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A Wannabe Researcher's Attempt to Create a Magitech Empire - A Semi-SI's Multicross Journey

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by MasterG, Feb 16, 2017.

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    MasterG

    MasterG Making the rounds.

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    The Main Character is a Semi-Self Insert because while he acts much in the same way as I would, he has been changed in order to maintain my privacy

    1. Now You See Me
    2. Transcendence
    3. Treasure Planet
    4. Subnautica
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  2. NakedFury

    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    Couldn't read more than a few chapters of Vexmaster's story because they started as crap and didn't look like there was gonna be any effort to correct them.
    Cruel to be Kind has the most stupid person ever as a main character so I stopped reading by chapter three.

    Does Baccano immortality by reversing time in your body so its not really healing but more like reversing it to a state before the cut? At least thats how you explained it.

    Would it not be better to take a Star Trek replicator or just steal one of their ships?

    Voyager is empty on the first two episodes and would be possible to steal.
     
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  3. MasterG

    MasterG Making the rounds.

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    Simular to that yeah, though Jack's version allows for genetic modification so he can still modify his body but should he be hurt the damage will be reversed.

    Thing is, I haven't seen any form of Star Trek media beyond the new movies and I don't do universes I dont have knowledge of if I havent done enough research on, so Star Trek is a bust at least for a while.
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    :eek:

    thats my face right now.
     
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    MasterG Making the rounds.

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    Why's that? Is it because I've never seen Star Trek?
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    yes. people usually see them at least once.

    except my friend but she hasnt even seen a star wars movie outside the two new ones.
     
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    ... I've only ever seen the first and half of the last prequel and episode 7. Like I know the story of all the movies (due to the internet, Robot Chicken and Family Guy) but I've just never seen them (original 3 Star Wars movies), only small segments
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    heretic!

    :eek:

    heretic. How can you have proper space scifi dreams of space wizards and space battles without ever seeing those movies?
     
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    ....I watch Guren Laggan where space wizards have planet sized space battles with huge Mecha
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    couldnt get into guren laggan.

    as for mecha I did watch a few of the gundam series but I found some of them ridiculous. too much plot armor or characters with ridiculous fashion sense

    I did watch Legend of the Galactic Heroes which had insane levels of fleet battles
    Glass Fleet anime also had crazy fleet battles
     
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    I've only ever seen that one mecha anime so I'm not that knowledgeable about them. Anyway do you have any criticism over the chapters or are they good so far?
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    They are certainly unique and each of shows a little bit more of the abilities of Leah without going into huge infodumps.

    Your character also isnt acting like an idiot going around and telling his lifes story and all his and Leahs secret except to that Baccano Demon and that was because mind reading is a bitch.
    I did like that your character simply stole the chip from the first movie universe instead of doing something stupid like asking for it or talking.
    I am not sure about the Will and Eve? universe because I don't know from where they are.

    I was lost on a few of the verses. I think you went to Disneys Treasure Planet animated movie. which I love. Nothing says awesome like space travel in water ship looking vessels.


    Perhaps you could at the end of the chapter add a list of the visited universes so people like me that don't know can look up information?
     
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    It's from this movie called Transcendence with Johnny Depp. He's a AI specialist who is poisoned by a Anti-AI organization so he and his wife put his mind in a computer.

    It was Treasure Planet which is one of my top 3 favorite animated movie, maybe even the first one.

    Thanks for reminding me, I'm actually gonna put up a index of sorts so that people dont have to reread the whole story when they forget something or so they can look up info on the various things in the story.
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    You posted this chapter already.
     
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    I know, I'm going to be editing the story to put every chapter forward once so as to make the first part of the Thread the index
     
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    There, the index is done. Check it out and tell me what you think.
     
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    NakedFury Not too sore, are you?

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    Better. The only thing missing is if you want a summary with the index.
     
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    themisticShroud The Crimson King

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    Huh..I am having a serious case of dai ja vu. It feels like I read something similar to this, but at the same time it's different?:confused: Ah well... keep up the good post man. I am really enjoying this story. :D
     
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