Questionable Questing

Charlie's personality is perfect. I love her base character. The but here is that personality while great, it doesn't have any bits from being the princess of hell. Its not adapted to her social circumstances and upbringing. Which is a loss of potential in my view but I want more fantasy drama and less tumbler oc broadway from Hazbin

I kind of like the idea that a younger version of Charlie was a little colder and more formal, her falling back onto her parents training to cover up her own awkwardness and insecurities. But as she got stuck on the idea of redeeming hell, and secretly fulfilling her desire to see her family fixed, she had to specifically teach herself how to open up and willingly allow herself to get embarrassed.

I just really love the idea that she used to be the scary ice queen princess but once she learned nobody liked her and that she had no real friends,that was that big push that caused her to embrace being happy all the time and reject all the social games her mom or dad played.

Gives her a tiny bit of a edge while having her remain mostly pure as can be. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mYqq239SKdM I really like things like this that point out she is a natural born arch demon

I love the way her aura or soul, whatever, was trailing around her and caressing Alabaster neck when she threatened him. I love when magic is treated like magic and can play fast and loose with certain physical rules.

I like the idea of Charlie's soul being this monstrous figure of fire and shadow, beautiful but terrible. Vaggie too was fucked over. She's a demon slaying fallen angel and nothing is done with this. Absolutely no badass rage montage when Charlie is hurt or threatened. Fuck it. Vaggie should have been going berserk on Adam after he bled Charlie

What we should've had.

Vaggie the demon slayer. But for Charlie, have Lucifer and Lilith love her but for Lucifer, some bits from canon are fine but pilot Lucifer was menacing. Fanon Lucifer can be too edgy but in those edges are pieces of gold. A powerful dominating king of Hell trying to force it into a hedonistic heaven in a statement against god, doing this project in his Pride Ring of favorite sinners since the dawn of time

He just needs a hint of Makima, if you know what I mean. He genuinely loves Charlies and wants the best for her, but he's not above manipulating her for his own goals or because he thinks he knows what's best for her, Kind of mirror his relationship with his brothers in that way, where eventually Charlie will reach her breaking point with him and have to decide if she oppose him or not.

Makima is? And Charlie summoned by cultists in a cyberpunk setting? Some scifi 40k inspired world?

Oh Chainsawman fandom idea of Makima who isn't a total evil monster

Makima's the control devil, and main antagonist of volume one, from Chainsaw Man. Which basically in Chainsaw Man, demons are formed from people's fears. So you have various devils of those fears, like guns, swords, hunger, you get the idea. With Makima getting captured and groomed by the Japanese government from a very early age when she merged with a human girl, for spoiler reasons.

With demons having the ability to possess humans and mix their personalities and powers into creatures called fiends. But back to Makima, she basically grew up in a laboratory being taught the world view that if she's a useful assets she gets food, security, and life, and if she isn't then she gets killed. With one of the only fond memories she has, is getting pieces of candy if she got test questions right.

And this toxic worldview, of kindness only being given if it gives you something in return, along with the power to physically brainwash and control someone if they view her as their superior is why she's such a terrifying threat. She doesn't threaten or hurt people for no reason, she deliberately tries to be their friend and push or prod them along until they see her as perfect. And then she has control over you.

I read volume one of Chainsawman and had my heart destroyed. Back to Charlie, 40k inspired scifi death world summons Charlie who brings Vaggie with her?

Something like that. I kind of want Charlie to be in some kind of feudal society or atleast one with the concept of nobles and authority, so a 40k world actually works great here, specifically because I want Charlie to be worshiped. I want her to not only struggle with controlling and trying to guide her cult, but also slowly grow to love it and love the feeling of being worshiped.

And a feudal society works best with that concept because it means a good chunk of the population is already primed and ready for the idea of surrendering to someone greater. If that makes sense. Plus I think Charlie, the demon girl, clashing with a society even more chaotic and despotic then hell could be fun too.

And grounds the setting into a hard cyberpunk scifi style so you can make her magic stand out more. Also, pictures of milfs being corrupted into inbreeding.
And I said 40k based. So, what ya like about 40k's ideas that you could split into its own thing

Since we're talking about Warhammer

But I like the 40k idea specifically because it forces Charlie out of her comfort zone and to be more proactive. Since the big issues is that even outside of her own setting she's so powerful not a lot can physically threaten her, especially if a lot of her friends are following along, and she can be pretty passive as well.