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It's the twentieth chapter ... on ff.net.
Here, it's Part 16.
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It's the twentieth chapter ... on ff.net.
Claire gets a little brother?"Thanks, Dad." She gave him a grin, which faded shortly after. "Of course, I'm not quite sure how we're going to deal with your clone …"
And there went his good mood. "Ugh, yes." He didn't want her remodelling the clone as she had Lung's, and asking her to euthanise it just felt wrong in a way that killing the hybrid had not.
There had to be a third option, but he had no idea what it was.
That's actually what I'm thinking, to be honest.
It would be hilarious if the clone was around the same age as Amy, and went on to date Victoria. After the reveal Carol would lose her fucking mind.
That ... would be absolutely hilarious.It would be hilarious if the clone was around the same age as Amy, and went on to date Victoria. After the reveal Carol would lose her fucking mind.
Admittedly, that is much smarter than I expected. The effects of not melting her brain on the regular, I guess."What I want to know is, why didn't you blow the tank as soon as you saw it was over?" asked Alabaster. "It's what I'd do."
"Because Tinkers who don't allow for timers on their self destructs are otherwise known as 'casualties'," Sherrel told him tartly. "We always need a chance to shut it off, in case some smartass figures out a way to remotely activate it."
Sorry. Claire is currently thirteen, and due to this, there will be no more underage lewds in my fics.You know... I was half hoping it would be lewd. Not saying you need to or anything, Ack, just thought ti would be, since, you know, QQ. Any chance it might at some point (when the girls are older, I mean... unless you want some underage lewds... I wouldn't mind...)?
Sorry. Claire is currently thirteen, and due to this, there will be no more underage lewds in my fics.
If this fic lasts until she's at least eighteen, then that's a different story.
Can't have shit in 2020. I'll miss those fics, and it's a damn shame it's affecting your professional life because some people are too sensitive for QQ. God forbid someone wants to read good smut.Sorry. Claire is currently thirteen, and due to this, there will be no more underage lewds in my fics.
If this fic lasts until she's at least eighteen, then that's a different story.
Can't have shit in 2020. I'll miss those fics, and it's a damn shame it's affecting your professional life because some people are too sensitive for QQ. God forbid someone wants to read good smut.
Let's not bring unnecessary drama in here though. Honestly I kinda like this fic more as SFW fare anyways, feels like lewds would be distracting. As for in-chapter stuff, it's been a while since I've read this one; who exactly are Robert and Marcus again? I remember Kayden's recruitment into the Marche but those two are eluding me.
That's correct.Marcus and Robert are the reprogrammed/rewritten Blasto clones of Lung and Marquis that the gang defeated in the last few chapters. Marcus was reprogrammed to be Marquis's son and Ameliia's little brother, and Robert was programmed to be a powered minion for Marquis - albeit, a presumably happy well-treated minion.
Don't worry; it is in the nature of stupid to continue until cessation, of either stupidity or animation. One or the other.I want those two to do something even more stupid, so they can be hurt even further.
'attacked from behind' or 'attacked by surprise'.
'precipitous'.
I'll fix the second one, but Lung's English isn't necessarily perfect.You know, reading this, I can't help but think of that guy who was complaining that Hostage Situation was too apologist about Marquis. That story has nothing on this one in that department. (Not that I have a problem with that; 'Noble Villain Marquis' is pretty much a core story conceit for this.)
'attacked from behind' or 'attacked by surprise'.
'precipitous'.
What, like the Mercia?How long before she decides to amplify normal human beings to create her own parahuman army?