Leekz01
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Why does the Sharingan have a maximum of six tomoe I thought the max was three?
3 in each eye for a total of six...
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Why does the Sharingan have a maximum of six tomoe I thought the max was three?
Would it have cost more WP then it already did if you had chosen to give the Hokage dreams / visions of all of danzo's misdeeds?
Yeah, it gets the character across better.Cause unlike the other chapters the perspective is from someone else other than myself and it help with displaying how characters feel better.
But honestly I just don't feel like editing them since they're just side interludes to give you a better feel of said characters mindset and I personally enjoy the perspectives this way more.
Come on man. All the other slip ups in first/second person PoV are minor enough to be ignored (still annoying tho) but how does this one slip through?
Edit: that said, I really like the storytelling bit. Mainly because he went with Bleach. Seriously, why do so many Natuto, ASOIAF, and Harry Potter SIs default to Star Wars as their go to story? It's even harder since it involves a lot of sci-fi concepts that purebloods, medieval people, and Shinobi just wouldn't understand so the story teller would have to explain all that as well.
Because I'm not a writer and this story was originally in second person because it's a quest that I play solo from my buddy lostghost on spacebattles dot com. Since the story was in second person to make me feel more immersed with my character it doesn't bother me. So mistakes like that can slip through my editing.
Honestly I'm kinda lazy with stuff like this, originally I didn't even want to edit the story and just post if freely to share it's a commissioned story after all. But some people complained and I decided to just try and edit them whenever I'm not busy.
If you're using a word document to edit the story first then just save yourself time and do 'Find & Replace' for the words you, your, etc. You could perfectly edit the whole thing in less than five minutes.
Can he next save up wish points for an asteroid to conveniently fall on obito and kill him in his sleep
How much would it cost to give obito recurring dreams of seeing rin her telling him how she's disappointed in him?Obito is way to important to this worlds history and events, That shit would cost to much. Giving people dreams is cheap and doesn't affect them really cause most of the time they just forget about it or ignore them.
Only reason the dreams are working is because I gave them to all the important people of konoha besides danzo and traitors.
This first wish earlier was a seed to get the hokage to think more about how to handle the uchiha more delicately why also making him a bit more mindful of consequences.
The dreams are also recurring over the year so it'll effect people's sleep which will effect their work habits and get the hokage curious to wonder why. Which will lead him to see the similarities between his and their dreams and look into what's going on.
Although their are a few like fugaku and kakashi that just have more personal stakes with said dreams and confront him directly.
How much would it cost to give obito recurring dreams of seeing rin her telling him how she's disappointed in him?
She's definitely shipping themIt's at this point that my mother chimes in, a pleased smile on her face.
lol, clearly with the speed of the post you already had it written but that didn't help my cliffhanger problem. The next entry better not be:
A/N: Lost my muse, Saske ded, story ded.