Questionable Questing

I like the idea of Charlie's soul being this monstrous figure of fire and shadow, beautiful but terrible. Vaggie too was fucked over. She's a demon slaying fallen angel and nothing is done with this. Absolutely no badass rage montage when Charlie is hurt or threatened. Fuck it. Vaggie should have been going berserk on Adam after he bled Charlie

What we should've had.

Vaggie the demon slayer. But for Charlie, have Lucifer and Lilith love her but for Lucifer, some bits from canon are fine but pilot Lucifer was menacing. Fanon Lucifer can be too edgy but in those edges are pieces of gold. A powerful dominating king of Hell trying to force it into a hedonistic heaven in a statement against god, doing this project in his Pride Ring of favorite sinners since the dawn of time

He just needs a hint of Makima, if you know what I mean. He genuinely loves Charlies and wants the best for her, but he's not above manipulating her for his own goals or because he thinks he knows what's best for her, Kind of mirror his relationship with his brothers in that way, where eventually Charlie will reach her breaking point with him and have to decide if she oppose him or not.

Makima is? And Charlie summoned by cultists in a cyberpunk setting? Some scifi 40k inspired world?

Oh Chainsawman fandom idea of Makima who isn't a total evil monster

Makima's the control devil, and main antagonist of volume one, from Chainsaw Man. Which basically in Chainsaw Man, demons are formed from people's fears. So you have various devils of those fears, like guns, swords, hunger, you get the idea. With Makima getting captured and groomed by the Japanese government from a very early age when she merged with a human girl, for spoiler reasons.

With demons having the ability to possess humans and mix their personalities and powers into creatures called fiends. But back to Makima, she basically grew up in a laboratory being taught the world view that if she's a useful assets she gets food, security, and life, and if she isn't then she gets killed. With one of the only fond memories she has, is getting pieces of candy if she got test questions right.

And this toxic worldview, of kindness only being given if it gives you something in return, along with the power to physically brainwash and control someone if they view her as their superior is why she's such a terrifying threat. She doesn't threaten or hurt people for no reason, she deliberately tries to be their friend and push or prod them along until they see her as perfect. And then she has control over you.

I read volume one of Chainsawman and had my heart destroyed. Back to Charlie, 40k inspired scifi death world summons Charlie who brings Vaggie with her?

Something like that. I kind of want Charlie to be in some kind of feudal society or atleast one with the concept of nobles and authority, so a 40k world actually works great here, specifically because I want Charlie to be worshiped. I want her to not only struggle with controlling and trying to guide her cult, but also slowly grow to love it and love the feeling of being worshiped.

And a feudal society works best with that concept because it means a good chunk of the population is already primed and ready for the idea of surrendering to someone greater. If that makes sense. Plus I think Charlie, the demon girl, clashing with a society even more chaotic and despotic then hell could be fun too.

And grounds the setting into a hard cyberpunk scifi style so you can make her magic stand out more. Also, pictures of milfs being corrupted into inbreeding.
And I said 40k based. So, what ya like about 40k's ideas that you could split into its own thing

Since we're talking about Warhammer

But I like the 40k idea specifically because it forces Charlie out of her comfort zone and to be more proactive. Since the big issues is that even outside of her own setting she's so powerful not a lot can physically threaten her, especially if a lot of her friends are following along, and she can be pretty passive as well.

She specifically tries diplomacy first and has no desire to rule outside of her own little hotel. So the situation outside has to be specifically fucked up enough for her to actively want to conquer, fight back, and even consider the idea of cooperating with and eventually leading a full blown cult dedicated to her. Plus the nature of 40k would also cause some pretty fun character growth and introspection for her.

More pics for the smut throne. and I say 40k inspired. For creativity I suggest not doing 40k directly. Doing a based on 40k and taking from other things and building up from there but keep the setting of the story small at first. Focus in on the tiny so you can expand over time and not be overwhelmed.

I'm personally fighting the urge to say how much I fucking love Chaos Sorcerers and psychic magic rituals and all that occult trappings for things like Thousand Sons and Runepriests. Its great they are in the scifi world

Love the color in this one. Just in general good art and not just smut.

The flames around the edges and the variation in the skin tone and sweat. Chef's kiss. But yeah, I think one of the biggest things that makes 40k so great is that combination of classical fantasy elements into a Sci Fi world and not having either side conflict or compete. Too many stories, looking at Star Wars in particular, have this weird obsession with being embarrassed with one side and ignoring it.