Convolution - Zerg Taylor
Disclaimer: This is merely a fanwork. I do not own either Worm or...
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evildice | 11 |
"Kekekekeke!"
Nibbler is obviously working as a 1920's noir private investigator.
I think you mean "They" here.We both stopped shuffling through the papers and just looked at her for a moment.
I think you mean "They" here.
Otherwise, I liked this. Though I think you're writing a bit too frantically, and I think Taylor acting a bit too hyper, but that may be because she's a Zerg.
I actually completely forgot about that. Though I still think the plots moving a bit too fast, but that may be due to personal preference more than anything else.Zerg Like typing detected?*
I mean it's less 'In the rear with the gear' and more 'At your throat like a stoat' in terms of buildup so you may have something there.
Time will tell I guess, I find it neat when bizarre triggers actually mess with peoples heads.
* As in that's not really all that human is it? "Well no; there's a good reason for that."
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Thanks!
Taylor's pre-depression (i.e. pre-Emma-betrayal) personality was that of a hyperactive motor-mouth. She's not quite at that level here, but her psychology is certainly less depressed than she was at this point in canon. (Or most other points in canon, frankly.)Otherwise, I liked this. Though I think you're writing a bit too frantically, and I think Taylor acting a bit too hyper, but that may be because she's a Zerg.
Technically this should be Draaaaaaaagging
I haven't gotten the Watsonian reason for this any of the times I've read it, especially since it uses the shoulder blades to actually kill the cat. I thought they only picked the traits that they thought were improvements? (I do know Starcraft up to a point, but that doesn't really include Primal Zerg). Trading shoulder-blades for claws doesn't seem like an equitable trade >.>His shoulder blades retracted into stationary shoulder spikes.
Thanks!
You're not really missing anything major. Note how the eyes worked as you had intuited -- Giggler has four eyes, two of which are his original zergling eyes, two of which are cat-like. So that is a Zerg mechanism which was represented.I haven't gotten the Watsonian reason for this any of the times I've read it, especially since it uses the shoulder blades to actually kill the cat. I thought they only picked the traits that they thought were improvements? (I do know Starcraft up to a point, but that doesn't really include Primal Zerg). Trading shoulder-blades for claws doesn't seem like an equitable trade >.>
Or am I missing something critical?
No problem
I...am confused about how extra reach without sacrificing balance and stability could be equally effective outside of game mechanics, but I'm sure I can fabricate the appropriate BS about saved resources improving speed and so onYou're not really missing anything major. Note how the eyes worked as you had intuited -- Giggler has four eyes, two of which are his original zergling eyes, two of which are cat-like. So that is a Zerg mechanism which was represented.
Your assumption that his old shoulder spikes were better weapons than what Giggler has now, though: that's unfounded.
Primal Zerglings and Primal Ultralisks both have four legs, and attack with their forelimbs, and they're exactly as effective in combat as the basic Swarm versions.
(The non-basic improved Swarm versions are better, of course.)
There's a bunch of possible reasons.I...am confused about how extra reach without sacrificing balance and stability could be equally effective outside of game mechanics, but I'm sure I can fabricate the appropriate BS about saved resources improving speed and so on![]()
He glanced at the kitchen clock again. "We'll talk about it tonight."
"I just went for a walk."And now Danny has a WHOLE DAY to worry about the implications that Taylor wanted it to stay.
Taylor is a rebellious teen." I folded a dog-ear to mark the page" <Clearly Taylor is a heinous villain. That's what bookmarks are for, Taylor!
Jealous: adj Resentful or bitter in rivalry; envious: jealous of the success of others."I felt a minor pang of jealousy that, as a guy, he wouldn't have to spend any particular effort on his hair." <Almost certain that should be envy, not jealousy.