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  1. CantFocusOneThing

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    She failed to cancel her angling and scheming otherwise Sky would have been cook it was indeed very close. I love it how Sky perfoming her trick matched so well with Shirogane style. 2nd for the first time is not bad just don't fall into comfort with it and it will be fine.
  2. lordanl

    Stellar Echo: Heart of the Myst
    Threadmarks: VOL 3 Chapter 92: I really shouldn’t have come.

    ...hair. She couldn't help but roll her eyes for a moment. But quickly, the beautiful knight brought her hands to her waist and ordered in a serious tone before darting after Tomás. "Let's go all out, Hiyori-sama." *** You can support me on patreon.com/lordanl and get up to 25 advanced chapters.
  3. Jubjub3000

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Can't see why shiro would sing while running, could see her praising her competition though, she seems like shes practices good sportsmanship! Would be funny if she ended up 2nd in every single run during this, in every run, 2nd every time. Yes i know she isn't in every run. Shiros stealth...

  4. With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    I was going to say that they feel too much like natural people to me (specifically I think of the bit about how high caste dominators enjoy evil science in particular, they aren’t just indifferent to suffering, which seems unnecessary in a science drone species) but I suppose it’s possible some...
  5. GarfRed

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I would like to an Interlude POV from the other umas and trainers. Would like to see their feelings and observations of Shirogane Could also be the fact that Shirogane was talking at all after running the amount of distance she had run. Also could be genuinely from the compliment she said to...

  6. My Star Spangled Invisi-Gal [MCU/Dispatch]

    thanks for the chapter Continue on Cheers!
  7. Jaertin

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Seems to be a mistake here? GW wishes them luck, then SS asks her why she's not wishing them luck.
  8. Radiant Knight

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I half figured Sky was surprised that Shiro 'snuck up' on her. Remember horses literally have tunnel vision in races, and Umas definitely get it during races, so Shiro suddenly 'appearing' beside her would be a huge shock even if intellectually she knew she was there.
  9. Arc-on-Fire

    General chat thread

    My fiance, after we promised to marry each other, said that she wanted to have kids, It wasn't a one time thing either, whenever she had rare bouts of prolonged health, she would speak about it. As she sat there at the table I'd carved from scrap-wood, staring out a cracked window with a smile...
  10. ioriangel

    This Saturday extravaganza interlude. By the way, I am working on a ATLA fic which is Patreon...

    This Saturday extravaganza interlude. By the way, I am working on a ATLA fic which is Patreon only. Komand’r 23 is also being worked on, so I will soon update the public chapters. This year, I am trying my hand at consistent updates for some of my series.
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  11. Jubjub3000

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I wonder what would have happened if shiro tried to enter every single race? Thank you for the chapter
  12. manatherindrell

    Would you bang the avatar above you?

    Your Honor, she was clearly asking for it dressed like that.
  13. Phrux

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I'm more interested in races from the perspective of people who aren't Shiro, tho this was good at setting expectations. Other Shiro-pov races should be when she has significant character growth during a race.
  14. Jaertin

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I liked it, and would be happy to see more like it. There will probably be races in the future that will warrant being skipped or glossed over, because they don't do much for the story, but others which are meaningful for Shirogane should be shown in full or at least in part. You kind of...
  15. Artalam

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I'm guessing this was caused by Sky being utterly baffled that Shirogane could just casually chat after running that long
  16. manatherindrell

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Go for gap moe and make her a trolling gremlin during final sprints. "I fucked your mom last night." "Hey, that cloud looks a donut." "You really need to start brushing your teeth before school." "Oh my God, did you see Tamamo Cross and Oguri Cap kissing by the bathrooms!?" "Your shoe's...

  17. On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Someone has to point out her subtle campaign of psychological warfare on the othet racers. -Spooks half the locker room, leaving them all scared to even be near her. -Talks about the consequences of doing poorly in the tryouts with the one who is already the favourite to win, while clearly...
  18. MacrossRides

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    Good race. Really showed how unnerving Shirogane can be. Talking while sprinting. If she ever figures out how advantageous that could be will she start belting out marching songs?! Could be great branding even if dhe doesnt win.

  19. On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    I like the race! And while it seems unintentional on your part having her lose this race is an interesting story beat, once again reinforcing both her weaknesses and her lack of real desire to win. She’s less upset about losing then she is about everyone else becoming gatekeepers fodder
  20. SiegfriedisPower

    On a Pale Horse (Umamusume/Youjo Senki)

    In Umamusume fanfics, besides the ones where the protagonist always wins, which races the author choses to win or lose is always an interesting element.
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