Daniel Snuts
Know what you're doing yet?
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Everyone has room to grow, no reason to feel bad. I like the fic so far and the writing quality is good. Maybe a little more show don't tell on actions / emotions, like I noticed the crying scene seemed a tad flat.
As I said, not good at those things. I try, but my brain doesn't work that way.