01: Prologue [01]
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"Life is a bitch." said he who had experienced the bad end of life...
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"Life is a bitch." said he who had experienced the bad end of life...
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A marvel fic once again as I know my shit there the best.
[X] Kitty Pride
you have to wait than no finding the love interest in the start or the middle of the story let that shit happen on like the last run plsA marvel fic once again as I know my shit there the best.
It's a story about a civilian living in the marvel world. Just a normal dude. Knows nothing of our marvel knowledge. and has a fucked up life like everyone. Anyways, the catch is, he has the powers of 'Quicksave' from The Perfect Run—if you haven't read it, read it, it's god tier.
Basically, he's guy with the power to go back in time, at a 'point' he set beforehand. He's trying to find his perfect run in his life—this here is important; he's not trying to find the best MCU run, no, he's trying to find 'his' perfect run at life. And that's gonna be his goal with all the marvel shit mixed together into a fine vine that'd age well—hopefully.
Note: It will not be focused on smut like the beast system. It will have a plot, will follow that plot.
No Harem.
A single love interest.
A young woman named Lilly Dyson has been found dead in a gang's hideout. Research says her kidnapping was reported back in 2016 but she wasn't found even after a lot of investigations and the case was closed."
The recent check-ups of her body tell that she'd been used by the gang members in explicit ways for years. Her body wasn't recognizable when the NYPD found her, unconscious with other women in a prison cell located in the basement of the hideout. Through multiple tests, her identity has been found, and it is being announced that if any of her relatives is listening, please come and collect the body…"
Well thats fucking dark.Lilly had an enlightened moment.
She knew the reason why he hated her, justifiably so.
But… was it really her fault?
'Am I really the reason mom died?'
'Dad died too, am I to be held responsible for his death also?'
what are these?
This would not work. If the gun is frozen in time as well. If the bullets don't leave the gun how can he fire again? And you can't even use 5 different guns since if you fire and just leave it in the air when time resumes the fall of the gun would change the trajectory.Slowly, Warren took his time and shot exactly 5 rounds; each aiming at the guards who had their weapons out.
The bullets came out but were stuck in place.
Warren hesitated, frowning. Would time ever go back to normal? Perhaps he had to give some sort of command? Or maybe there is a limit-
Immediately, the world returned to normal.
This would not work. If the gun is frozen in time as well. If the bullets don't leave the gun how can he fire again? And you can't even use 5 different guns since if you fire and just leave it in the air when time resumes the fall of the gun would change the trajectory.
The best way to so this is to use the guns in their hands to aim at their heads and pull the trigger using their fingers, that way they die when time resumes as they would be holding it so the trajectory would not change due to them holding the gun. And by using one gun per bullet you you don't worry about the bullet not leaving the gun issue.
In chapter 2 it was indeed described like that. But in chapter 1 it written in a way that sounded like the moment the bullet was shot it lost contact with him (while still in the gun barrel).I don't see an issue with it. It's quite possible he has a small field around him and everything he touches. Otherwise his clothes would keep him confined to where ever he stopped time. Or he has a transitive effect that's partially controlled. So he touches the gun, the gun touches the bullets and allows the chemical reaction to happen. The bullet leaves the gun and then slows down as the time stop applies to it now.
Similar things are super common in movies and comics.
Anyway, liking the story so far. The pair of space and time is a nice touch.