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Chapter 27 New
Chapter 27: Puppet in Despair

[4th May | Road to Seaside Park. 5:40 A.M.]

"Senpai, you're finally here." "...Mm."

Yuuno sighed after hearing Makoto's usual answer, shaking his ferret head. The three of them had been waiting.

Nanoha was resting her back on the wall, swinging her feet, with Yuuno sitting on her shoulders, looking at the sky with a determined look on his expression. Arf was on the sidewalls, her injuries healed enough for her to move around effectively.

"...You were waiting for me?"

"Of course," Nanoha nodded, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. "The Makoto-senpai I know won't stand still when someone is in danger."

Both she and Yuuno expected it. Even everyone at Arthra expected it, with Chrono sighing as he saw the boy appear on the screen.

Makoto joined Nanoha when she disobeyed orders to help Fate. He also did reckless things while he was helping her, like draining the corruption without prompt. For him to stand still when he could help was something she couldn't see him doing.

And that was fine. To deny him from helping was to deny herself as well, in her desire to help Fate. It would be hypocritical for her to deny him such a choice.

"However," Yuuno dropped down from Nanoha's shoulder, before walking towards Makoto. "As we discussed yesterday…"

"I won't fight. I remember," Makoto crouched down, allowing the ferret to climb onto his shoulder. "Unless something unexpected happens and you need help, I'll keep my word. I'll be acting as support."

'Seriously…' Chrono let out an exhausted sigh, his words heard by the quartet. 'Even though I expected this, I'm still annoyed by your actions, Yuuki.'

"...Sorry?"

'You don't sound sorry…hah…' He grumbled, his palm meeting his face. 'Why do I even bother…'

'Now, now, Chrono,' Amy's voice rang with an amused tint. 'With Makoto-kun's unique senses, he might be able to track Fate-chan. And who knows, after what happened during the ocean battle, she can be convinced not to fight!'

Makoto could hear Chrono grumbling again, something about 'hopeful idiots' or something similar. He tilted his head. What's wrong in believing in such a thing?

Both Nanoha and Yuuno just let out an apologetic laugh.

"...I said it before," Arf muttered, looking at the scene strangely. "But you guys are really unique."

He shrugged. That didn't mean it was bad. Everyone's different from each other after all, even if there were similarities.

"Right, now that Senpai is here," Nanoha looked at everyone with a motivated look. "Let's get going, to save Fate-chan!"

The three of them nodded. Makoto, with Yuuno on his shoulder, Arf and Nanoha then ran towards their destination, the Seaside Park, their goal united under the same desire.

"Still…" Yuuno mused, his head tilted in confusion. "Who or what is that monster that Arf spoke about? For it to choose to make a deal…"

"That thing…wasn't human," Arf shivered in her thought, her fur already bristling at the creature's appearance. "It's not something I want to face, especially alone."

"...That terrifying?"

The blue-haired boy's mind immediately recalled his dream, of the woman making a deal with that shadow-like being. It can't be… can it?

His thoughts were then interrupted by a certain Enforcer, his voice completely wary. 'Whoever or whatever that was, it must be a monster beyond imagination.'

A collective shudder ran through them at Chrono's words, even as they ran.

'Let's just hope the truth can be shed after arresting Precia.'

+++

[Seaside Park | 5:55 A.M]

The morning dawn broke across the horizon, brightening the world around them. Only four of them were there at the park, others were likely resting or sleeping during this holiday.

Nanoha was a few steps away from the railings, with Arf beside her. Makoto and Yuuno were a short distance behind her, the former stood straight with his hands in his pockets, feeling the ocean breeze and the chiming of bells travelling through the distances.

"This place should be fine, right?"

Nanoha took a deep breath, before she closed her eyes and concentrated, subtly revealing her magic power so it could be detected.

"Please show yourself…Fate-chan!"

For a moment, there was only silence. What could only be heard was the sound of waves from the ocean. Then the sound of rustling leaves, before a soft blowing wind breezed through their body.

Both Yuuno and Arf looked around, trying to find any signs of Fate. Makoto merely took a deep breath, believing that she would come.

A single moment of silence that seemed to stretch uncomfortably…then—

"Gah!" "Ugh!"

"Senpai!? Yuuno-kun!?"

Nanoha was alarmed. Both of them suddenly let out a shout of pain, Makoto even collapsed to his knees, one hand clawing at his temple as a thin trickle of blood escaped his nose. Before she could even approach them…

[Warning! High level corruption detected!]

…Raising Heart immediately let out a warning.

Yuuno felt a burning sting on his front paw, the one containing his Sigil. The pain wasn't just sudden—it was all-consuming, a massive shock felt in a single instant.

Makoto had it worse.

Screams. Not one, or two. But many in number, all at the same time. It felt like all different horrible sounds were chimerically mixed into the most horrible tune in the world. More spine-chilling than the clashing of metals scratching each other, more horrible than the combined sound of scraping of glass and a chalkboard.

And then they felt it. A familiar feeling of wrongness common to those corrupted, and a strange feeling of despair weighing on their consciousness.

When they turned to look at the source, all of them were surprised.

It was Fate, floating down towards the top of the lamp post, her cloak floating ominously by the winds.

"Fate…?" "Fate-chan…?"

Both Arf and Nanoha called out in worry.

It was definitely an unexpected scenario for all of them. Nanoha immediately wore her Barrier Jacket, Raising Heart in her hands, yet her hands and eyes were shaking.

Makoto was pulled by Yuuno to the side, the latter already in his human form, but both of them could not take their eyes off the blond girl, the screams and burning still felt continuously in their respective selves.

Then Fate opened her eyes.

Everyone gasped, even Amy from Arthra.

Her eyes were not the beautiful red, but a sickly, phosphorescent yellow.

"...Scythe…-BZZZT- …Form…"

Bardiche's words were broken, staticky glitch, even as the yellow blade formed. Makoto realised that its blue jewel's colour was murky and stagnant, as if swallowed completely by the corruption.

"How…?" Yuuno couldn't believe it. So Fate got corrupted by the creature Arf spoke about? And this dread…it reminded him of the Shadow Griffin they fought above the ocean. So the enemy's target back then was really Fate!? But then, why was she here, if they already successfully corrupt her!?

"Fate! Fate!"

"...Arf."

A voice devoid. Of energy, of spirit, of anything. It didn't even sound resigned, but lacking something that makes one voice notably human. A monotone, no different than a soulless machine following its instructed steps.

Arf looked even more worried, seeing how her kindhearted master seemed to have lost her spark, her own melody muted.

"Fate! What happened to you!?"

"..."

She did not answer, merely staring at them with a dull look.

"Fate…!" Arf wanted to move closer, but shook her head. "We should stop…! Trying to collect the Jewel Seeds for that woman! You can't listen to what she says anymore!"

"...Even so…"

Fate replied, pointing her staff at Nanoha, where she sensed the Jewel Seeds, her own Jewel Seeds that she collected floated behind around her glowing in sinister red. Black lines formed on her face, trailing down to her neck. Her eyes weren't even focused on anything.

"I'm still her…'daughter', no matter what…" Is that really so?

He could tell. Her movements were lacking. Merely following the script laid out for her.

"I'll be taking… the rest of the Jewel Seeds… from you."

Without warning, the girl charged forward, scythe ready to swing. Nanoha immediately flew back to the open sea for their battle, and Fate chased after her.

+++

"Kh!" Arf groaned in pain as she tried to forcefully move herself. Of all the times to be useless when her master needed her the most…!

She, Makoto and Yuuno could only watch as the two magical girls were locked in combat. The blue-haired boy was barely standing now. Only Yuuno holding by the side prevented him from falling, but his eyes were still twitching from the cacophony of noise he heard from the Jewel Seed.

They could hear the surprised and frantic screaming from the people of Arthra in their minds, with Lindy ordering them to do a large-scale search in the area for any signs of the enemy. It seems even they did not expect this development, of Fate actually being corrupted.

Then Makoto's eyes widened in realisation.

"..Arf," his voice was low, and he was still holding his head in pain. Still, he needed to know.

"What is it?"

Somehow, everyone suddenly felt a bad feeling encroaching their form.

"Did Fate…give all the Jewel Seeds to her mother?"

"Yes," she nodded. "I'm not sure why she has them now, but she did before I left."

"Even the ones she had during the ocean battle?"

"Yes." She didn't understand why he was asking something obvious. Was it really that important?

"I see." He once again looked at the battle with narrowed eyes, his mind in chaotic turmoil.

'Makoto-kun, what is it?'

Amy's question was answered with silence as he continued to stare at the battle.

"Then…" he took a deep breath. "Why are they corrupted now? All ten of them?"

"Eh…?"

'-! Rechecking!' A furious tempo of typing, before she gasped in horror. 'H-he's right! The Jewel Seeds, even Jewel Seed VIII and Jewel Seed XI that Makoto-kun drained completely before have been corrupted again!?'

The bad feeling in their gut suddenly became a far heavier tune. Arf looked at her master in worry. "Fate…!"

+++

[Above The Sea]

"Fate-chan! Please…!"

But she did not say anything.

They were still in combat, with Nanoha now frantically shooting down the incoming Photon Lancers while Fate systematically dodged her opponent's return fire.

It was wrong.

Despite Fate fighting well, it felt wrong to her. It did not feel like fighting Fate at all.

Her actions were dull and robotic.

Her movements were more of following the motions.

Even her expression was a dead-kind of calmness.

It was like fighting a heartless system, mimicking the motions of a person named Fate Testarossa, yet lacking the song that made it hers.

But even if it was merely copying, it was still Fate. Someone who was strong, so Nanoha had difficulty in fighting her.

What worried her more was the longer the battle, the more it felt like Fate was losing her sense of self. She seemed to be looking at something else, a vision only for her to see.

And so she tried. To call out to her. To try and reach out to her. To appeal to the goodness in the lonely girl's heart.

But it was no use. Fate was too swallowed up by the despair in her mind, the words said in the outside world were merely a noise to be discarded.

[Fate's Mind]

Am I…really worth anything?

A question she repeated ever since her mother told her she was evidence.

Because I wasn't Alicia…Mother did not want me.

She saw it, the cruel, hateful look adorning her mother's face when she asked for a simple praise of what she made for her.

A crack nestled in her heart. Her present was ignored. It was her first 'love' (punishment).

Then subsequent memories. Of her mother delivering cruel actions, making her heart feel weak.

Then she saw it, in her mind, her memory of that time.

"You are evidence. Nothing more."

The static she heard grew louder, and the world lost its colour.

Another vision of Precia.

"You're just the doll I created to play my daughter."

Did she ever say this? Or was her mind conjuring what her mother says? One that she fears her actually saying?

It didn't matter. She felt the words were true.

The darkness in the vision was closing in on her, and she pitifully stretched her hand forward.

Once again, her mother, Precia Testarossa appeared in front of her. Slowly walking towards her, her heels echoing even in this darkness.

Her mother didn't pull her out. Merely staring at her with full contempt as she gets swallowed further and further.

"I always hated you, Fate. You pathetic imitation. Why can't you be Alicia?"

[Seaside Park]

"-! Corruption level spiking!" [Warning, corruption level is increasing!]

The words did not register to the trio who watched the battle. They were engulfed with a sudden pain.

For Yuuno, he felt the burning sting from the Sigil magnified to an unprecedented level.

For Arf, she could feel it, the cracking of the connection between her and Fate, and the despair waved in her master's heart.

For Makoto, the dissonant screams grew louder and louder, rattling his bones to the core. He could also feel a cold chill squeezing his heart, and a song that fell down in the bottomless swamp.

"Fate-chan- kya!"

Nanoha was blown away by the sudden smog. Released from the Jewel Seeds floating around her.

They glowed a sinister red, visible to everyone even through the black smoke.

Then they entered, one-by-one. Into the jewel of Bardiche, with the dull colour became even more washed as each Jewel Seed entered its storage.

Nanoha tried to reach Fate. To pass through the smog.

But it was no use. Her hands cannot penetrate it. It was too solid for her to pass through.

Fate's heart was already broken. She could feel it sinking further and further into purgatory.

If…mother only wants Alicia…If I was only a doll…

One Jewel Seed was left. Jewel Seed - XVIII. The Moon Arcana. It did not enter Bardiche, only floating in front of Fate.

Then…if I became the doll Alicia…will she be happy?

The Seed attached itself to Fate's chest. The smog swallowed her whole.

For a single moment, Fate was visible, her face shadowed.

Then her Barrier Jacket shattered. Unravelled into ethereal, blackened ribbons that hum with static.

Her entire body changed. Becoming more of a human-sized puppet.

Her face was now entirely featureless. Save for the porcelain half-mask on the left-half of her head. It cracked like a sad smile, yet no eyes were seen.

Her limbs elongate, joints glowing with sickly yellow light like a marionette's.

Her chest split open like an empty music box, revealing hollow darkness inside.

Her twin-tails are now frayed wires, and a faint, distorted music box melody plays with her every jerky movement.

Bardiche became more wooden. More fake. Cracks visible on its surface.

Everyone looked at the transformed Fate in horror. Both on the ground and at Arthra. Their mind went utterly, terrifyingly blank.

How… do they save her?

[To be Continued]
 
Chapter 28 (End of Arc 5) New
Chapter 28: Hopeful Symphonia

[Seaside Park]

"FAAAAAAAATTTTTEEEEEE!"

Arf's soul-crushing cry broke everyone out of their stupor. Even then, they could only stare at her with pure horror on their faces.

The form was terrifying in appearance. And for the three of them, Makoto, Yuuno and Nanoha, the manifestation of the corrupted form reminded them of their past battles against corrupted victims.

Yet, even compared to them, except for one, the corruption of Fate was on another level, far beyond their past enemies. And the only one that could rival hers was during the early days. The corrupted office worker, the manifestation of a monument of pure despair.

And with the corrupted Jewel Seeds amplified one's suppressed negative emotions…did Fate think of herself as a puppet? Even after everything?

'C-Confirm!' Amy's stuttered voice rang through the battlefield. 'Corrupted Jewel Seed XVIII! The Moon Arcana, representing mystery, intuition, illusion, and the subconscious! The reverse being…the worsening of her paranoia!'

Meaning the corruption amplified what she believed about herself into something far worse. Nanoha tightened her grip on Raising Heart, her mind frantically thinking on how to save Fate from the corruption.

Then the Shadow of Fate…flew.

No, it could not be called flying. It was more akin to a puppet being pulled by strings, barely seen from her limbs.

""ScyTHe…SlasH.""

The declaration didn't come from Bardiche, but from the hollowed chest, a combination of a child's sob and venomous growl. Every time the limbs moved, one could hear the sound of grinding gears and the creaking of wooden joints. And the blade form from the wooden Intelligent Device was murky in colour.

"Kh!"

Despite the movement being more of a marionette's pantomime, Fate's attack was much faster than before, lacking all the unnecessary movements. It was also much heavier, the pressure alone from the swing almost made Nanoha off-balance.

But she dodged it, though barely. Her training to fight against Fate was coming to fruition.

""PHOtON…LanCER.""

Plasma shots of crackling electricity formed around her, but far duller in colour. A lazy wave from the puppet hand, and the shots were fired.

[Divine Shooter!]

Nanoha took a few distances back, pink spheres of light forming in front of her. It was then fired, hitting at the incoming shots with deadly accuracy, causing mutual destruction.

The attacks stopped, and Nanoha was breathing rapidly. The pressure from the battle was heavy, not just from the attacks, but also the oppressive, despair-inducing feeling from the girl. She could feel her sweat trailing down the back of her neck.

Even so, she didn't give up. Her eyes were still burning a song of hope. Nanoha pointed her staff at the opponent—

""...WhY?""

"Eh?"

The puppet form did not attack, merely tilting her head, though the neck angled a bit too much to be comfortable.

""...Why are you stILL fighting?""

Despite the mix of sobs and hiss, Nanoha felt like it was Fate herself asking her.

"Because…!" Nanoha gripped Raising Heart tighter, her voice determined. "Because you're still there! You're alone! I want to save you!"

""...Is that really So?""

The voice was dubious, despite being monotone. The hollow core even released a discordant tune, mirroring her mood.

Still, even though Nanoha never dropped her guard, she still answered. "Yes! It's true, Fate-chan! I really want to help you!"

The tune was silenced, and for a single moment, Nanoha thought her words managed to get through.

Then she said the next words.

""Because I'm BROKEN, RIGHT?""

"-!"

Nanoha flinched as if struck.

Her opponent didn't miss that opening, swinging the scythe at inhuman speed.

She managed to block it in time, with a quick Round Shield from her palm, but—

"Kh!" [Warning! The corruption level is increasing!]

The blow was similar to the feathers from the griffin Shadow. Each hit made her feel a wave of despair and negative emotions gnawing in her mind and heart.

""YOU only want me because I'm broken. If I weren't, WOULD you Even carE?""

"Fate-chan…! That's not…!"

But it was no use. The attacks were getting faster, and heavier. Each block made her heart beating faster, and dodging was almost impossible at close range due to the overwhelming speed. She could only fly further back to give herself space, yet their opponent chased after her.

+++

"Nanoha…!"

It was obvious to everyone. Their friend was losing. She was being overwhelmed on all fronts, and yet it was also noticeable to them that Fate didn't finish her immediately, but slowly cornering her with both attacks and words. They could see the hesitation and fear slowly adorning her face.

'The corruption level in both of them is increasing…!' Amy's anguished voice was heard, her voice filled with frustration and fear. 'If this keeps going any longer…!'

They would be gone. Both of them, due to the darkness breaking them completely.

For once, Makoto felt his heart turn cold.

Gritting his teeth, he slowly pushed himself away from Yuuno to take flight and joined the battle.

"Makoto!"

"...Don't stop me, Yuuno."

His friend held him by the shoulder, his eyes shaking and his voice filled with worry.

He did not shake him off, but gave Yuuno a hard stare.

Both of them knew. Makoto was already reaching his limit. Even if he tried draining the corruption from Fate, seeing how weakened he was, he wouldn't be able to fight well, merely a note to be swatted away.

But then, so what?

His friends were in trouble. The darkness was slowly eradicating them.

How would Alisa-san and Suzuka feel when Nanoha they knew was gone? Her family?

How could he even leave Fate alone? The girl with an incomplete melody seeking warmth?

So what if he breaks? He was broken already. To protect their happiness was enough, no?

"I'm going."

"I know! That's why listen for a second!"

Makoto blinked, realising that his friend wasn't actually stopping him from going ahead. Instead, he sighed in relief when Makoto looked at him in confusion.

"I'm really glad I prepared in advance…" Yuuno muttered, before looking at him directly, his eyes blazing with a determined hope. "Listen okay? I'm just going to repeat this once."

And so Yuuno told him. Of what he did, with Amy's help.

Makoto's eyes widened.

+++

"Kya!"

The blow broke the barrier, and Nanoha was pushed back. She could feel the familiar feeling at that time at the dockyard. The corruption slowly spread to her heart.

Fate did not do anything. Merely hanging her hand down like a puppet without movement, only hanging in the air, but she knew the girl was staring at her, assured of her victory.

The brown-haired girl gritted her teeth, trying to hold on. Not again, she didn't want to lose herself again…!

"Yuuno!"

A boyish shout, not from the girls. Before she realised it, she felt something warm behind her, holding on her shoulder. A familiar sensation, even. Nanoha could feel her heart beating in a dreadful tune.

Sure enough, when she turned to look, it was her senior, already in Unison form, draining the corruption from her. He was teleported by his friend to be able to reach her quickly.

"Senpai!?" Nanoha looked at him in pure surprise and horror. "Why are you here!? You're still not completely fine yet!?"

Even though he drained it completely, Nanoha felt guilty. For him to attempt to do so when he was on his last legs, did he even know what would happen to him!?

"I know," one of his eyes already showed a shade of yellow, and black lines were forming on his face. "But you were in trouble, and I want to help. Both you and Fate."

Stupid! She couldn't help but think, even though she was happy. Makoto-senpai is kind yet stupid! How would everyone feel if he's gone!?

""Help? HELP ME?""

The voice was tinged with slight anger, the wooden Bardiche pointed at the both of them.

""Then…become like me. BReak for Me.""

A large magic circle below the puppet. Fate's but cracked, black lines forming on the surface. A single beam was shot from the tip of the staff, and the duo blocked it with their shields, the corruption slowly encroaching on them.

"Amy-san said earlier," Makoto muttered, staring at Fate with a composed look. "If we dally any further, Fate is likely to be gone forever."

Nanoha widened her eyes in panic. She didn't want that! She didn't want that at all!

But…! "What can we do!?"

Their opponent was strong, far stronger than either of them. They could not hope to overwhelm her with their own strength, and it was likely this was the last chance to save Fate.

But could they even save her with their current strength? Was there even any way!?

"There is a way, Nanoha."

Nanoha could feel her heart stopping at that declaration. His voice, despite calm, was confident. As if he truly believed what he said.

Makoto looked at her directly.

"I'll Unison with you, Nanoha."

Nanoha's eyes widened. Unison…with her? Like what he did with Yuuno last time?

"But the last time you practised with Yuuno-kun, you-!"

"I know," he nodded, but his eyes didn't lose any hope. "But rather than losing a friend, I rather gamble the chance to save her from the darkness."

She hesitated. It was the first time they even attempted it, they never even thought about doing so in the past. Can she do it? Can it really be successful during their first, and most important try?

She looked at him again. Despite the lines on his face, the tinge of yellow on one eye…she chose to trust him. Those clear, beautiful eyes, filled with unbreakable hope.

"Okay," She nodded. "What should we do first?"

"Raising Heart." "Eh?"

[Understood. Resonant Unison Program, starting.]

The red jewel of Raising Heart glowed, covering the two of them in a large pink sphere, surprising Nanoha.

Then Makoto held the staff with her, his hands holding onto hers while also gripping the Intelligent Device. She couldn't help but blush at the boldness.

But still, she was surprised her partner actually had such a function.

"Was Raising Heart always able to do this!?"

"No," he shook his head. "Yuuno told me he added this function with Amy-san back at the ship."

""You think I'll LET You?""

The puppet tried to move, to stop them from doing the miracle. She already saw it once, and it turned the tide that she thought was certain defeat. It will not happen again.

If she could.

""-!?""

Before Fate realised it, multiple chains of green and orange tied her limbs, and orange rings of mana held them in place.

"Sorry, Fate!" Arf gave an agonised cry as she stopped her master from moving.

"You won't… interrupt them!"

Yuuno gritted his teeth, his other hand creating an extra spherical barrier covering his friends for an extra layer of protection, while the other tried to hold the chains as much as possible, even as they were straining by their opponent's rough movements.

His mind recalled what happened on that day.

+++

[Arthra Engineering Room | Flashback - 2nd May, Evening]

"...A new program for Raising Heart?" "Yes."

Amy's eyes widened when Yuuno proposed his request.

It was some time after the meeting, and the blond boy approached her when everyone left, requesting her expertise for something, though she didn't expect what he requested at all.

"With the enemies we're facing seem to be getting smarter in tactics," Yuuno crossed his arms, a frown on his face. "It's best if we have a trump card of some sort just in case."

"...So that's why you propose a program for Makoto's unique Unison with another mage?" She remembered that moment. When the entire Arthra crew watched Makoto Unison with Yuuno to save Nanoha. She gave him a confused look. "But, from what I heard, you fail to produce it after doing it once? Are you sure it'll be possible next time?"

"I'm sure. I could guess the conditions for it."

He wasn't lying. Just from their first successful try, Yuuno managed to record correctly all the conditions in his journal while trying to understand Makoto's power.

Physical contact. The exact same strong thought. Similar motives or desires. Makoto in Unison. Close bonds.

These five were what he managed to narrow it down to. Missing even one would fail the Unison.

If he was right, then the main reason for their failure was the lack of one thing: the same strong thought. Most likely, since it was just practice, either he and Makoto were relaxed in their thoughts because it was just training for them, making it impossible.

"I see," a nod of understanding, before she shot him a questioning look. "But still, from what you're proposing, you wish for Nanoha-chan and Makoto-kun to do the Resonant Unison?"

"Yes," he nodded. "Because if my own Unison with Makoto could already overwhelm the corrupted Nanoha…"

It would likely be a far more powerful combination, and it would be a hidden card. That's why it's best to prepare.

To make it easier for them, just in case. And to make sure the corruption won't overwhelm Makoto.

"Alright, I'll help," Amy began preparing the program. "But would Raising Heart be able to take it?"

[It'll be alright.]

Yuuno didn't get a chance to answer. The Intelligent Device resting on the table already answered.

[This is for my master's sake. For the sake of the future they believed in. I am but one to help them pave the tune they choose.]

Both Yuuno and Amy couldn't help but smile at Raising Heart's loyalty.

"Alright!" Amy was burning in desire. "Let's do this!"

+++

[Present Time]

The Device glowed, enveloping them in a gentle warmth.

[Query. What is the purpose?]

""To save Fate/Fate-chan!""

[Second query. Another purpose?]

Both of them looked at each other. Then, a smile graced their face, the duo nodding.

""To protect Nanoha/Makoto-Senpai!""

There was no need for complicated reasons. They wish to save Fate and protect each other. And that was enough.

A single blink from the Jewel. Then a warm tone, with another blinking. It was as if Raising Heart was smiling.

[Understood. All Clear. Resonant Unison, Execute.]

Nanoha could feel it. A melodious warmth wrapping into her entire being. Makoto became light itself, before being absorbed into her. No, into her Linker Core.

Her hair grew longer, the twintails extending in length, while also becoming lighter in colour. A mix of hers and Orpheus.

Her Barrier Jacket became completely white, not from losing colour. But a pure and almost holy white. On her back was a massive lyre, yet it did not feel like it weighed anything.

Raising Heart also transformed, gaining a lyre-shaped crown at the tip, cradling the Red Jewel.

A sound was heard. Of the thrumming of a string. And one eye glowed, leaving a trail of velvet blue.

[Unison Complete.]

Nanoha could hear it now. The scream from the puppet who broke the chains binding her and the Seeds. The one Makoto said he heard many times. Her mind, or rather their minds also felt heavy, straining themselves from the throbbing pain.

Both of them ignored it, focusing on what they wished to do the most.

Saving Fate.

""...! P-Photon LANCER PhalANX SHIFT!""

They could hear the panic in the tone, as a large cracked magic circle formed under her. Thirty eight photon spheres were made, before it was immediately fired at Unison Nanoha.

She did not dodge it, or even prepared a shield to block it. It was taken head on.

"NANOHA!?"

Yuuno shouted in surprise, smoke being made from each shot. Why didn't she try defending herself!?

When the smoke cleared, the answer was readily apparent. Everyone's eyes widened at the result.

Not a single wound, not even a cut. The attack failed to hurt her at all.

'That's incredible…' Lindy's voice echoed, her voice in pure awe. Even Chrono at Arthra had his eyes widened.

'-! The corruption level is steadily decreasing!' Amy reported, the values slowly lowering at a steady beat.

[Divine Shooter.]

Four pink-white spheres were made, accompanied by the sound of a lyre's string being pulled. They moved at a speed incomparable to before, aiming at Fate.

She barely avoided three, dodging in an erratic manner, but one managed to hit her shoulder.

""KyA!?""

A scream of pain, but more from the venomous voice. She was surprised by the change.

That was obvious, since, even back then, Makoto managed to make Yuuno gain the ability of draining. Removing the corruption from Nanoha using Yuuno as the medium.

So if he could do that for Yuuno, it was likely he could do the same for Nanoha and her magic.

And it did.

Both of them could feel it, the despair in Fate's heart from that single blow. They became even more determined in saving her, Unison Nanoha's hands tightening her grip on her staff. The puppet took a step back in fear, afraid of disappearing.

And so the game of chase, of cat and mouse began. Nanoha chased after her, firing a storm of pink shots and beams, closing in with her Flash Move. Shadow Fate moved away in fear, firing and endless streams of Photon Lancers while moving in an erratic pattern, trying to get them as far away from her as possible, and delay their chase. It was useless of course, the attacks were completely ineffective.

+++

[Arthra]

"This is…" Amy narrowed her eyes, looking at the scene. Of Unison Nanoha chasing after Shadow Fate. "Fate-chan is faster overall, but-"

"That form has far greater speed when moving in a straight line." Chrono crossed his arms. "They're cornering her bit by bit, trying to make her create a mistake."

"And that opening," Lindy was clenching her fist. "Should be…"

[Back to Seaside Park]

Another close dodge from Fate, she barely avoided it.

""-!""

But then she was locked in place. By a pink-white Rings of mana. Nanoha's Restrict Lock.

Then a large magic circle appeared below her, shooting out white strings of light and pink chains that tied her even further from moving. Makoto's String Bind and Nanoha's Chain Bind.

At the same time, two large magic circles appeared below Unison Nanoha, layered upon each other. She landed on it, looking at the bound Fate with determination.

"We're definitely saving you, Fate-chan!" She raised her staff skyward. "Gather, Shimmer of Bonds! Let friendship become Light!"

Alisa's ribbon that was tied began glowing and pulsing in power, and white-pink lights began gathering themselves from the circle. Into a large cluster of mana in front of them and the tip of the staff.

'Let Despair,' Makoto muttered inside Nanoha. 'Find Rest.'

A quick twirl from the staff, before Raising Heart was pointed at Fate.

[Resonance detected. Bonds affirmed. The Symphony of Salvation, Starlight Breaker—Ready!]

And the duo declared as one.

'"Starlight Breaker: Symphonia!!!"'

A wave of overwhelming and pure, resonant light—accompanied by a single, perfect chord from a celestial lyre—washed over the form of Shadow Fate.

The mask didn't shatter; it dissolved.

The puppet strings didn't snap; they unravelled.

The corruption was not destroyed; it was soothed and purified.

[Fate's Mind]

She could feel it, a bright warmth purging away the darkness. Stripping her away from its grip.

She looked up, her eyes almost blinded by the shine.

Two hands, Of pure light. Of a boy and a girl. Extending towards her.

Fate hesitated. Afraid of making a connection.

The hands didn't run away. Patiently waiting for her.

She…extended her hands towards them. Towards her salvation. Both of her hands were holding onto them.

They pulled her towards the light.

…So…warm…

+++

Bardiche's wooden form cracked, revealing the pristine device from within, the jewel returning to its original colour.

Fate floated in the air for a single moment before gravity came due. But before she could descend, Unison Nanoha caught her quickly yet gently.

'The corruption level…is lowered now,' Amy breathed out, awed by what happened. 'It's safe.'

"Fate! Fate!"

Arf cried out, rushing towards her master who was held by Unison Nanoha in a bridal carry. The latter gently delivered her to Arf, who cried tears of relief, hugging the calm, unconscious form of her master.

Unison Nanoha was smiling in relief, and took a distance to give them space, landing on the ground.

Then it broke. Unison Nanoha separated into Nanoha and Makoto, both of them on their knees, but conscious.

"Nanoha! Makoto!"

Both of them were at their limits, their heads throbbing and aching. Nanoha even had her hand burned by a sigil that Yuuno was familiar with. The same one on his hand.

He tried to ease their pain, healing their mental wounds as much as possible.

Then Makoto turned to look at them, one eye, covered by his hair, completely yellow.

"...Who…are you…?"

It was still his voice, though with a strange echo. But it was pure confusion.

Both of them had their hearts dropped. He lost his memories on both of them.

"...Right," Nanoha was determined. She promised to herself, didn't she? "I'll help you remember, Makoto-senpai."

He tilted his head in confusion.

For a single moment, the world was at peace. Arf cried happily and silently while hugging Fate, while the trio took a deep breath.

Then the alarm at Arthra flared.

'Dimensional Interference!?' Amy couldn't believe what was detected. "A wide-area magical attack from another dimension is heading straight for them and us!'

Before anyone could react, Amy quickly declared. 'Ah, six seconds before impact!'

They could feel the attack coming, the power strong and overwhelming. It was targeted at Fate.

"-!"

Makoto didn't think. He just acted. It wasn't about saving someone, but to move despite the fear, despite the pain.

His body cannot move, but another could.

"THANATOS!"

Death came. The cape of coffins behind it floating sinisterly. Everyone looked at it in terror, but before they realised it, it moved towards Arf and Fate.

The familiar had her eyes widened, and hugged Fate as if to protect her from the incoming blow.

Thunder struck, at both Arthra and the park.

Screams erupted at the ship, but Amy reacted quickly, immediately typing at a rapid beat. "Bingo! Got a lock on the coordinates of the attacker!"

"Good job, Amy!" Lindy looked at the screen. "How are the others!?"

[Seaside Park]

There was no pain. Arf cautiously opened her eyes, surprised by the lack of pain. Her eyes widened at the sight.

The skeletal monster, the creature that brought her terror from appearance alone…was crackling with purple electricity, its arms opened wide, covering both of them. It took the attack head on.

"You…"

It did not say anything. Merely stared.

It then nodded, before looking at the still form of his other self.

"…"

No words were exchanged, but there wasn't any need to.

Thanatos floated above Makoto, its form disappearing into shards of blue glass, before being absorbed by the latter, returning to his Sea of Souls.

A small beat, then Makoto fainted on the railings, but was held by Nanoha and Yuuno before he fell down into the sea.

"SENPAI! "MAKOTO!"

+++

[Arthra]

"Seriously…!"

Chrono grumbled out, but he couldn't help but appreciate what happened.

"You're reckless. You blur the line between courage and self-destruction. …But maybe disaster isn't all you bring."

Lindy quickly ordered a few people before asking the people at the Engineering section.

"How's the damage? Can it be repaired?"

"Extensive, captain," the mechanic replied from the screen. "But we should be able to finish before midnight on Earth's time."

"Good, please do so."

Lindy took a deep breath, angered by the fact the children were targeted. Especially because it was aiming directly at Fate, the enemy's ally.

Still, she was glad they managed to rescue her on time, even doing the impossible. She couldn't help but quip to herself.

"They're children… but perhaps only children could still believe enough to fight despair this way."

[End of Arc 5: Garden of Sorrow | To be Continued]
 
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