mend
Making the rounds.
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It's been a while since I've seen that penguin profile picture. It's good to see you back!
I had to do a double take; a harem story not in the NSFW section? An odd choice, but I'm interested to see how it will play out. If you do plan on having some NSFW stuff, I'd advising moving it there. You'd get triple the engagement, at least.
I wonder what's going on in Sky Peak that's stopping all those heroes and why their security is so tight. And that's one way to start his story there... It makes me feel like he might be a bit under prepared.
A question:what were the rewards for the "breaking up" quest? I might have missed that one.
Not a big deal, but there were a minor errrors like missing words sometimes. I think Google Docs or Grammarly can catch those.
Thanks for the chapter; I'm looking forward to see where this goes.
I had to do a double take; a harem story not in the NSFW section? An odd choice, but I'm interested to see how it will play out. If you do plan on having some NSFW stuff, I'd advising moving it there. You'd get triple the engagement, at least.
I wonder what's going on in Sky Peak that's stopping all those heroes and why their security is so tight. And that's one way to start his story there... It makes me feel like he might be a bit under prepared.
A question:what were the rewards for the "breaking up" quest? I might have missed that one.
Not a big deal, but there were a minor errrors like missing words sometimes. I think Google Docs or Grammarly can catch those.
but you're not supposed to say that out loud.
Thanks for the chapter; I'm looking forward to see where this goes.
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