Mega Morphing Power Rangers
MMPR/Mega Force AU.
Revised version trimming out the fat and...
MMPR/Mega Force AU.
Revised version trimming out the fat and...
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Flightless Man | 51 |
Thank you very much, it has been something I've wanted to do for years. The idea really came from seeing the one episode when Kimberley is kidnapped into becoming Rita. I really liked the helmet abilities and gadgets from the original movie, so gave those to everyone. And I had a plate as a kid with the 3 Shark Cycles on it as a kid. I spent many a meal, wondering why the girls had side cars. Learning in the sentai yellow was a boy, made it not a sexist thing anymore and I was very happy to slip that interaction in.Power Ranger fanfiction is rare, so it's nice to see a new and good one. And one with some very interesting setting changes too. I do wonder how much the de-transformed victims remember of their 'monster time' though.
I have to be very careful how I answer this to avoid specific spoilers. I have rough plans for 6 seasons, up to my own version of Countdown to Destruction. The guards helping, was definitely a first step in a larger plan.On another note, are you going to be exploring the wider response to what's basically a monster invasion being fought off by masked heroes? I can totally understand why someone would want to just handwave that, but stuff like when the guard went..
And how the normal human guards were actually useful in response to this is making me wonder how much you're going to be going beyond the 'monster of the day' normal plotline.
Thank you for the feedback. I tried writing the revision in both, but third person feels right for this story.No real opinion on which viewpoint is better to read, but first person can be hard to write in, so if you do do it, see how it feels to write in before you dedicate yourself to a full conversion? I've written in both before, and sometimes stories just feel more correct in one then the other.
Also if you do rewrite the original chapters, I'd prefer it if you kept their original forms available somewhere.
I'm honestly not sure if words in spoilers are counted for word count on these sites. I know there's been trouble with alerts deciding spoilered words don't exist in the past, at least, for deciding when to actually give an alert.And I'll spoiler the old chapters at the bottom of the revised ones, so people can compare at least for a while. In a few weeks I'll probably delete them to get rid of the false inflation on my word count.
I don't think it does, so I'll leave them all up in a spoiler tag. Thanks for making me checkI'm honestly not sure if words in spoilers are counted for word count on these sites. I know there's been trouble with alerts deciding spoilered words don't exist in the past, at least, for deciding when to actually give an alert.
I suspect the relief only lasted until they realized no one had a spare pair of pants.Rainbow energy strikes the monster and like with the shark, causes the changes to revert. Slowly at first the Minotaur shrinks in size, but to Alpha's great pleasure and everyone's relief… a naked principal is revealed.
Ha ha. Yeah, it'll be hard to look him in the eyes ever again.I suspect the relief only lasted until they realized no one had a spare pair of pants.
One every victory, even if I won't show all of them. It really was time to show them having some fun, thanks for reminding me.Well, it might not be a breather episode, but at least they get a party.