The Commander has access to the Chaos Gacha before the crash, then wakes up with barely any memories. At least he has a helpful voice in his head to remind him of the rules and stuff. Now if only she'd tell him more about his actual life!
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I feel like it wouldn't, but that's just me.Oh I honestly thought he would reroll Royal Beastkin since race change can be rerolled I'm curious how would Newtype would effect his blood
Chatterbox. No question.I feel like it wouldn't, but that's just me.
Also I had no idea you could reroll race changes, I just thought they started stacking. Thank you for letting me know!
Oh, right, out of curiosity's sake, who do you think the Mortal Enemy is?
chatterbox cause heretics are above epics and I don't see nikke from the ark trying to kill the commander for obvious reasonsOh, right, out of curiosity's sake, who do you think the Mortal Enemy is?
I could see exactly one Nikke trying to kill him. But said Nikke is also not that strong.chatterbox cause heretics are above epics and I don't see nikke from the ark trying to kill the commander for obvious reasons![]()
You mean crow yeah she not that strong or she actually can't directly try to killI could see exactly one Nikke trying to kill him. But said Nikke is also not that strong.
What IS IT with stockpiling Tickets? So many authors do this ..have a Bronze Trait Ticket, a Silver Random Ticket, a Gold Trait Ticket and a Gold Random Ticket.
large spiky fruit immediately forms, and I struggle to hold its cumbersome form.
For the first part, he got those tickets at the same time it was revealed that Marian loves him, so I feel it's justified that his chaotic state of mind made him forget about the tickets.What IS IT with stockpiling Tickets? So many authors do this ..
In a Fight He wasted time and Energy to make a fruit...yeah im Out wtf
You're telling me.So cruel that he got all that stuff that could have saved Marian only after she died. Yeah, this really is Nikke.
I will try to keep that under consideration, and hope that the gacha lets the story flow better, next time.This is great so far. Since you asked for criticism, though, I'd have most likely had him tell his squad of the important and emotional stuff right away, and then tell them he'd reveal everything later when they had time (probably at the Outpost, but he'd just think after the mission).
There's a slight tonal dissonance between getting just what he needed slightly too late to save his friend, and talking about awkward Gacha powers. There's also a bit of strange pacing issues caused by it, and flows slightly awkwardly. The scene with the headpats would remain unchanged, obviously, since that is one of the ones that would help Marian.
I want to be clear - this is still good, and I still enjoy it a lot. The pacing and tone stuff is mild enough, and I'm fully aware of just how hard the Gacha makes these things. You asked for criticism, though, so I hope this helps! :]
Likely not going to get it, since the lowest ticket it's available on is Platinum.
Everything said, I'm surprised that no one was questioning Anis's hostility.