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Why was so much detail and focus spent on E88 being right about everything they believed? It feels like they had more depth than anyone else in the story.

Unironically because you keep asking/complaining about it/telling the author to super pinky promise that they aren't a Nazi.

I don't really see this with any other fic or to this degree atleast and I give the author bonus points for sticking it out. Spite and lulz are powerful motivators, whichever one it was in the end. You can write a story without being that thing or the things that happen in it.
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It was probably meant to be a vastly shorter arc, but people kept on asking for it and so the author felt compelled to give the audience what it clamored for. Notice how quickly the story escalated and ended once the S9 happened.
 
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Ooh, I will also post a list of completed worm fics that I thought were ok. I actually think this fic might be favorite completed one though.

A Cape in Konoha (Worm/Naruto AU)

A Wand for Skitter (Worm/HP)

A Word

Charity Begins at Home

East of Eden: A New Twist on an Old Cycle

Dominion (Worm, S9!Taylor)


Yeah, it is interesting how original and memorable this fic is despite following the stations of canon to a certain extent.
I'll add Hope Through Overwhelming Firepower and What Rains You Bring to that list.

I really enjoyed the lack of solid connection between some chapters. Where the world just comes back into focus with the previous focus totally ignored. It hits that old school pulp vibe that I've been missing. Usually these days there's a solid connection between chapters through the whole story.
 
Not canonizing that Epilog? You're a Bad man Daniels.

Could have sworn I threadmarked it. Fixed.

Bravo snuts, bravo. This was my favorite wormfic ever, and honestly the obsession with it took over my life for the past month to a probably unhealthy degree. I really really hope you continue to write transgressive art for QQ and don't feel chased off now that you've finished what you came here to do.

I'm not chased off. I'm just, you know, brain all wrung out of ideas.

Had you decided on the ending's pacing before you posted chapter 1?

Yes. A concept like this requires either all of the planning or none of it, and I chose the former. Right from the start I had a spreadsheet laying out charm studyin' time day by day, from start to finish. Like most plans it didn't completely survive contact with the enemy, but nothing was juggled more than a day or two.

Are there any fanworks in the Parahumans fandom, or something else that SB/SV/QQ likes, that you particularly hated around the time you first started writing this?

Not really no. Though one funny thing is that I just kind of stopped reading fics because of a strange feeling of 'that's not how it goes' - my brain was too full of my version of events to appreciate alternatives.

Yeah, it is interesting how original and memorable this fic is despite following the stations of canon to a certain extent.

Them reverse butterflies, man. But mostly I don't care. I originally intended to have Armsmaster get away with murder, for example, but then I had the idea of the Quicksilver conversation to come back and bite him, and I liked that scene more than "look, it's not station of canon."

What happened to Jack Slash and Bonesaw?

Bonesaw is probably still alive. I wonder what might happen with her, with Jack no longer around to steer.

Oh? Do you have another fiction going?

No, I have an actual job job. You'll note how there are no e-begging links in my signature.

Why was so much detail and focus spent on E88 being right about everything they believed? It feels like they had more depth than anyone else in the story.

Because I wanted to, and (because I'm not reliant on internet likes for either income or self-worth) could do it.

It was probably meant to be a vastly shorter arc, but people kept on asking for it and so the author felt compelled to give the audience what it clamored for. Notice how quickly the story escalated and ended once the S9 happened.

Nope. The audience never once nudged me off my story outline, in one direction or the other. I want to say that I was completely impervious to their opinions, but that's not strictly true. When I posted the rally chapter and self-appointed moral guardian goricnac didn't hate it, I unexpectedly found myself filled with shame and regret at not going harder.

If only Taylor hadn't been too cranky about getting called in on her day off to go to the afterparty I could have treated the audience to Sven leading the room in a rousing singalong of local favorite ditty Some kikes (get turned into ashes in my oven). It hammers home that 'wtf is even their stance on the holocaust' feeling even further, and it's super offensive.

Alas, staying true to your vision is a sword that cuts both ways.

I really enjoyed the lack of solid connection between some chapters. Where the world just comes back into focus with the previous focus totally ignored. It hits that old school pulp vibe that I've been missing. Usually these days there's a solid connection between chapters through the whole story.

Yes, that's clearly a deliberate stylistic choice and not my hate for writing filler.
 
Ziz on best of all possible worlds duty is an existential nightmare, until she powers down nobody on bet has anything resembling freedom of will and she would definitely go into stable orbit a few centuries before running out of juice.
Tell that to children starving in ditches. How much free will do they have?

:V

But also, if time is like a river, the Simurgh is like a dam-- it has no reason to care about each random droplet. The vast majority of human misery is not a deliberate product of any individual persons goals but the whole system, meaning dismantling those systems does not have to infringe on the individuals any more than those bad systems already infringed on them.

The guy forced by circumstances to work 80 hours a week for crap pay to live in a glorified box-- in first world countries, even-- what is this free will? Under his lord and savior Simurgh-chan, things start getting better at levels of policy-making he has never had a meaningful voice in. How has he lost free will? He's certainly gained agency, because the conditions for happiness are generally going to include more choices.

The only guys who "won't have anything resembling freedom of will" are the luxurious few who were in positions to significantly alter the course of history for everyone else, and would use that power to make all thoise other people more miserable. Whatever free will is, they don't deserve it in my book.
 
Yes, that's clearly a deliberate stylistic choice and not my hate for writing filler.
What good steak has filler?

Filler is what you put in cheap food to make the 'premium' part look larger. Sometimes you want a filler loaded fic where every detail of life is chewed over until nothing remains. Other times you want a stripped down, important bits only fic.
 
What good steak has filler?

Filler is what you put in cheap food to make the 'premium' part look larger. Sometimes you want a filler loaded fic where every detail of life is chewed over until nothing remains. Other times you want a stripped down, important bits only fic.
Does 30k-ish words of explaining nazi ideology with little to no plot happening during not count as filler?
 
Does 30k-ish words of explaining nazi ideology with little to no plot happening during not count as filler?
If that's all you saw for the that section of the story I think your biases colored your reading. She clearly was juggling trying to gain powers against patrolling, trolling heroes, and getting the shit kicked out of her by Hookwolf.
 
I'd argue the hard materialism of this work and Worm as a whole means that no one ever actually had free will. Literally everyone and everything is dancing on the strings of causation and probability. At least with Joy in charge (I read that right, right? That's her English name?) the meat puppets are happy while dancing on strings.
Even Taylor is a meat puppet to someone, Aisha, specifically to her notes she has been trained to obey unconditionally. :V

I love this story, super happy to have read it.
 
FWIW, I... well, I can't say I enjoyed all of it, but this was a good (terrible) story.

ses, as usual, is spot on.
So how does it feel to manage over a hundred fucking chapters on a 5 a week schedule without slipping and disappearing for an unexpected hiatus you absolute fucking madlad.
I don't think it ended with a whimper personally. I can't see any other way for it to end but her trying to an hero
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Turns out that when art is actually transgressive, it doesn't get a bunch of smarmy cunts praising it for being transgressive. It gets shut the fuck down.
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In summary:
Congratulations on both a completed story (and holy crap, the update rate), and a quality telling.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

My personal curiosity:
Did the Evil Taylor who non-canonically survived survive the end of the world? How's she doing?
What would she be up to, in the 'after' times?
 
BITN killed Evil Taylor and turned her in for the Kill Order signed by Tagg. I don't get why people keep asking about 'the surviving Evil Taylor'.
 
BITN killed Evil Taylor and turned her in for the Kill Order signed by Tagg. I don't get why people keep asking about 'the surviving Evil Taylor'.

I think you missed the unthreadmarked snippet Snuts wrote. He says it's not canon but really everyone knows it is.
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B19.5:
https://forum.questionablequesting....shard-worm-exalted.18226/page-84#post-5959860

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Which reminds me - I've still got no idea what BITN stands for is short for.
 
Never got the chance to post this when I first guessed the name. But here in all its glory is the inspiration for Taylor's only good idea this entire story.



I am despondent that we never got a chance to watch her act out the scooby doo tier slasher movie villain on some poor smucks inna woods.

Edit: I apologise for the lack of pixels in the video, 13 yr old YouTube videos are even worse than I remember 240p being.
 
Sad to reach the end, but glad the story finished clean and strong. A shame about those hundred-and-something worlds, but hey. For an omelette you break eggs.

The ten thousand or so loose ends that Taylor forgot or ignored because she no longer cared were probably the only element of the story I genuinely disliked. It was a reasonable characterization but fuck if it wasn't annoying to have interesting parts of the setting vanish from view repeatedly.

1.8 megabytes of raw text, huh? Sounds like a lot. Felt like a lot. I suppose I'll host general discussion and questions of the work as a whole, until the thread gets archived as complete or sinks into the abyss, or whatever happens to stories when they end.
What made you wan to invest this amount of time and effort into a work of fanfiction? Or this one in particular?

Why "Esper", was there some Final Fantasy implication that went over my head? Was it a throwaway?

Was there any particular state you imagined the Exalted cosmology being in when devising the fusion?

How could you not turn Brockton Bay into a sundown town (Shadowlands) haunted by Empire ghosts? Worm as a setting doesn't have to be soulless, it just seems that way on account of the unreliable narrators.
 
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Which reminds me - I've still got no idea what BITN stands for is short for.

It's never been officially answered but there are two contenders, depending on your view of what kind of mentality Taylor had at the time of naming the team:

  • Bump in the night
  • Break in the n*****
Given that Sophia was repeatedly raped, there is some real ambiguity here.
 
It's never been officially answered but there are two contenders, depending on your view of what kind of mentality Taylor had at the time of naming the team:

  • Bump in the night
  • Break in the n*****
Given that Sophia was repeatedly raped, there is some real ambiguity here.

There is zero ambiguity, snuts gave out the cookie long before some other guy came in with his guess claiming it was obvious and that everyone else just hadn't "been around racists enough"
 
The ten thousand or so loose ends that Taylor forgot or ignored because she no longer cared were probably the only element of the story I genuinely disliked. It was a reasonable characterization but fuck if it wasn't annoying to have interesting parts of the setting vanish from view repeatedly.

What can I say, I am firmly against Chekov's right to bear arms. The idea that every gun that appears must be fired makes things contrived and predictable. I prefer haphazard and unpredictable.

What made you wan to invest this amount of time and effort into a work of fanfiction? Or this one in particular?

I had to get it out of my head somehow, it was taking up far too much space. And a personal motto of mine is "if you stopped doing things just because you realized it was a bad idea, you'd never get anything done." I repeat it to myself whenever my planning optimism meets labor requirements.

Why "Esper", was there some Final Fantasy implication that went over my head? Was it a throwaway?

Yeah, it's a Final Fantasy reference. Sometimes the summoned monsters are called 'espers', and sometimes 'eidolons'. A subtle signal of who she considers herself a peer of.

Was there any particular state you imagined the Exalted cosmology being in when devising the fusion?

No, it's safely Mr Not Appearing In This Story.

How could you not turn Brockton Bay into a sundown town (Shadowlands) haunted by Empire ghosts? Worm as a setting doesn't have to be soulless, it just seems that way on account of the unreliable narrators.

I rejected the idea of shadowlands being a thing right away. Given the state of Earth bet, if shadowlands could form they'd already be all over the place, and it'd be a massive AU.

There is zero ambiguity, snuts gave out the cookie long before some other guy came in with his guess claiming it was obvious and that everyone else just hadn't "been around racists enough"

That's something I noticed, reading the comments. I know the propaganda is hot and heavy and starts almost immediately, but holy shit do people not understand how racism works.
 
Yeah, it's a Final Fantasy reference. Sometimes the summoned monsters are called 'espers', and sometimes 'eidolons'. A subtle signal of who she considers herself a peer of.
Well, nuts. One last nod to Taylor's doomed gamer grrl career and I missed it.

It ended too soon :(

It's never been officially answered but there are two contenders, depending on your view of what kind of mentality Taylor had at the time of naming the team:

  • Bump in the night
  • Break in the n*****
Given that Sophia was repeatedly raped, there is some real ambiguity here.
I kind of figured the point wasn't the name but the sound, "bitten", i.e. "hey Sophia, every time anyone talks about you they're talking about how you are bitten. You know. Like that one time."

A strategy Five Shades Lighter Than Her repeated to great effect with Fenrir's Children.
 
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How different would Taylor's journey had gone if she had just gone with the fake gamer girl route when she was first contemplating infiltration plans?
Dunno. She'd have to somehow screw herself out of the excellency because those were explicitly excluded.

Oh, I know, a Save The Princess storyline. Uber is captured and Taylor is dragooned into rescuing him by Kaiser, who assigns her the secondary goal of making xbox live more racist.

it's a wipe, go next

Edit: or wait, you meant as her first infiltration. I feel like she'd need a power other than Spirit-tied Pet to do episodic stunts like Uber and Leet do.
 
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@snuts what was Leet's charm?

I dunno. I had no spontaneous ideas for Leet, and I didn't waste time thinking about it since I knew it would never come up. Just like Triumph, Skidmark, and many others.

Edit: or wait, you meant as her first infiltration. I feel like she'd need a power other than Spirit-tied Pet to do episodic stunts like Uber and Leet do.

This is streaming we're talking about. Just Shaping the Ideal Form and a career as 'The Girl' would have worked. But it would have been very brief regardless. Either alt-universe me still kills Uber off somehow, or she gets his power and leaves.
 
So if I'm understanding the implications of Uber's power correctly.
Taylor would have gotten essentially Path to Victory, But one step at time?
Perfect actions, but without the foresight to know what comes next?
I dunno, I reckon that has some legs. Maybe not once she accumulates enough powers, but certainly a street level PTV equivalent without the long range planning / data gathering component sounds hella fun, while stilling being vulnerable to standard anti Coil measures where you get trapped with no ways out, even if you did everything correctly up until that point.
Also allows for stupid video game themed shenanigans.
 
So if I'm understanding the implications of Uber's power correctly.
Taylor would have gotten essentially Path to Victory, But one step at time?
Perfect actions, but without the foresight to know what comes next?
I dunno, I reckon that has some legs. Maybe not once she accumulates enough powers, but certainly a street level PTV equivalent without the long range planning / data gathering component sounds hella fun, while stilling being vulnerable to standard anti Coil measures where you get trapped with no ways out, even if you did everything correctly up until that point.
Also allows for stupid video game themed shenanigans.

No? Ubers power is just "You double your stats". That's literally it. You double your stats when making a skill check as long as you're acting in-theme for the Adorjan excellency (murder yandere)
 

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