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Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Or of Bal Gore-Strewn. The son of a defeated pair who led a rebellion and was placed in a group of ritual sacrifices only to find friends. Friends slain by others of that group of prospects to become God-Sworn champions. Of how in vengeance for his friends death he broke his heart and mercy
Andy333
Andy333
Lots of vengeance and blood, two pretty common themes. Is that what your going for? About how the circle of violence isn't good for anyone? Or more about how ambitions lead to bodies and war? And with the daughter of the Stalwart knight, what are her reasons for her ambitions?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Her uncle encouraged dreams of conquest and glory for her house abs advised using her friends to gather their houses forces.

Now he loves her and he liked the friends. Still convinced her to start a war in their home kingdom.

The main theme is nihilism vs idealism
Andy333
Andy333
What's going to represent Nihilism and how are you going to portray its flaws?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Bal's moral chaos. He's a berserking werewolf warrior man who also tries to teach the son and daughter of a random soldier he killed how to survive in this harsh world and better themselves. He sings and dances while offering kind words and in another scene bites out throats.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Power, glory, honor, kin and friends. He lives to be happy. His small circle of a viewpoint pushes him along a cycle of conflict. There will never not be a danger to his life or loved ones because he's the asshole burning cities to the ground for a King
Andy333
Andy333
Does Bal care if his "Kids" get killed or hurt? Or does he just not know how to do anything else? I mean like you said, you act as the King's personal enforcer and Gestop agent and sooner of later people are going to want to settle some scores with you.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Got more milf Charlie?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He does. He thinks everything must be resolved personally and doesn't begrudge the son and daughter of the man he killed wanting him dead. He can't say sorry as he refuses to be ashamed of his feats. He lives a violent strong interesting life. And it is his.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Beneath all that is the fact of something that never left him. When his friends died, when he slaughtered the ones who killed them and they begged as his friends did to spare the others of their personal group, the only thing that mattered was the kingdom got a hero. A monster slayer, a army destroyer. Good and bad meant nothing to greatness.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He resents that. The kings and Queen's, gods and spirits, warriors and magi and farmers. They wanted exalted violence. That's what made him worthy.

So he'll be a figure worthy of terrible beautiful song. A man for epics and their tragedy. They'll know his name
Andy333
Andy333
What makes it sad is that he just as much a slave to the system as those royals he mocks, and either he knows and doesn't want to acknowledge it or he physically can't allow himself to admit that.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
He can't allow. He's sunk deep into the fuck you got mine inner ego and self empowerment to the point of missing greater picture. Sleep
Andy333
Andy333
Andy333
Andy333
Sleep well.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like the big fluffy breasts
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Inbreeding daughters art and how you?
We talking Ygrite's growing hedonism tonight
Andy333
Andy333
I am currently sleeping off a food coma from Pizza night. How was your day? And Ygritte, are we talking about her growing list of partners and increasing control over Hurrik's growing harem? Or the new spells and potions she's been dosing her body with?
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