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A Good Girl Quest

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Hello everyone! This is a first foray into writing a quest for us in order to test our writing...
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Chapter 1: Voices in her head
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    Hello everyone! This is a first foray into writing a quest for us in order to test our writing skills, so hopefully this works out. So the rules as follows are: Every post, when Riley asks a question, you will be allowed to vote. What you vote on will influence what Riley does afterwards (duh). You can also provide input and give her knowledge and ideas for what to do with her power, all in order to get to the Golden Ending. Also, this first chapter will be short, because we need to start somewhere. When the second chapter has passed we will have enough to post the first as a coherent chapter.






    Riley grinned, rubbing her hands together as she approached the room that her two new patients were in. Jack was super nice to let her play with them rather than just disposing of them. So, walking into the room and looking at the unconscious heroine and villain she tilted her head. "What to start with......?"

    She took a long look around as her power started feeding her ideas. Everything from a simple brainwashing to a full on body merge.

    She looked at the cute brown haired mouse themed hero. Stripped down to make operating easier, as well as staring at the villain that had hired them,trying to decide what to do with them.



    Riley finished with the work she was doing and was covered in blood.She started releasing special bacteria to sanitize the room and sat back to closely monitor her patient(s). The others knew not to disturb her while she was working, so she had plenty of time to sit around and think of other things. "What to do...... I don't know what to do… voices? Do you have any ideas?"



    Riley was sitting down eating ice cream as she looked up at Jack who was staring at her oddly. He hadn't asked any questions, so she continued to eat her ice cream. It was orange sherbet flavored! Jack continued to stare at her and it was starting to make her uncomfortable. "Uncle Jack? What do you want?"



    So! You've made it this far. Even though it isn't that long, we hope you enjoyed it. Votes below! Also forewarning if you break the setup for the questions your vote may not be counted. Also, once again apologizes for the shortness of the actual story post.

    ~x~ Voting section ~x~

    What should Riley's primary focus be while making art from Mouse Protector and Ravager?

    [ ] [Art] Full body merge (the canon option).
    [ ] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.
    [ ] [Art] Body enhancements.
    [ ] [Art] Write in.

    Riley has some downtime while monitoring her patient(s). What should she do while she waits?
    [ ] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.
    -[ ] [Downtime] Suggested discussion topic
    [ ] [Downtime] Prepare further fun toys for later.
    -[ ] [Downtime] Make some plagues.
    -[ ] [Downtime] Make some spider bots.
    -[ ] [Downtime] Write in.
    [ ] [Downtime] Write in.

    Uncle Jack is looking at Riley oddly. What do you want her to know or do about it?
    [ ] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
    [ ] [Jack] Say nothing.
    [ ] [Jack] Write in.
     
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    • [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.

    Riley has some downtime while monitoring her patient(s). What should she do while she waits?
    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.

    Uncle Jack is looking at Riley oddly. What do you want her to know or do about it?
    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Body enhancements.
    [X] [Art] Attempted power swap or mixing.

    [X] [Downtime] Prepare further fun toys for later.
    -[X] [Downtime] Make a beautiful pony to ride! Or something that looks like one, at least from far away.

    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.

    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.

    Riley has some downtime while monitoring her patient(s). What should she do while she waits?
    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.

    Uncle Jack is looking at Riley oddly. What do you want her to know or do about it?
    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.

    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.

    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Body enhancements.
    [X] [Art] Attempted power swap or mixing.

    [X] [Downtime] Prepare further fun toys for later.
    -[X] [Downtime] In a fit of inspiration, make mouse-themed spider bots. Or spider-themed mouse-bots.

    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.

    Riley has some downtime while monitoring her patient(s). What should she do while she waits?
    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.

    Uncle Jack is looking at Riley oddly. What do you want her to know or do about it?
    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.
     
    [X] [Plan] Onee-sama knows best!

    [X] [Art] Brainwashing and enslavement.
    -[X] [Art] Merge both together and make them as cutesy as possible.

    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.
    -[X] [Downtime] Talk to them about how they will be a great little sister to her.

    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.

    Riley needs a little sis~

    Edit: Thought the merging was a given, but specifying is probably better.
     
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    [X] [Downtime] Talk to/with her patient(s) about various things.
    -[X] MP was one of the original wards right? Talk to her about being a child cape, and how it sets you apart from people who triggered older.
    [X] [Jack] He's a social thinker and has noticed that Riley is acting differently.

    [X] [Art] Brainwash Mouse Protector, give her some bodily enhancements, and alter her so she can be your new little sister! Only a very tiny bit littler then you, you're kinda short. Ravager is much more boring, play around with her brain and try to transfer her power over to MP. Hey, it works for Butcher and your voices are helpful, so that's just be dandy!

    I want to go full on with Mouse Protector. In my option, she'd still have MPs personality, but be modified into a little girl loyal to us. Hopefully with Ravagers power. And if she hears Ravagers voice in her head, ehh, Bonesaw can probably suppress it just enough so that it doesn't get in the way.
     
    I'm sorry I've currently forgotten about this but I'm a sucky writer and my brain sucks even more.
     
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