Lillie Jones
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Thanks for the chapter
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let also keep in mind that it might seem to Daniel that Kreese swooped in at Lucas most vulnerable moment to corrupt him and teach him Evil Karate, at least at first until either Kreese or Lucas tells him the whole truth but until then Lucas will have a Fallen Student thing going on maybe a "A Pupil of Mine Until He Turned to Evil" tropeHe's feeling guilty at the fact that he played Daniel to learn his legacy for selfish purposes, after realizing that he respected the man just as much as he does Kreese now.
Still, Miyagi-Do isn't a real fit for who Lucas is, so it is a reasonable excuse to break the commitment.
Well, that is, until it becomes known that he was also Kreese's student.
Then the salt will flow.
Gib reccomendationsthere are some great Cobra Kai fics I have to recommend. I've checked some profiles and highly recommend you all branch out beyond just Defeat Does Not Exist into other fics.
This man's fics: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/13829890/Dontatme420
These are actually the last few chapters of the entire fanfic.
There is plenty more for this fanfic. This is only the first book in Lucas' story, thank you very much for your kind words.You said this was nearing the end, and frankly, that is literally the only bad thing about this fic, I'm really invested and would love to read even more, I could easily read 300k words of this, if you can't do it that's fine, I fully understand if this is complete on your end.
If you do add another arc, or even a sequel fic, please put a threadmarked notice here so myself and other fans can be notified.
Nonetheless this was amazing fun, really hoping for like a time skip or something at the end, even just something like those old movies where they play 'Don't You (Forget About Me)' by Simple Minds and do a little montage thing with aa sentence or two telling the audience what happened to characters after the credits rolled. Examples From TV Tropes
There is plenty more for this fanfic. This is only the first book in Lucas' story, thank you very much for your kind words.
If you're referring to one of the extras from the original show I decided to flesh out into a real character, Charlotte, she showed up at the tournament.I liked the story so far
But I do want more scenes of our protagonist with his girlfriend (I'm not entirely clear if they really had a thing for each other or not, it's kind of suspicious that the girl didn't appear again after their date and he didn't mention her in the tournament or at least I didn't find her)
I think they really like each other but I thought it was strange that she didn't go to the tournament to support the boy.
It would be interesting if she had appeared more or maybe we need an extra or a next chapter to know about her, I don't know (it would be interesting if our main character taught her his mystical fusion karate miyagi kobra)
By the way, whatever she will call her new karate, it is neither miyagi nor kobra so it deserves a new name (something like a mix of Chinese/Japanese miyagi and kobra which would be American) and I don't remember but are there international tournaments or would you do one if the opportunity arises
Like they are going to fight in another country in an international karate tournament
Thanks, it slipped my mind, so what do you think about international tournaments that could be held?If you're referring to one of the extras from the original show I decided to flesh out into a real character, Charlotte, she showed up at the tournament.
Are you going to continue in this thread or make a new one and link it when you do?That concludes Book 1. The next book would cover everything that happened in what would be Season 1 of the Cobra Kai Netflix series in the scenario I created. Needless to say, but the plot and character dynamics are of course completely different.
Not to spoil anything, but this fanfiction follows Cobra Kai, it's a great show on Netflix that is a sequel to the Karate Kid trilogy. There is a world tournament by the middle of the fifth season that is introduced, I won't say much more than that. I recommend you watch that show, Cobra Kai is amazing.Thanks, it slipped my mind, so what do you think about international tournaments that could be held?
Not sure yet, I think it will still be on this thread though.Thanks for writing
I'm glad to see Luke growing as a person
Are you going to continue in this thread or make a new one and link it when you do?
We'll see if Kreese is done...the man proved in the show and movies he pretty much never gives up.Wait so Kreese is done ? Damn I really hoped they could fix this , the movie really only showed him as this harsh taskmaster but didnt discuss how his life and probable ptsd affected him, I was hoping Lucas making him better would be good for him but well .... Also damn Eli's a bitch betraying his friend for pussy
As for the PTSD, yes, the show covered it. He refused help from psychiatrists thinking they were wrong because they weren't there in Vietnam and probably other wars. It's what denied him re-entry into the army.Wait so Kreese is done ? Damn I really hoped they could fix this , the movie really only showed him as this harsh taskmaster but didnt discuss how his life and probable ptsd affected him, I was hoping Lucas making him better would be good for him but well .... Also damn Eli's a bitch betraying his friend for pussy
As for the PTSD, yes, the show covered it. He refused help from psychiatrists thinking they were wrong because they weren't there in Vietnam and probably other wars. It's what denied him re-entry into the army.
You'll have to wait and see. I don't want to spoil anything. Also thank you man! Cobra Kai deserves all the appreciation it gets, especially its fanfics. Edit: I have the next several chapters already written, might edit in between here and there for a few more details but still.Ah rip then been a while since I watched cobra kai, tho do you plan on having lucas recover his relationship with his senseis or did you not plan that far ahead ? The story is great btw loved your writing
Edit : Ninja'ed
That actually sounds like a really really good idea. Pacing wise it makes the most sense, not to mention slice of life stuff really works well for the setting and characters. Consider the request you've made granted!Could keep it on same thread but have a couple short filler chapters to make the distinction of ARC 1 and ARC 2.
Maybe a bit of Lucas and Robby skateboarding, Lucas setting up that PC he spoke about a few chapters ago, just a couple slice of life chappies to bleed off the pressure and tension the competition and drama created.
Hell, could have Lucas and Anthony play FIFA online together in secret, stay in touch that way?