Questionable Questing

Entire lines and hordes of people patiently, begging, crying, and waiting for their turn in fucking her. Girls putting masks on that make themselves look just like her. Guys moaning at the sheer possibility of her using them as a rug or step. Stuff like that.

A utopiaic family cult?

Okay the girls putting on masks to look like her is creepy and not in the good way

The worshipping Charlie bit is limited as far as fetish goes. I think an adjustment is in order but if you like the idea go with it

I kind of want it to be a little creepy and wrong. This is 40k after all. But I mentioned how she put a little bit of her essence in her followers? If she puts in too much her soul is too big and too powerful, she actually starts taking over their minds and bodies.

With a potential bad end, and something she'll have visions of and be terrified of, is that she uses her powers too much and completely erases all their souls. Leaving a cult of only Charlie, like the borg or some kind of Hivemind that spreads across the entire galaxy. Since nothing can be as perfect as she is. But like I said a bad end, and is something she hates and wants to avoid.

Personally not my taste but your story. I'd go for more happy bimbo stepford route

But it's something the Chaos gods are trying to push. Not because they want her to win, but because they want to bring out the worst in people. It's what they're trying to down with the Emperor by pushing him into a god of order, and is sort of the same thing they want for Charlie. An internal enemy of monotone to fight their empire of blood and color. Everything versus nothing for all of eternity.

But you're right. Charlie is not going to be sleeping with millions of people. So she'll have her favorites that are all collectively married to her, with heroes and future generals going through a ceremony to marry her once they enter her inner circle. Where as everyone else at the bottom will have their own families and clans, with Charlie as the example of the way a husband or wife should act.

The everything is Charlie bit not feeling it. If you strongly feel for do it but otherwise I would chat with you about changes

What changes?

Having this everything be charlie bit is as far as sexy goes not amazing. You could try instead of that the perfect orgy community. Worshipping Charlie yes but as a symbol of love and heavenly bliss. Charlie as a Goddess of peace and joy, joy being sexed out bdsm hedonistic bimbofication

More drawing from a stepford happy wholesome pretty colors homes hiding dens of twisted debuachery.

Fits more of her orgnaization personality with her dream for the Hotel. Now apply it to a city and than a planet.

I might go for something in the middle of the 2. I do think the stepford wife aesthetic fits her more, but I also think the Borg theme fits her main sin of pride.

The borg idea can mix with the stepford wife style. Having people put on masks of her is just not fun. A person isn't as interesting in my opinion as an ideal. Charlie's colors, her words, her style. Not exact replica. Charlie as a demon mother jesus to the people of the world who grow to think both Chaos and the Imperium are corrupt and she is the pure source of light in the Warp.

Very her father's daughter as the anti light against the gods

I like and I sleep. Getting tired. But I do like where this is headed.

I must sleep. Discuss ideas for Charlie further later. Your thought of her doing the masks is creepy creative but for porn tastes it is yuck. I have my thoughts and if you want them I'll share them, otherwise do what you like

Essay writing tonight. Maybe talk later maybe not