Honestly? I quite loved the snippet. In one post it transmited more to me than 10 posts of some other stories i've read.
About being Disturbed: i dunno about others in this site, but i, atleast, wasn't Disturbed by this, but that may be more my fault than yours, because your snippet was perfectly made by my standards.
Seriously, i think it takes either the most deviant of shits, or RL Lovecraft for people here at QQ to get disturbed by things.
Really, i can't help but like the guy: he comes across here as evil, yes, but my favourite kind: "Practical Evil", or otherwise named " Evil with purpose", like OG Bondrewd or Ra's al Ghul, maybe even Thanos in some prespectives, as opposed to the opposite kind, the "Evil for Lulz", like Joker, Jack, or our very QQ own Shiro.
TL;DR: it's good shit. Got me metaphorically hard for more. Maybe even close to an RL half-chub.