cultist and a shack or two.

She has to deal with how the more they worship her, the more her body and mind seem to be changing to suit what they want. But sleep well, we will talk more tomorrow.

Talk about this more tonight and milfs being corrupted into incest

Charlie's personality is perfect. I love her base character. The but here is that personality while great, it doesn't have any bits from being the princess of hell. Its not adapted to her social circumstances and upbringing. Which is a loss of potential in my view but I want more fantasy drama and less tumbler oc broadway from Hazbin