Ack
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAMethinks this will not end well for Sophia.
I know I have a image that fits this somewhere....AHAH!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAMethinks this will not end well for Sophia.
I know I have a image that fits this somewhere....AHAH!
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This. Is. Pure. Gold.
I find that story to be one of your most interesting one, Ack. It's perhaps a bit loaded, with Danny triggering, Taylor swarm-less and the whole Greg's subplot. My only constructive criticism at the moment is that it does feel as if everything is crashing around Sophia. I felt it was a bit much when I arrived at the mention of Greg's private messages.
I presume you meant "toward Sophia".With Taylor's diary to send the investigation toward Greg, it felt the private log bit was redundant.
Oh god, they'd never find his body.The manner which Sophia set up Greg's death is something I couldn't help but be amused at, mostly because I could imagine an agravated Overlord Skitter in canon strangling Greg if her bugs found him 'enjoying' inappropriate images of her + revealing he knew her identity.
Yeah, well, all good things come to an end.Also, props for Taylor not letting people take the diary away, when so many authors would have let Taylor realize whom they were and let them, or straight attack them if believing in a cover up. I do feel slightly sad that the secret of Taylor's current state will be blow up so quickly, it gave a kind of ghostly air to the story.
Point. That occurred to me, but secondly.No, the irony is that if Greg had mentioned that a few moments earlier (never mind that the police might never find the private message log) he would have been saved.
I had more in mind the photos of Taylor that Greg has on his computer, thus linking the cases. But yes, the diary will more lead to Sophia. It might be why I feel there 'too much' things, we've two different leads colliding toward Sophia rather than a string of evidences found one after another (because of omniscient viewpoint.)
Why will the photos on Greg's computer lead toward Sophia?Point. That occurred to me, but secondly.
I suppose my expectations of Greg's odds of survival through intelligence and charisma were a tad too low.
I had more in mind the photos of Taylor that Greg has on his computer, thus linking the cases. But yes, the diary will more lead to Sophia. It might be why I feel there 'too much' things, we've two different leads colliding toward Sophia rather than a string of evidences found one after another (because of omniscient viewpoint.)
If she's lucky.
No, if she's lucky she'll die a quick and painless death before it gets that far.
Seriously Ack don't give this Sophia a mercy kill let her see her crimes and be labeled as a horrific villain...and then send her to the one place she can't escape from.No, if she's lucky she'll die a quick and painless death before it gets that far.
A bundle of Christmas lights plugged into a wall socket?
Isn't the legal standard for searching someone's residence "probable cause"?
They have a reasonable suspicion, which gives them probable cause?Isn't the legal standard for searching someone's residence "probable cause"?
Dana,
This stuff got emailed to us by the PRT after you went home. They said it's from the house of the kid who died at Winslow, Taylor Hebert. You're handling that investigation, right?
Anyway, this stuff looks interesting. Have fun kicking ass.
Rick
Six vicious emails, Sophia pushed me down the stairs when I was near the bottom, making me drop my books, tripped and shoved me no less than three times during gym, and threw my clothes at me while I was in the shower after gym class had ended, getting them wet.
Cape going on a murder spree, already on her second chance. And killing children. After proving she's a complete psycho by torturing one for more than a year. What else do you do with her?
The birdcage is supposed to be for capes who can't be handled by a normal prison, not just "you've been a horrible person"Cape going on a murder spree, already on her second chance. And killing children. After proving she's a complete psycho by torturing one for more than a year. What else do you do with her?
Electronic handcuffs worked perfectly well in canon, so yeah. I completely agree; there's no real reason for her to go to the Birdcage. Now, if she managed to break out and was caught again, that might count for the three strike rules, but that's about it.The birdcage is supposed to be for capes who can't be handled by a normal prison, not just "you've been a horrible person"
There's actually little-to-no evidence that Sophia couldn't be handled by a normal prison.
EDIT: assuming she had an appropriate anti-power countermeasure attached.
This plus the whole thing is becoming very high profile. They can't resolve this with a quiet transfer to a Simurgh Containment Zone or sending her to juvie, she's going to be made into an example to restore the PR the PRT has lost because of this whole thing.
If she survives that long, she seems the type to say 'over my dead body' and mean it. She could accept juvie, she knows she getting out when she turns 18, the Birdcage is for life and she probably wouldn't survive for long there.
The birdcage is supposed to be for capes who can't be handled by a normal prison, not just "you've been a horrible person"
There's actually little-to-no evidence that Sophia couldn't be handled by a normal prison.
EDIT: assuming she had an appropriate anti-power countermeasure attached.
Electronic handcuffs worked perfectly well in canon, so yeah. I completely agree; there's no real reason for her to go to the Birdcage. Now, if she managed to break out and was caught again, that might count for the three strike rules, but that's about it.
They've got a guy named Don in charge of looking into the mafia connections?Don Garbutt, she knew, would still be looking into the Vice angle.
Amusingly, yes.They've got a guy named Don in charge of looking into the mafia connections?