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Questionable Questing

Andy333
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They don't come out and say it, but either the angels or some kind of interference with the EVA's is causing Shinji to become more confident and slowly take Rei and Asuka underneath his wings. Features a believable turn towards good by Gendo, a Asuka that's just as bitchy as canon but can't help but come to love Shinji being master, and some pretty good emotional parts from everyone involved for a smut story.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Neat. Got anything else as good?
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Features a canon Jaune arc, as well as Glynda and Pyrrha, being forced to get married because his magical OP semblance kicks in at the worst possible moment. Very much taking the stereotypical Porn idea and instead using the real characters to see how they would respond to it. A pretty slow burn and Jaunes not the kind of guy to take advantage of his powers, but it has a very sweet/believable romance.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How's the corruption angle, explored at all for seduction?
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It's a pretty slow burn like I said, the author is definitely going for realism, but he's definitely pushing the idea of Jaune slowly becoming a master and slowly growing into his semplence. With other girls potentially getting added to his harem, and Ruby getting a guaranteed spot after this current arc rolls by.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Interesting.
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I'll take a look around for some more stories and recommendations. You going to bed soon?
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Bob is bob
Not soon but in a bit like 1
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Well, do you have any Master story recommendations? Lol.
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Bob is bob
Honestly porn is shit. You get like one gem out of a thousand like this one where Jaune has a semblance to mind control people with his words that had Glynda go crazy for him and the rest is varying levels of style is good but storytelling is cardboard
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I get that. lol. You'll notice the two suggestions I gave you weren't because of the porn, but because of the believable characters.
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Sleep well. Will write for a little while myself, before I go to bed.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Always make time to write during the week and write enough to make progress on stories
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How writing go and mind control corruption.
Or breast and ass expansion
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Pretty decent actually. I have the first sex scenes, although put an asterisk next to it because there will be a couple spicy scenes before that, halfway finished. I am also half way done with the intro, although it's pretty exposition heavy so I might add some more stuff before or after. We shall see. Maybe something like the cultist perspective when they summoned Charlie?
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Bob is bob
Why are they summoning her, what hopes and pains animate this choice? From social conditions to supernatural dangers
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With the cultist I'm thinking idiots that got in way over their head. I saw this horror movie recently, incredibly mediocre but the ending was just amazing. All these smug cultist through the movie just shitting themselves once they realize they really did summon satan, i'll pull up the scene real quick if I can find it.
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Bob is bob
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More.
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