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Amelia, Worm AU [Complete]

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And Riley remains oblivious to creepy and completely adorable. Although the nightmares, I can feel for her. That can be some really rough shit there.

Victoria is social genius. No where near Yamada or Rapture quality, but damn. I wonder what Emma thinks about this turn, I think her social fu would be high enough to see what was happening.

For the record, an innocent conversation that could be taken for innuendo is good writing and story telling, not trolling. doing that repeatedly with the same people is a running gag. Still not trolling.
 
So...lessons to take away:

Vicky is socially savvy.

Zach is now *more* okay with hanging out with Emma...if Vicky is there to act as a buffer, at least.

Vicky is probably still attracted to Zach.

Emma, we know, is still attracted to Zach.

Now, I KNOW TanaNari wouldn't fake us out like this and then lay the groundwork for an actual three-way relationship, but...

...that sure looks like what he's doing
 
powerofvoid said:
... actually, I think the lack of awkwardness is the biggest implication that they didn't.
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Let us dream, damn it. We all know this WAFF won't last, that TanaNari is going to come in here and take our happiness apart, shred by bloody shred.

Just let us have this one moment of goofy fun. ONE IMPLIED THREESOME. THAT'S ALL WE ASK.
 
powerofvoid said:
... actually, I think the lack of awkwardness is the biggest implication that they didn't.
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Sir, are you implying that they are not all three emotionally mature adults?

Zach, Victoria and Emma are clearly the paragons of mental health, maturity, and oh hell I'm giggling too hard to finish that thought.
 
TanaNari said:
"Don't sell yourself short," Victoia replied.
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TanaNari said:
"Don't sell yourself short," Vicky argued.
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TanaNari said:
Maybe you should practice on each other when I'm not able to stay over?
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TanaNari said:
"Well, how about if I give the two of you pointers, and you can practice on each other?"
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TanaNari said:
I didn't know a lot about Riley's nightmares,
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TanaNari said:
So I only knew the barest hints of Riley's nightmare problems.
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You had a few repeated or repetitive lines in that last segment that could probably be made smoother with some basic substitutions or rewordings.
 
You know if Victoria is really making use of her social thinker power and is willing to forgive Bonesaw I wouldn't be all that surprised if she manages to get along with Tattletale if they spend time together.

Actually we just had a scene about Taylor threatening to get Lisa a boyfriend, and now Viccy has a power that could potentially give her similar issues. Viccy/Lisa would be a pairing no one would see coming.
 
Well, it would make for amusing situations.

"Ames, your girlfriend is evil!"

"Vicky, you're dating Tattletale... I don't think you have a leg to stand on here."

"That's different. She's a total bitch, but she's my bitch! In both meanings of the word."

"She shot you!"

"A lot of people shoot at me. Besides I already settled that with her."
 
And lo, bravely does Victoria Dallon dive in the murky depths of neuroses and tangles of relationships and dark pasts that is Pantheon.

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Taylor: I know you think you're right to do so, but please be careful. As much as I don't want to admit it, Pantheon is currently the most messed-up group in terms of interpersonal relationships that I know. Third all-time, after Jack Slash's Slaughterhouse Nine and Heartbreaker's family - both of which we dismantled. Last time our conflicts came to a head, shortly before your revival... I murder-suicided Butcher and had to be restored from backup, losing a week of my memories. Both Amelia and Lisa were walking on eggshells and keeping me on suicide watch for a while after. Apparently, my other self decided that killing herself was a better option than living with the memories of that week. And you are poking all these problems. So again, please be careful. I really don't want to live through a repeat of that, or something worse. The world has enough problems without us going insane.
 
I think I may have missed the definition of trolling in there somewhere too. This was a pretty classic did they didn't they gag that you still got the impression that they didn't by the end. Trolling would have left us with the opposite impression, followed by an outburst from Theo, a suggestive comment by Vicky and another offer of nsfw section stuff in the AN.
 
Thunder Man Soul said:
Fair enough. But how authentic do you think Riley got with that? I'm gonna guess very. And I'm not gonna chance it. Mostly cause I've have gotten used to being able to breathe.
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Cat tongues are unlikely to set of your allergies unless theyre in a rare form afterall in most allergies your allergic to the hair of whatever creature your allergic to you would also have to inhale the cat tongue to get any effects probably.
 
Faraway-R said:
And lo, bravely does Victoria Dallon dive in the murky depths of neuroses and tangles of relationships and dark pasts that is Pantheon.

Omake: Small Talk

Taylor: I know you think you're right to do so, but please be careful. As much as I don't want to admit it, Pantheon is currently the most messed-up group in terms of interpersonal relationships that I know. Third all-time, after Jack Slash's Slaughterhouse Nine and Heartbreaker's family - both of which we dismantled. Last time our conflicts came to a head, shortly before your revival... I murder-suicided Butcher and had to be restored from backup, losing a week of my memories. Both Amelia and Lisa were walking on eggshells and keeping me on suicide watch for a while after. Apparently, my other self decided that killing herself was a better option than living with the memories of that week. And you are poking all these problems. So again, please be careful. I really don't want to live through a repeat of that, or something worse. The world has enough problems without us going insane.
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Well, as she already demonstrated, if there is a repeat, she doesn't have to...
 
Cyclone said:
Well, as she already demonstrated, if there is a repeat, she doesn't have to...
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She might have to.

In a really bad case, Pantheon will dissolve and clone-tech will be destroyed. She will have to live with it then.

Not that I think TanaNari will go for that (even if I envision Darkwing Duck scribbling in a notepad right about now). ;)
 
All this talk of who Lisa would be best paired with made me remember that we already know the answer!

Their passionate whirlwind romance, the shameless flirting, their tragic parting, truly LisaA/LisaB was a love story for the ages. Coilcast being shut down and ripping them apart was a dark time but luckily they now have the ability to reunite them in the form of Lisa1 and Lisa2!

The teasing shall be merciless.
 
Makes me wonder if Zach Is capable of NSFW stuff. I mean imagine him and some unlucky girl doing some horizontal pole dance - lots of stress heavy breathing and then asthma makes it's ugly move and POP he teleports leaving poor girl in dire need for gynecologist and some heavy therapy with psychiatrist.
 
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