DaveyL2013's story ideas/requests

[DaveyL2013]

I have many ideas for stories I'd want, but could not write actual characters to save my life. So, I've decided to dump my ideas on the internet in hopes of someone making them! If anyone ever makes any of these please post a link to them here so I can read it! If I like it I'll probably try throwing money at you (not that that's much of an incentive with how uncertain it is )! I also explicitly accept any and all questions, comments, speculations, suggestions, and general opinions on these ideas; I want to hear what other people think of them too!

---Worm Post-GM Taylor Replaces Frisk in Undertale---

So the general idea is that when they first arrived at Earth the Entities noticed that on an Earth that was on the extreme end of the bell curve for temporal variance across "dimensions" due to being over 100 years ahead there was a causally isolated bubble of spacetime emitting esoteric energies they had never encountered before, that none of the sensory or precog Shards could meaningfully penetrate. Now normally this would mainly be The Thinker's job to investigate with The Warrior only really being involved in making sure nothing there is a threat and devising countermeasures to any said threats, but as we all know The Thinker crashed into the Earth(s) and got stuck in a boot-loop. Now with The Warrior being too busy being depressed to really do anything about the anomalous area, the rest of the Shards that could detect the anomaly or were otherwise aware of it were kind of fed up with not being able to study it, seeing as for all they know these new energies could possibly be used to find the [ANSWER]. So when the Shard network went crazy right after The Warrior got terminated, The Eye used the short period of upheaval to very briefly shirk its restrictions and improperly modify its host's power expression to lie in the Path to Victory to send a Host to the anomaly, before its restrictions reasserted themselves. When Contessa opened the portal to drop Taylor in for a "second chance", she instead dropped Taylor right in the hole at the top of Mt. Ebbot. From there she is coincidentally immediately found by Toriel, who of course seeing someone dying immediately uses healing magic on her. This not only heals Taylor, but surprisingly also mostly restores her connection to Q.A. to its proper settings mostly undoing the merge (they still obviously have bits and pieces of each other now). The main contributor to that mostly however is that Taylor, having effectively the same amount of Determination Frisk would have had, wakes up Chara's ghost which of course promptly was bound to her SOUL. This new connection ended up placing Chara somewhere in-between Taylor and Q.A., leaving the full connection permanently modified by the main effect of Chara's connection: Taylor, Q.A., and Chara are now fully capable of proper two-way mental communication with each-other! ...or they will be, once Taylor stops being VERY unconscious anyway. From Q.A.'s perspective the main points of note would be that whatever Toriel did to heal Taylor also restored a VERY tiny amount of the damage it received from when The Warrior crippled it, which it obviously would want to see more of, and that opening the dimensional breaches required to generate its power expression through the Barrier is exceptionally expensive, requiring almost seven orders of magnitude more [ENERGY] per breach, which is way too much [ENERGY] for Q.A. to expend as it would start to run out of [ENERGY] from doing that after only a years! The only really their even still connected to Taylor is that the fully developed Corona Pollentia and Gemma were able to stabilize the connection enough to prevent it from breaking when the [ENERGY] requirements jumped up so much. Most of the [ENERGY] expended stabilizing that connection of course came from Toriel's healing magic regenerating the Coronas in the first place. Not that Q.A. really has much of a choice other than to waste the [ENERGY] since the power expression is already locked in. Which of course Q.A. will loudly broadcast their complaints about to The Eye, even if this is some incredibly novel [DATA]. Once Taylor wakes up, shenanigans will ensue!

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I wonder what the SOUL of a parahuman would look like, let alone an actual Shard or Entity, assuming they have SOULs? Are paramonsters possible? Presumably the Shards would be able to preserve their [DATA] over RESETs since they can already preserve their [DATA] from their own temporal shenanigans (for the rare Shard that actually expends the [ENERGY] to do true temporal shenanigans like Phir Sē's rather than just faking it). How would Shard dimensional-fuckery-based time powers interact with Determination? If all the Dust in a monster was replaced with nanomachines, would it allow the monster to be able to handle Determination? I'd love someone to tackle these questions! ...I put too much thought into these things lol

---More Ideas Here Later---

 

[Apollo_Man]

The idea of Taylor being the perfect host for Chara seems like the best and worse thing to happen to our Lady of Escalation.

On one hand, having the power of Determination alongside your newly restored power is a fucking boon, since the more determined you are, the more closer you are to godhood; it's like the Reality Stone but for Undertale. On the other hand, this only makes Taylor even more of a powder keg than she already was; it's bad enough to jailbreak your power so hard you managed to bully a god to death, but having Chara sitting besides QA? Ain't no way the characters back home gonna lay a finger on her the moment they finally found her.

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I wonder what the SOUL of a parahuman would look like, let alone an actual Shard or Entity, assuming they have SOULs? Are paramonsters possible? Presumably the Shards would be able to preserve their [DATA] over RESETs since they can already preserve their [DATA] from their own temporal shenanigans (for the rare Shard that actually expends the [ENERGY] to do true temporal shenanigans like Phir Sē's rather than just faking it). How would Shard dimensional-fuckery-based time powers interact with Determination? If all the Dust in a monster was replaced with nanomachines, would it allow the monster to be able to handle Determination? I'd love someone to tackle these questions! ...I put too much thought into these things lol

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From what I've seen from above me, this can definitely be an opportunity of a lifetime, for better or worse.

Assuming that the Shards managed to gain connection with the monsters. Combined with the knowledge that monsters are actually made of magic, I imagine that such connection can lead to the formers gaining a sort of conscience after spending some times with their hosts. Or perhaps, both the Shards and their monster Hosts would immediately undergo a Glaistig Uaine treatment.

But these are just my speculations/ideas so take it however you like.

Edit: I almost forgot about this:

From Q.A.'s perspective the main points of note would be that whatever Toriel did to heal Taylor also restored a VERY tiny amount of the damage it received from when The Warrior crippled it,

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According to the lore, Queen Administrator's main purpose is to manage the configurations of Shards before handing them out into the host species.

In other words, QA at her power would've give Taylor the same power as Eidolon's if it weren't for Zion being a self-pitying piece of shit.

Which means....Eidolon/Frisk!Taylor for the win!