Chapter no.69 Eyes That Will Not Look Down
Before Team 7 returned to Konoha, Team 8 stood outside the Hokage's office.
While Hiruzen and Kurenai talked about the Wave mission, Team 8's attention was locked on Naruto's Bingo Book entry.
[ BINGO BOOK DOSSIER ]
[ TARGET #007: "UZUMAKI NARUTO" ]
[ STATUS: ACTIVE CONTRACT ]
[ ISSUED BY: MULTIPLE HIDDEN VILLAGES ]
[ DISTRIBUTION LEVEL: HIGH ]
[ IDENTITY FILE ]
[ NAME: Uzumaki Naruto ]
[ AFFILIATION: Konohagakure no Sato ]
[ SUMMONING AFFILIATION: Unknown. Data suggests a nonstandard summon ("Oscar") ]
[ CLASSIFICATION: Confirmed Jinchuriki of the Nine Tailed Fox ]
[ LINEAGE RECORD ]
[ FATHER: Minato Namikaze. The Yellow Flash of Konoha ]
[ MOTHER: Kushina Uzumaki. The Crimson Valkyrie of Chains ]
[ NOTES: Direct descendant of two high priority combat class assets. Subject possesses abnormal chakra reserves, unknown medical ninjutsu, and hidden jutsu. ]
[ KNOWN ALIASES ]
[ "Son of Calamity". Iwagakure designation ]
[ "Knight of Konoha". Otogakure designation ]
[ RANK AND THREAT ASSESSMENT ]
[ KONOHA RANK: Genin ]
[ IWAGAKURE CLASSIFICATION: B Rank threat ]
[ OTOGAKURE CLASSIFICATION: B Rank threat ]
[ THREAT SUMMARY: Despite low official rank, displays tactics and combat potential comparable to a jonin. Subject's use of Nine Tails chakra elevates potential to S Rank if controlled. ]
[ ENGAGEMENT ADVISORY ]
[ Avoid prolonged contact. Subject demonstrates high adaptability and unknown techniques. If cornered, terminate swiftly or disengage. ]
[ ACTIVE BOUNTIES ]
[ IWAGAKURE: 10,000,000 Ryo. Dead or alive ]
[ OTOGAKURE: 5,000,000 Ryo. Uzumaki Naruto ]
[ OTOGAKURE: 5,000,000 Ryo. "Oscar," Crystal Lizard summon. Specimen retrieval preferred alive ]
A silence formed as the genin just looked at each other, each of them stuck on the same line, the same name, the same implication, wondering if they had read it wrong.
"Team Eight. Office. Now."
That snapped them out of it.
They followed Kurenai into the Hokage's office, and the first thing the genin noticed was the Third Hokage at his desk, fingers pressed to his temples as if the day had already aged him ten years. His pipe lay untouched. His shoulders were straight, but there was a tiredness in his eyes that no posture could hide.
Hinata was still staring down at the entry in her hands until Kurenai stepped closer and snapped her fingers in front of her face.
"Hinata," she said, softer than her command voice. "What's on your mind?"
Hinata simply handed the book over.
Kurenai took it, skimmed the page, and her eyes widened in a way that did not happen often. She looked up slowly, almost unwilling to.
"Naruto… is the Fourth's son?"
Her gaze flicked to the Hokage.
Hiruzen gave a small nod.
Kurenai's mind raced immediately, professional instincts taking over.
Was this a deliberate leak? Who would risk exposing something like this? What else did they leak alongside it? Was it meant to bait foreign villages into acting? Was it meant to force Konoha's hand politically? Was it targeting Naruto specifically, or was Naruto just the loudest piece on the board?
Before she could spiral further, Kiba leaned back with his hands behind his head, trying to act like he was not rattled.
"You're acting like that's more shocking than the stuff Naruto's already revealed to us. Honestly, at this point, I'm not even surprised."
Akamaru barked once, like he was backing Kiba up.
Kurenai opened her mouth, then paused, and let it close again. She did not like agreeing with Kiba.
But she could not argue either.
Hiruzen watched the exchange, something strange stirring behind his tired expression. He had not expected this casual acceptance, like Naruto being the Fourth's son was just another item on a growing list of absurdities.
What had Naruto shown them that made this feel… secondary?
"Hokage sama," Shino said, stepping forward. "May I ask a question?"
"Go ahead."
"How did Naruto receive a Bingo Book entry?"
"A very good question, Shino kun. The truth is, we suspect someone deliberately leaked information about Naruto. Some of it true. Some of it false."
Kiba frowned. "Why would someone even do that?"
Hiruzen's eyes narrowed slightly, but his voice stayed measured.
Normally, this kind of information would be far above a genin's clearance. However, Kurenai had already made it clear that Team Eight was privy to many of Naruto's secrets, and Hiruzen understood that fact could not be undone. More importantly, with the Chunin Exams approaching, these three were likely to be among the first affected when Naruto became a target. Given that reality, Hiruzen decided it was better they understood the situation than be left vulnerable by ignorance.
"A leak like this does not happen by accident," he continued. "It takes access. It takes knowledge. It takes the confidence that the village will be forced to respond. Whoever did this wanted to put a target on Naruto's back, because that forces us to react to outside threats. It forces us to spend resources, move ANBU, tighten patrols, and shift political posture. All of it creates noise."
His fingers tapped once against the desk. "And while we're busy reacting, the person who started it can act in the shadows."
His thoughts twisted toward a familiar name, bitter and inevitable.
Danzo.
Not because Hiruzen wanted it to be him, but because the pattern fit too well. A man who collected secrets like weapons. A man who believed any sacrifice was acceptable if it served his idea of protecting Konoha. A man who would gladly endanger a child if it meant tightening his grip on the village.
Hiruzen kept his expression neutral. These children did not need to hear that name yet.
"Hokage sama. I believe I know who leaked Naruto kun's information."
The room fell into a pin drop silence.
Hiruzen held his gaze on her. Once, Hinata Hyuga had been a soft spoken girl who struggled to speak above a whisper. Now she stood with quiet confidence, like someone who had seen what fear looked like up close and decided she would not bow to it anymore.
"What do you know, Hinata?" he asked. His tone carried authority, the kind that made people understand the seriousness of what they were about to say.
Hinata nodded once. She understood the gravity. She understood that one accusation could shift the delicate balance.
"First… has Kurenai sensei informed you about my involvement in Gato's downfall, and Naruto and I forming an alliance with Zabuza?"
"Of course she has," Hiruzen replied. "She also requested disciplinary action for herself, citing a failure to properly control her squad."
Hinata immediately looked ready to speak in her sensei's defense, but the old man raised a hand, stopping her before she could say a word.
"I have heard every argument she made. This was her first time leading a genin team, and she was thrown into a situation most jonin never face in their entire careers. Under normal circumstances, I would not overlook that."
He paused, eyes sharpening slightly.
"But," Hiruzen continued, "if your information about the leaker proves correct, I can excuse this one mistake."
Team Eight collectively sucked in a breath.
Even as inexperienced genin, they understood what that meant. Konoha was not in a position to freely discipline jonin. Not with tensions rising between villages, not with the Chunin Exams approaching, and not with the other villages beginning to stir. Every capable shinobi mattered. Weakening their own forces over internal mistakes, especially ones born from unprecedented circumstances, would only invite outside aggression.
"But," Hiruzen said again, deliberately stretching the word, "this leniency will not be repeated. If you ever go behind your superior's back on a mission again, there will be consequences."
Hinata bowed her head. "Yes, sir."
With the floor given to her, Hinata spoke at length about the battle against Guren and her subordinates, carefully recounting each stage of the fight. She described the tactics used, the pressure they faced, and most importantly, the moment Guren underwent her strange transformation.
When Hinata finally finished, the room fell quiet.
Hiruzen remained motionless behind his desk, eyes unfocused as his mind worked through the implications. Piece by piece, the information settled into place.
Orochimaru.
The chakra pattern Hinata described during Guren's transformation mirrored the properties of Orochimaru's Curse Mark techniques too closely to be coincidence. That alone tied his former student's hand to the incident, and more importantly, to the leak itself. It was the most solid lead they had so far.
And yet, it raised a far darker concern.
Was Orochimaru actively making a move against Konoha?
"Why do you believe Guren is the one who leaked Naruto's information?"
Hinata nodded, pointing to a specific section of the Bingo Book.
"The entry confirms that Naruto uses the Kyubi's chakra," she said. "That detail could only be known to a very small group. Guren. Zabuza. Haku. Naruto himself. And me."
She hesitated only briefly before continuing. "Zabuza and Haku owe Naruto their lives. I do not believe they would ever betray him. Guren, however, had motive and opportunity."
Hiruzen nodded slowly.
Hinata's reasoning was sound. Combined with the evidence of Guren's transformation and its similarities to the Curse Mark, the conclusion was difficult to ignore. That Orochimaru had not only survived, but successfully refined his experiments, was deeply troubling.
If this was merely the opening move, then darker days lay ahead for Konoha.
Kiba raised his hand halfway, frowning. "Wait, wait. Naruto lost the Kyubi, right? So how the hell was he using Nine Tails chakra?"
That question shifted every gaze in the room to Hinata.
"Yes," she said calmly. "Naruto no longer has the Nine Tails sealed inside him. I believe Guren mistook something else for the Kyubi's chakra."
"Something else?" Kiba echoed. "Like what?"
"A red aura," Hinata replied. "I do not know what it is exactly, but it amplified Naruto's power. It felt different from the foreign chakra. Similar in color, but not in nature."
She hesitated. "You would have to ask Naruto for details."
Hiruzen slowly licked his dry lips. That single statement brought a dozen troubling implications to the surface, but he pushed them aside for now. This was not the time.
"Thank you, Hinata," he said quietly. "That information helps Konoha more than you realize."
Hinata bowed slightly and stepped back.
Hiruzen then looked at all three of them, his presence shifting.
"Team Eight. Naruto no longer possessing the Nine Tails is now an S rank classified secret."
The words hit like a physical weight.
"If even a whisper of this reaches the wrong ears," Hiruzen continued, "other villages will know that Konoha has been weakened. They will test that assumption. Politically. Militarily. Subtly at first, and then not so subtly."
His gaze hardened. "Even casual conversation in the wrong place could spark a conflict. Do you understand the responsibility you are carrying?"
Team Eight straightened immediately.
"Yes, Hokage sama," they said in unison.
Hiruzen studied them for a moment, watching how seriously they took it, how none of them flinched or complained.
There was quiet strength in his eyes.
He glanced at Kurenai. "They are good," he said softly. "You should be proud."
Kurenai gave a faint nod.
"Now then," Hiruzen continued, shifting the tone, "regarding your evaluation as Team 7's backup… Kakashi and Kurenai have spoken very highly of all three of you."
His gaze turned to the side. "Hinata Hyuga. Despite a few… questionable actions, your performance during this mission was excellent. Your reconnaissance work was invaluable, and your archer's approach during the battle with the Hōzuki clan members helped avoid major casualties. You did your clan proud."
Hinata tried to maintain her dignity as a Hyuga, but was failing to stop her excitement.
"Shino Aburame. You maintained a flawless operational record. Both jonin reports mark your actions as exemplary. You represent the gold standard of a shinobi."
Shino nodded slightly, but the subtle buzz from the insects under his coat betrayed the pride he felt.
"Kiba Inuzuka," the Hokage said, turning to the last of the trio. Kiba squared his shoulders, with Akamaru sitting tall beside him.
"Let us start with the good. You are a team player. You showed initiative when it mattered. You placed your team and the civilians first during every confrontation. You patrolled nightly, stayed vigilant, and showed the grit expected from a true Konoha shinobi."
Kiba tried not to grin, but it was a losing battle.
"Now onto the cons," Hiruzen said, steepling his fingers. "Hot headed, quick to provoke fights, especially with Naruto Uzumaki, and a temper that had you yelling at clients."
"I am sorry, Hokage sama. You are right about all of that. I did not know how to react when I saw Naruto again. We had a huge fight during the graduation exam. But we have resolved our differences since then. I consider him a friend. A rival. And an ally."
Hiruzen gave a light clap. "It takes real strength to recognize and admit your flaws. I hope to see you work on them. I see potential in you, Inuzuka Kiba. A great shinobi in the making."
"Thank you." Kiba bowed again, Akamaru mimicking him with a small bow.
"Well then, Team 8, your mission pay and the bounty for the Hōzuki clan bodies will be assessed and handled later. Your commanding officer will inform you when it has been processed. Kiba. Shino. You are dismissed."
Both boys nodded and left the room, the chakra barrier sealing up behind them.
"Now then, Hinata… can you explain how exactly your Byakugan was upgraded?"
Hinata activated her new eyes. "While I do not understand the full mechanics, I believe Naruto's Hawkeyes potion acted as a trigger. It released a unique chakra that interacted with the optic nerves of my Byakugan. The result… awakened what appears to be the Eye of Insight, a trait of the Sharingan. I believe this points to an unknown link between the Hyuga and Uchiha clans."
Hiruzen leaned back slightly, humming in thought. "And the Eye of Hypnotism?"
"We do not know if I have it," Hinata replied after a quick glance at Kurenai.
"Kurenai is your teacher. I trust you two will test and verify that soon."
"Of course," Kurenai said, her voice calm and professional. Internally, however, her thoughts raced. If Hinata truly possessed access to the Eye of Hypnotism, her potential in genjutsu would increase dramatically, and Kurenai was more than willing, even eager, to guide her through mastering it.
"Is your new Byakugan detectable?"
"When inactive, it appears normal. But once I activate it, the pattern is visible. I do not think I can hide it from the Hyuga for long."
Hiruzen's eyes sharpened. "Then you understand the risk this poses. Not just to you, but to Naruto. Anything capable of enhancing the Byakugan would be of extreme interest to the Hyuga main branch. Interest rarely stays harmless for long."
"Hokage sama," Hinata said carefully, "I do not believe the Hyuga would act openly against Naruto. But pressure, investigation, and quiet coercion are realistic possibilities. That said, I will not give them a reason to move against him. If necessary, I will take responsibility for what happened and keep Naruto out of it."
That answer made Hiruzen pause. "Then what is your plan?"
"While watching Guren's transformation, my Byakugan picked up how her chakra was altering her physiology. I plan to lie to the family. I will say I was hit by that special chakra and it mutated my eyes."
Hiruzen considered it.
The lie was built on half truths, carefully arranged to withstand scrutiny. If the Hokage himself affirmed it, the Hyuga elders would have little choice but to accept it. They had no reliable way to verify the details, and challenging the Hokage openly is not something a clan could do. More importantly, the explanation placed Hinata in a role unlike any other within the clan, one that set her apart not as a problem to be contained, but as an asset they could not easily touch.
It was the kind of clever, political move that surprised him coming from the usually reserved girl.
He studied her closely, recalling Kurenai's proud comments about Hinata's dream to reform the Hyuga.
Maybe the new dawn of the Hyuga clan lies with you, Hinata.
Hiashi Hyūga understood that people changed in the shinobi world. In a profession built on violence, loss, and proximity to death, transformation was expected. Shinobi hardened, broke, or adapted. Sometimes all three.
What he did not expect was to see that change reflected so clearly in his own daughter after a single mission.
Hinata sat across from him with her back straight and her hands folded neatly in her lap. Her posture was composed, her expression calm. There was no hesitation in her eyes, no instinctive shrinking away from his gaze. The quiet confidence she carried was subtle, but unmistakable.
The contrast was so stark that for a fleeting, unsettling moment, Hiashi wondered if this was his daughter.
That realization alone told him the mission had not been a simple one.
"Hinata?" he asked, the name leaving his mouth with unfamiliar weight.
"Yes, Father."
"You have… changed."
"A new set of clothes and a bit of confidence can do wonders."
Hiashi's gaze drifted to the armor she wore. It was not elaborate. Compared to the lacquered plates of samurai or ceremonial clan armor, it was almost plain. Shinobi armor culture had never emphasized heavy protection. Mobility, stealth, and chakra mattered more than layered steel. Most shinobi were not expected to survive long enough for stronger armor to matter.
Yet this was different.
Leather reinforced with metal rivets, flexible but durable. The structure was designed not to interfere with precise footwork. It favored quick engagement, controlled strikes, and rapid disengagement. Terrain based movement rather than brute force.
Hiashi recognized the intent immediately.
This armor was made for a practitioner of the Gentle Fist.
It did not restrict the shoulders or wrists. It protected vital points without sacrificing speed. Whoever had chosen it understood how a Hyūga fought, not just how they looked on the battlefield.
"The mission with your team," Hiashi said carefully. "How did it go?"
"I am afraid the Hokage has forbidden us from discussing its details. But it was a success."
He nodded once, accepting the answer. Still, his mind worked through the implications. For the Hokage himself to restrict information from genin meant the mission's rank exceeded what was normal. At minimum, it bordered on A rank territory. Possibly higher.
That was a concern for later.
For now, Hiashi studied his daughter in silence.
"And what of the task I gave you?"
Hinata's expression tensed. "I became Naruto's friend," she said. "But not for the reason you intended."
"Continue."
"I will not use my friendship with Naruto as a political shield to secure my place as heiress," Hinata said. Her voice was firm. "If I am to be the future head of this clan, then I will earn it through strength. Through merit. Not by clinging to the shadow of another."
Silence.
For a moment, Hiashi said nothing. He simply looked at her.
When he finally spoke, his voice was low. "So you disobeyed my order."
"I fulfilled it, but not in the way you wanted," Hinata replied. "Naruto is my friend. Truly. But I will not use him."
"Now that the entire village knows Naruto is the son of the Fourth Hokage, rumors have begun to circulate."
Hiashi fixed his gaze on Hinata, studying her reaction.
"One of those rumors is that you are close to him. Whether you intended it or not, that association carries weight. With his lineage revealed, your position as the next clan head is no longer in question."
Hinata's fingers curled slowly at her side. "And Hanabi?"
Hiashi did not hesitate.
"She will receive the Caged Bird Seal the day you are formally announced as heir."
The words struck with the force of a physical blow.
Hinata's breath hitched before she forced herself to speak. "When is that announcement supposed to happen?"
Hiashi's eyes narrowed slightly at her tone. Once, that look alone would have made her lower her head and retreat inward. Now she held his gaze, unflinching.
"When you attain the rank of chunin or when you are formally recognized as an adult by clan law. Whichever comes first."
Hinata felt a cold knot settle in her chest.
Within the Hyūga, adulthood was not defined by age alone. It was an old custom, one that predated the founding of the village itself. A kunoichi was considered an adult when her body was deemed capable of bearing heirs. The menarche marked the transition.
The tradition had its roots in the Warring States era, when clans lived and died by bloodlines, when succession needed to be settled early to prevent internal conflict. Certainty was valued above compassion. Once an heiress was declared, the hierarchy became absolute. Any siblings born after were safeguards, nothing more.
Hinata understood that now with painful clarity.
"That means I still have time to tear down this barbaric system."
The silence that followed pressed in on the room.
"Excuse me."
"You are excused, Father, but know this… I intend to abolish the Hyūga branding system," Hinata replied without hesitation. "I will unify the main and branch families."
The statement stopped Hiashi cold.
For a long moment, he simply stared at her, searching her face for irony. For exaggeration. For the clumsy bravado of a child who did not yet understand the weight of her words.
There was only certainty.
"The world does not bend simply because you wish it to," Hiashi said, his voice measured and even. "Desire alone has never reshaped history, Hinata."
"I know. That's why I don't intend to rely on desire. I'll become strong enough to force it to change."
His brow tightened. "Then tell me this. Why bring these thoughts to me?" His gaze sharpened. "Do you believe I will stand beside you? If the elders so much as catch wind of this, they will turn on you without mercy. Favor is fleeting. You would be discarded the moment you become inconvenient."
"I told you because you're my father."
Hiashi's tone cooled further. "And I am the head of this clan."
"Then answer me honestly. Will you oppose me?"
He did not respond immediately. His eyes drifted away, toward the open doors, toward the compound beyond. When he spoke again, his words were precise, almost dismissive.
"I do not need to oppose what holds no weight," he said. "Ambition without power is noise. And noise fades."
Hinata's fingers curled into fists. "So that's all I am to you? A disappointment? A failure you've already written off?"
Hiashi looked back at her, composed, unyielding.
"You have changed," he acknowledged. "But a shift in attitude does not dismantle centuries of law. The system you condemn is not cruelty for cruelty's sake. It is the framework that preserved this clan long before Konoha existed. You alone will not overturn it."
"Then answer this," Hinata said, lifting her chin. "If that system exists to protect the Byakugan, why does a shinobi from the Hidden Mist possess one right now?"
For the first time, Hiashi faltered.
It was only a breath. Only the slightest pause. But Hinata saw it.
"You know," she pressed. "You and the elders knew an eye was stolen. And you chose silence. Because admitting the truth would have shattered the myth... the lie that justifies everything."
Hiashi said nothing.
His silence was confirmation enough.
"How many members of the main house actually step onto the battlefield? How many risk their lives beyond the village walls?"
Hinata released a deep breath. "It's the branch family who bleed. They're the ones sent on missions, exposed to ambush, assassination, and death, all while carrying the seal that can destroy them at a thought. You call that protection, but it's rot. That seal doesn't preserve the Hyūga. It poisons it."
She steadied her heart. "A system that survives by sacrificing half its people isn't strong, Father. It's already dying. And when it collapses, it won't be because of outsiders. It'll be because we destroyed ourselves from the inside."
Hiashi studied her as though seeing her anew.
"If you persist in this path, understand what awaits you. The elders will oppose you. The main family will fight you."
"Will you fight me?"
"..."
"Well, the main family can cling to their titles all they want," Hinata replied calmly. "The storm's already forming regardless of if you will oppose me or not."
Something stirred in Hiashi's chest.
An old memory. A vision he once held before duty crushed it beneath tradition and fear.
Perhaps... perhaps she could succeed where he had failed.
For the first time in many years, Hiashi Hyūga allowed himself the faintest smile, so small it was almost indistinguishable from resignation.
A sharp knock broke the moment.
"Enter," Hiashi said, his voice returning to its usual calm authority.
An ANBU operative stepped inside, knelt, and presented a sealed scroll bearing the Hokage's mark. The message was delivered, acknowledged, and the ANBU vanished in a flicker of motion, as silent as they had arrived.
Hiashi broke the seal.
As he read, his composure cracked.
His eyes widened, just slightly at first, then more, to the point Hinata wondered if she was imagining it. He reread the scroll once. Then again, slower this time, as if committing every word to memory.
Finally, he looked up.
"Activate it," he said quietly. "Show me this new Byakugan."
Hinata's chakra surged, and her eyes shifted.
Hiashi stared with a haunted look, one that dragged old ghosts to the surface. A look Hinata had never seen on her father's face before.
"...He was telling the truth," Hiashi murmured under his breath.
"What?"
Hiashi did not answer immediately. But the silence told her enough. He knew what he was seeing. And he knew exactly what it meant.
"Father, do you know of a connection between the Hyūga and the Uchiha?"
Hiashi closed his eyes for a brief moment, then opened them again, resolve settling over his features. "Information is power, Hinata. But power without the strength to protect it is merely an invitation for it to be taken. Some truths are buried not because they are false, but because revealing them too soon invites disaster."
He studied her closely. "If you wish to uncover such truths, you must first prove you can survive the consequences."
Hinata straightened. "Then I request a spar," she said firmly. "With you."
Hiashi snorted softly. "Very well. Let us see whether the real world has given you more than an attitude adjustment."
Hinata smiled.
Hiashi walked to the center of the sparring dojo. The room was a polished expanse of pale hardwood. Shoji panels filtered in golden sunlight, casting shifting grid like patterns across the floor. A raised tatami mat rested at the back, meant for observation, but today it was empty.
Across the floor, Hinata stood stretching.
Hiashi watched her in silence, his face a calm mask. But inside, regret simmered.
Dear Tsubaki, I failed our daughter. I believed severity would harden her. That distance would temper her into something strong enough to endure this world. Instead, all I did was break what should never have been touched. And now… now she stands before me reforged. Not by my hand, but by pain. By resolve born in places I never reached. I cannot undo what I've done. But I can choose not to stand in her way.
I owe her at least that.
Hiashi Hyūga said none of this aloud.
He was not a man who gave voice to regret. He carried it silently, with composure, dignity, and the quiet understanding that some apologies could never be spoken, only proven.
Instead, he stepped forward.
He raised his arms and settled into a Gentle Fist stance, posture immaculate and balance flawless. The stance of a clan head of the Hyūga.
"I will not be using my Byakugan. You, however, are expected to hold nothing back. Use every technique at your disposal."
"And if I force you to activate your eyes, Father?"
"Then, you will have proven yourself worthy of learning more about your new pair of eyes."
"Hajime!"
Hinata's hands flashed through a seal Hiashi did not expect, and his brow creased in genuine surprise.
Ninja Art: Smokescreen Jutsu!
White smoke erupted outward, thick and fast, swallowing the dojo in an instant. The clean wooden floor vanished. The walls disappeared. Sound became muffled and distance distorted.
Hiashi narrowed his eyes.
Under normal circumstances, the smoke would have been meaningless to the Byakugan. But with Hiashi's self imposed restriction, it changed the fight entirely.
Hinata had learned the technique from Kakashi, as a way to exploit the Byakugan. The smoke blinded everyone else, stripping them of depth, distance, and direction, while the Byakugan user remained untouched.
"A Hyūga using ninjutsu?" Hiashi said calmly, his voice cutting through the haze.
"It worked on you, didn't it?"
Her voice echoed from all directions, distorted and misleading. She had copied the technique from Zabuza, breaking the sense of direction and forcing the enemy to doubt every instinct.
"A Hyūga is expected to master the Gentle Fist," Hiashi said, turning slowly, listening.
"Why? We're shinobi, aren't we? Why should our tools be so limited?"
"Because the Gentle Fist is absolute," Hiashi answered. "It is a discipline refined over centuries. A true master does not merely strike the body. They sever chakra itself. Ninjutsu becomes meaningless when its flow is disrupted at the source."
This was doctrine of the Hyūga.
This was their history.
Hinata snorted softly, her thoughts flickering back to the battle between Guren, Naruto, and Zabuza. To the moment she understood, with chilling clarity, that the Hyūga's pride meant nothing in the face of true monsters of the shinobi world. Even the head of the Hyūga was only a jōnin. Powerful, yes, but jōnin were not rare. They existed in every village, in every nation.
Talking it through later with Kakashi sensei had only cemented the realization. Strength in the real world did not come from clinging to tradition. It came from adaptation. From widening one's path, not narrowing it.
And Hinata knew then that if she followed only what the Hyūga had always taught her, she would never reach the level she needed to stand where Naruto stood.
The smoke shifted.
She burst forward, palm glowing faintly as she drove straight for his chest.
Hiashi reacted instantly, intercepting the strike with perfect timing.
But his hand passed straight through her.
Ninja Art: Clone Jutsu.
A simple D rank technique. Something no seasoned jōnin should ever fall for. Under normal conditions, the lack of a shadow would have given it away immediately. But in the smoke, it was barely noticeable.
Hiashi went on the defensive, wondering,
what is your plan here?
Twang.
The older Hyūga caught the arrow as it was about to hit his eye.
Another twang.
A palm strike splintered the arrow.
Then another.
Dodge.
Then another.
Each one from a new direction. She was moving in a semi circle around him, firing while staying mobile. From within the smoke, Hinata's voice echoed. "Father. Give up. Every arrow embedded near your feet is rigged with explosive tags."
Hiashi almost smiled.
So she's gone that far, he thought with quiet approval.
She really has embraced what it means to be a shinobi.
"Do you truly think I was born yesterday, Hinata? None of those arrows carry seals. And if they did, they would have detonated the moment I shattered them with chakra."
There was a pause.
"…Wow," Hinata said dryly. "What a way to ruin your daughter's plan. Do you have no shame, Father?"
Hiashi went white as a sheet at her taunt.
Suddenly the smoke thinned just enough for him to see her silhouette.
Then it split.
Three Hinatas stood before him.
One dropped into the stance of the Eight Trigrams Sixty Four Palms. Another stood slightly behind, bow drawn, arrow aimed steady and unflinching. The third raised a compact crossbow, its bolt already loaded.
Hiashi's eyes narrowed.
Eight Trigrams: Palm Rotation.
Chakra erupted from every tenketsu in his body as he spun, forming a whirling dome of compressed force. The arrows struck first, phasing harmlessly against the rotating barrier. The palms followed, their strikes dispersing against the spinning shield like mist against a storm.
Both were regular clones, Hiashi thought, as the bolt hit.
The explosive tag detonated on contact.
Fire and pressure blossomed outward, the blast roaring against the rotation, but Hiashi remained unmoved. The chakra shield flared brighter for an instant, dispersing the force evenly. When the smoke cleared, his robes were untouched and his stance unbroken.
Before the echo of the explosion could fade, Hiashi moved.
Eight Trigrams: Air Palm!
He thrust his palm forward, releasing a compressed shell of chakra. The invisible force crossed the distance instantly, slamming into Hinata's real form. The crossbow in her hands shattered under the impact as she flipped backward, boots skidding across the floor as she barely redirected the blow.
Her Byakugan flared.
The closed bud pattern within her eyes began to unfurl, reacting instinctively to the pressure.
She twisted midair, landed, and struck back.
Eight Trigrams: Air Palm!
The blast tore through the thinning smoke.
Hiashi sidestepped, the force passing close enough to ripple his robes.
With undeniable proof now laid bare, that Hinata's Byakugan carried the Eye of Insight, Hiashi's expression finally shifted. "You've proven the strength of those eyes."
"And have I proven I'm more than the failure you once saw me as?"
"You have," Hiashi replied, and there was no mistaking the pride in his voice.
He could have ended the spar there. Any reasonable clan head would have. But reason gave way to curiosity.
How far has she truly come?
Hinata answered that question herself.
Eight Trigrams: Sixteen Palms!
With her near complete field of vision, Hinata centered herself within the invisible Eight Trigrams diagram, chakra flaring along her arms as she surged forward. Her strikes came in controlled bursts, each aimed at a tenketsu, each faster than the last.
Two Palms!
Her pace accelerated sharply as she pushed into the final sets, resolve hardening as she stepped forward for the sixteen strike sequence.
Hiashi redirected, deflected, and disrupted her flow without breaking stance, his counters precise enough to halt each strike inches from its target.
"Your timing is sound," he said calmly as he blocked another flurry. "But your weight shifts too early."
Four Palms!
Strike. Block.
"You're committing your hips before the strike lands. Against lesser opponents, it would work. Against someone who knows the form, it telegraphs your intent."
Eight Palms!
Strike. Block.
"You're also overreaching on the final sequence. Sixteen Palms isn't about speed alone. It's about control. You're rushing to prove something."
Her final strike stopped just short of his chest.
Hiashi stepped back.
"Let me show you the true 64 Palms."
His presence changed instantly. The dojo seemed to shrink as his chakra surged, every movement refined by decades of mastery. The strikes came faster than before, relentless and suffocating.
Hinata reacted on instinct.
Eight Trigrams: Palm Rotation!
Chakra erupted from her tenketsu as she spun, forming a rotating barrier just as the strikes landed. The force battered against her rotation, pressure mounting, her feet digging into the floor as she held the technique together through sheer will.
The attacks dispersed.
The rotation slowed.
Hinata slid back a step, breathing hard but still standing.
Hiashi stared at her, genuinely stunned. "…Technique thieving eyes."
"What?"
"You didn't learn that. You copied it." Hiashi exhaled, the sound caught somewhere between irritation and reluctant awe. "To replicate a form mid combat, without instruction… that ability is why the Uchiha were feared, respected, and hated."
His gaze lingered on her eyes.
"And now, that ability rests within the Hyūga."
Hinata felt a twist in her chest. For a fleeting moment, she wondered how her father would react if he knew that Sasuke's Sharingan now carried traits of the Byakugan as well. The thought passed just as quickly.
What did not pass was the irritation.
Even now, after everything she'd done, after everything she'd shown him, it was still her eyes he was focused on. Not her resolve, choices, or will.
Her jaw tightened.
Hinata channeled chakra into her thumb as she hit her chakra points, recreating a technique she'd copied from Guren, one she had not intended to reveal yet.
"Chakra Points: Life and Death."
The release was explosive.
Chakra burst outward from her body in a violent surge, dense enough to be seen, felt, heard. The force slammed into Hiashi and drove him back a step before he could fully brace.
For the first time, Hiashi's composure cracked. "Why are you doing this?" he demanded. "You've already proven yourself. You've shown more than enough to stand as the Hyūga heiress."
Hinata breathed hard, teeth clenched as she forced the torrent of chakra to stabilize for one more moment. "Because…" she said, voice strained but unyielding, "…just enough isn't enough for my dreams."
She lifted her head and met his gaze head on.
"So even if I fall, I'll show you, Father, that your daughter isn't just talking about changing this clan. I'll act."
She shifted her footing as she took her stance of the Eight Trigrams: Sixty Four Palms.
When suddenly something changed.
The Hornet Ring on Hinata's finger pulsed, reacting to the overwhelming chakra pouring through her system, as if answering her resolve.
The magic of the Hornet Ring flowed into Hinata, guiding her movements as if unseen hands were refining every flaw in her form.
Her right foot stepped forward and planted hard, the toe grinding into the wooden floorboards until hairline cracks spidered outward from the pressure. Her back heel rotated just enough to anchor her stance, granting full rotational force without sacrificing balance.
The front leg absorbed and redirected force while the rear carried her weight like a coiled spring, ready to release everything in a single instant. Her torso leaned forward just a fraction, body aligned from shoulder to foot in one seamless chain of stored momentum.
Her right arm extended.
Three fingers forward.
One intent.
A spear aimed directly at Hiashi's throat.
The world seemed to go quiet around her.
Hiashi's breath caught.
He had seen thousands of stances. Corrected forms refined over generations.
This was different.
His Byakugan flared instinctively, and what he saw made his heart skip a beat. Between Hinata's fingers, chakra condensed into a dense, focused needle, concentrated at the middle joint, flickering like a living ember on the verge of ignition.
Then something far worse happened.
Hinata's left hand crackled as lightning chakra arced along her fingers. At the same time, fire chakra shimmered around her right hand.
Hiashi swallowed.
She was adding elemental chakra into the Gentle Fist. And from the unfocused glaze in her eyes, he realized with cold clarity that she was not doing it deliberately. She was doing it instinctively.
In a single breath, she vanished the distance between them.
Eight Trigrams: Sixty Four Palms!
Hiashi moved on pure survival.
He knew, with absolute certainty, that if even one elemental infused Gentle Fist strike landed cleanly, it would not cripple him.
It would most certainly kill him.
Painfully.
Gentle Step: Black Turtle Shield.
Hiashi moved at the same instant Hinata did.
The technique was a variant of the Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, a high level secret of the Gentle Fist taught only to the Hyūga main branch. Unlike the roaring chakra lions favored by others, this was Hiashi's own creation, meant for defense rather than offense. Chakra surged from his palms and shaped itself into overlapping, shell like rings that wrapped around his forearms, layered like iron rings.
Two strikes came first.
Hiashi's Byakugan locked onto Hinata's body, its x ray vision piercing flesh to track the minute contraction of muscle fibers and the subtle shift of tendons before motion even began. He stepped aside with effortless precision, his body flowing out of danger like a leaf carried by the wind.
Two more strikes, totaling four.
Four consecutive strikes, totaling eight.
Hinata's speed increased. Her palms blurred, chakra flaring brighter with each blow.
Eight consecutive strikes, totaling sixteen.
Sixteen consecutive strikes, totaling thirty two.
The dojo groaned under the pressure of her advance. Floorboards cracked where her feet landed. The air itself seemed to shudder as her chakra surged higher, hotter, and more volatile.
Thirty two consecutive strikes, totaling sixty four.
Hiashi raised the Black Turtle Shield.
The shell like chakra constructs met her palms head on. Some strikes were deflected cleanly, redirected with practiced ease. Others slipped through, grazing past his guard. Each one that connected sent a violent jolt through his arms, elemental chakra scraping against his defense like grinding steel.
He grunted, forced to give ground for the first time.
Then he moved.
Thud.
His fingers struck a chakra point at the base of Hinata's neck. The surge of power collapsed instantly, her body going slack as she crumpled forward.
Hiashi caught her before she hit the floor.
He stood there for a long moment, breathing deeply, eyes fixed on the faintly glowing Hornet Ring still pulsing on her finger.
"…What is this strange item?"
Clang.
The sound of Hinata's footsteps echoed in the strangely familiar hallway.
The steel walls, flickering lights, and the same oppressive air from the hideout where she and Naruto had once faced Guren's squad.
But something was wrong. The metal under her sandals was slick. She looked down.
Blood.
Dark, thick, and wet, pooling in unnatural patterns. It oozed from the walls like the building itself was bleeding, running in rivulets down cracked bulkheads, soaking into the seams between every tile. The lights buzzed overhead, flickering erratically. Each flicker seemed to swallow sound, plunging her momentarily into deafening silence before the buzz returned like a scream. Her heart pounded with an unnatural rhythm.
Something was not right with the air.
Then she heard it.
Thud.
A single, echoing sound. Like iron boots striking steel.
She spun toward it.
Naruto stood at the far end of the corridor. He was clad head to toe in the Steel Set.
"...Naruto kun?"
He did not respond.
Instead, his armor began to vibrate, slowly at first, then faster. The sound it made was not just metallic.
It was alive, a low, throbbing hum like a scream held in the back of the throat.
And then he charged.
The hallway seemed to bend around him. She blinked, and he was already halfway down the corridor.
Too fast.
She stepped back, too slow.
A breath.
A blink.
Impact.
Iron met flesh. Bone shattered. Hinata did not even have time to cry out. Her ribs cracked. Her spine folded. She felt every inch of her body implode, compressed into pulp beneath a force so absolute
it felt divine. And just like that,
she was gone.
She woke with a choked gasp.
Her body jerked upright before she could stop it, breath coming fast and shallow. The world spun violently, the ceiling above her blurring and snapping back into focus like a poorly tuned lens. Her mouth was dry, her limbs heavy,
every sensation lagging behind her thoughts.
Where…?
She tried to speak. Nothing came out.
A gentle pressure touched her lips.
She drank instinctively, water spilling into her mouth and down her throat, easing the burning dryness.
It tasted so, so sweet.
Slowly, her senses returned. She was in her room. Her father sat beside the bed.
"Hinata," Hiashi said quietly, "you're safe. That was only a dream."
She blinked, throat working as she tried again. "I… that was a dream?"
"What did you see?"
"It didn't feel real. My body still aches, but it's… distant.
Like everything's delayed."
"That's the aftershock of overtaxing your chakra system," Hiashi said. "You pushed yourself far beyond what most shinobi could tolerate."
Hinata did not reply. She stared at the ceiling, caught somewhere between memory and the present,
fragments of the spar still echoing through her muscles.
Hiashi shifted slightly in his seat. "While you were unconscious," he said after a moment, his tone softer, "you were restless. Tossing. You kept saying a name."
"I don't remember."
"Is that the truth?"
"Sort of… I think it was a nightmare. Or maybe a memory twisted into one.
It's all fog."
"Naruto kun. That's what you kept calling out."
She sank deeper into her bed. Then, in a small, embarrassed whisper, "
…Oh."
Seeing his daughter blushing, the man decided to change the topic. "What exactly is that item?"
Hinata followed his eyes and raised her hand slightly, letting the hornet ring catch the light.
"I don't really know. Naruto kun gave it to me. He said it would make my Gentle Fist stronger."
"It did more than that," Hiashi replied.
She looked at him, confused.
"During the Sixty Four Palms," he continued calmly, "you used elemental manipulation. Fire chakra and Lightning Chakra in each hand."
Hinata stared at him,
stunned.
The Gentle Fist was considered a peerless martial art. It inflicted internal damage by striking the body's Chakra Pathway System, injuring organs that were closely intertwined with the network itself. To accomplish this, the user surgically injected their own chakra into an opponent's pathways, disrupting the flow and damaging nearby organs through proximity alone. Even the lightest touch could cause devastating harm, which was why the style earned the name
gentle fist.
Among the Hyūga main branch, there existed an unspoken evolution of this art.
By altering one's chakra into an elemental form before injection, the Gentle Fist could attack the internal organs directly with elemental chakra. And elemental chakra was far more destructive than ordinary chakra. Wind chakra could shred organs from the inside. Lightning could paralyze and burn the internal system of the human body. Earth could crush. Water could rupture. Fire could liquefy tissue outright.
This forbidden variant was known within the clan as the
Death Fist.
A forbidden martial art.
The reason was simple. The level of control and shape manipulation required to send elemental chakra into another person's body was staggering. But worse, it was a double edged sword. Elemental chakra at such a level damaged the user's own chakra network as it passed through. Over time, repeated use would cripple the practitioner from the inside out.
Hinata stared at her numb hands. "How bad is it?"
"The chakra network around your hands is severely weakened," Hiashi said. "I strongly advise you not to use chakra or perform any jutsu for at least a month."
He placed his hand over hers.
A faint green glow bloomed from his palm, warm and steady, seeping into her damaged pathways. The ache dulled almost immediately.
He was healing her.
"You… know medical ninjutsu?"
Hiashi nodded slightly, still looking at her pale face. "After what happened to your mother… I decided to learn. I swore I'd never be helpless again."
That stunned her more than anything.
The Hiashi she had known all her life had learned something as gentle as healing?
"Why… why did you push yourself so far?"
"I already told you… I've changed."
Hiashi did not blink. "I know. That was obvious the moment I saw you take a stance without hesitation. But this…"
He gestured to her body.
"This wasn't change. This was self destruction. You burned your chakra to the brink of collapse. You fought beyond your body's limits. Was that really necessary? Was that what you thought I needed to see?"
"I needed you to understand."
"Understand what?"
"That I'm not weak anymore. That if I ever stood in front of the clan and said I wanted to change things… I wanted you beside me. Not across from me."
Hiashi's brow furrowed.
"I knew it wouldn't be easy. The elders will never accept a Hyūga who questions the system. I'll be called a disgrace. I might even lose my position as heir. But…"
Hinata looked up at him, eyes rimmed with exhaustion and sincerity.
"If I can't make you believe in me, then no one will. So I fought, not just to prove my skill, but to prove my heart."
Hiashi looked down at their hands, his own trembling now, barely noticeable, but it was there.
"I didn't know," he said finally, voice low. "That you thought you needed to nearly die for me to be proud."
Silence.
He closed his eyes. "
I failed you."
"You didn't," Hinata said.
"I did," he insisted. "I raised you thinking fear and strictness would carve strength into you. But what I carved was doubt. You believed you had to shatter yourself just to earn your father's support."
His hand tightened around hers, just slightly. "
And yet, even after all I did… you still wanted me beside you."
"I still do."
Hiashi swallowed the lump in his throat.
"Then you'll have me."
Hinata blinked.
"I don't know what you saw on that mission. I don't know what happened that changed you so completely. But I see you now, Hinata. Not the timid child. Not the uncertain heir. I see a woman who's trying to carry the weight of her clan on her back, and doing it with grace even if it breaks her."
His voice almost cracked.
"I will walk beside you. As the clan head. As your… father. And as someone who believes in your dream."
Hinata gave a small smile.
"Thank you… Father."
A few minutes passed before Hinata finally began to feel her hands again. The numbness receded slowly, replaced by a dull ache that reminded her just how close she'd come to breaking herself.
"Hinata… do you know there is a legend that the Uchiha and Senju clans descended from a single ancestor?"
"No," Hinata said honestly. The idea stunned her. Two of the strongest clans in history, rivals to the core, sharing blood felt almost impossible.
"It is said," Hiashi continued, "that both lineages inherited power from the Sage of Six Paths. The Uchiha inherited his eyes. The Senju inherited his body."
Hinata felt her thoughts stutter. The Sage of Six Paths was supposed to be a myth. A bedtime story. A figure spoken of in half-remembered legends. And yet her father spoke of him as fact.
Hiashi did not pause.
"There is another legend. One less known. Two other lineages inherited the power of a different sage."
"A… different sage?"
"
The Sage of the Moon," Hiashi replied.
Hinata drew in a sharp breath.
That name was from a story her grandma once told her.
They were told that long ago, a pale-eyed man climbed to the moon after saving the world from a great calamity. He chose exile so the earth could remain at peace, watching silently from above to ensure no one repeated the same mistakes. The elders said he could see everything. Every act of defiance. Every broken promise. And that when children disobeyed their parents or brought shame to the clan, the Moon Sage would turn his gaze away, disappointed, and his protection would weaken.
So Hyūga children were taught to obey, endure and carry their duties quietly.
Because the man on the moon was always watching.
Hiashi continued, his voice steady.
"Two clans inherited the power of the Sage of the Moon. The body was inherited by the Kaguya clan. The eyes were inherited by the Hyūga."
"The… Kaguya clan?"
"They no longer exist," Hiashi said. "They were a savage people. Battle-hungry. They sought combat not for survival or duty, but for the thrill of it. When they attacked Kirigakure to prove their strength, they were surrounded and outmatched."
His voice hardened slightly. "Even then, they refused to retreat. They fought until the last of them fell, laughing in blood and ruin."
Hinata shuddered.
"A small number of them," Hiashi added, "possessed a kekkei genkai that allowed them to manipulate their own bone structure. Blades. Spears. Armor. Their bodies became weapons."
Hinata raised a trembling hand to her eyes. "Then… are these two sages related?"
"Yes. They were brothers."
The room fell silent.
Hinata's mind felt frozen, overwhelmed by the weight of it all.
Hiashi waited.
When no question came, he turned and began to leave.
"Father," Hinata called out suddenly. "Why didn't I ever hear about this?" She swallowed. "If this were common knowledge… the main branch would use it. They would boast about being descendants of gods."
Hiashi stopped at the doorway.
Without turning around, he said calmly, "Everyone who knew this information was killed by me."
He stepped out, leaving Hinata alone.
She sat there in silence, hands resting in her lap, her world irrevocably changed.
She finally had answers on her new eyes. And somehow, that only left her with far more questions.
The next few days of Hinata's life were strange, to say the least.
The atmosphere within the Hyūga compound shifted almost overnight. After the Third Hokage publicly confirmed Naruto's lineage, the clan's attitude subtly but unmistakably changed. Members of the main family who had barely acknowledged Hinata before suddenly smiled at her in passing. Children around her age began inviting her to small gatherings and training sessions. Even the elders, who had once spoken of her only in disappointed murmurs, now regarded her with something close to approval, offering personal instruction and guidance.
Hinata declined them all politely, citing her recovery.
But in the midst of all that attention, one person was quietly overlooked.
Hanabi Hyūga.
Once the favored heir, the child the clan had pinned its expectations on, Hanabi was suddenly invisible. Adults who once hovered now passed her by. Training sessions were canceled or postponed. Praise vanished, replaced with silence.
Hinata saw it immediately.
She saw the way Hanabi stood a little straighter than she needed to, pretending not to notice. The way she trained alone longer than usual. The way she swallowed her confusion and kept her expression composed, even as the world she understood began to break.
Hinata couldn't stand it.
"Hanabi," she said one afternoon. "Are you free?"
Hanabi blinked, clearly startled by the question.
Hinata smiled and reached out, taking her hand without waiting for an answer. "Well, let's go."
Before Hanabi could protest, she was being gently but firmly tugged along, out of the compound gates and into the village beyond.
It was Hanabi's first time simply…
wandering.
They walked through streets she'd only ever seen from carriage windows. Hinata bought her dango from a street stall and laughed when Hanabi nearly burned her tongue. They stopped to watch craftsmen at work, listened to street performers, and sat on a bench overlooking the river while Hinata told her stories about missions and friends and things that had nothing to do with clan duty.
With Hanabi relaxed, Hinata took her to a small clothing shop near the market district. Hinata picked out an outfit herself, ignoring Hanabi's initial protests. When they left, Hanabi looked nothing like the rigid little heiress she'd been molded into.
She wore a loose white short sleeve top that slipped casually off one shoulder, revealing a dark sleeveless underlayer beneath it. The shirt hung long and relaxed, comfortable instead of formal. Dark fitted leggings covered her legs, paired with simple ankle high shoes that blended into the fabric. Her sneakers were warm tan, with black laces and clean white soles, practical and unmistakably ordinary.
"Where are we going?"
"To Ichiraku Ramen," Hinata replied as they turned the corner and immediately walked into chaos.
A pair of genin guards stood stiffly in front of Ichiraku's entrance while three academy students argued loudly in front of them.
"What do you mean I can't eat here?" Konohamaru yelled. "My boss eats here all the time!"
"I don't care who your boss is," one of the guards replied flatly. "No reservation, no entry."
The reason was simple. Because Naruto's lineage had become the worst kept secret in Konoha, Ichiraku had turned into a magnet. Nobles, shinobi, and opportunists all flocked to the tiny ramen stand hoping to catch a glimpse of Naruto Uzumaki. It had gotten so bad that Teuchi was forced to limit access, turning the place into a reservation only shop with prices that made even jōnin wince.
Unfortunately, none of this meant anything to Konohamaru and his friends, who just wanted ramen.
"You've done it now," Konohamaru declared, striking a dramatic pose. "I was saving this jutsu to show Boss Naruto, but you've left me no choice!"
The genin guards stiffened, one of them raising a kunai. "Kid, don't—"
"Ninja Art! Sexy Jutsu!"
Smoke exploded outward.
Konohamaru transformed into a beautiful woman, with special attention given to the woman's figure, breasts, and waist, that immediately collapsed as the smoke cleared unevenly. The effect was less impressive than Konohamaru had clearly imagined.
Everyone nearby sweatdropped.
"
Oh god," Ayame muttered as she stepped out of the shop. "When did Naruto teach someone else that cursed jutsu?"
Konohamaru puffed up proudly. "Boss Naruto didn't teach me! I heard about it from Iruka sensei and figured it out myself. When I show it to him, he'll totally take me as his disciple and help me become Hokage!"
Udon and Moegi cheered enthusiastically.
Ayame immediately reached out and twisted Konohamaru's ear. "I'm sure Naruto would love to hear how you're causing trouble for everyone."
"Mercy! Mercy!" Konohamaru begged.
Ayame sighed and finally noticed the two Hyūga sisters watching from nearby. She squinted at Hinata, then smirked. "Hey. You're that girl who used to stalk…"
Hinata nearly combusted. She gently clapped a hand over Ayame's mouth and whispered urgently, "
Please, Ayame san."
Ayame laughed and peeled Hinata's hand away. "Relax, I'm teasing." She glanced between the sisters. "Why don't you come inside? I heard from Ino you were part of the mission Naruto went on."
Hinata nodded.
Konohamaru immediately perked up. "What about us?" he asked, deploying his most practiced puppy dog eyes. Udon and Moegi copied him instantly.
"Fine. You brats too."
Konohamaru cheered like he'd just won a war as they were herded inside at last.
The inside of Ichiraku Ramen looked exactly the same as it always had.
Same narrow counters. Same worn stools. Same comforting smell of broth simmering in the back. A few customers sat quietly, eating without paying much attention to the newcomers.
Hinata exhaled without realizing she'd been holding her breath.
"So," she said softly, taking a seat, "how's business been?"
Ayame snorted as she leaned against the counter. "Busy. Way too busy. Ever since Naruto's lineage got out, we've had people crawling out of the woodwork because Naruto eats here."
She clicked her tongue. "Most of them just want to meet him."
"You know, you could've used that attention to expand. A full restaurant. Lots of places are already slapping the Fourth Hokage's name on everything they sell."
Ayame shook her head immediately. "Not our style. Dad and I are just a ramen stand. Naruto's not a brand. He's a regular and a friend." Her expression softened for a moment. "Using him, or his father, to make money just felt wrong."
Hinata smiled faintly and gestured for Hanabi to sit with Konohamaru, Moegi, and Udon. Hanabi hesitated, fingers tightening around her sleeves, but Konohamaru immediately waved her over.
"Hey! You can sit here! We're talking about which ramen's the best."
Moegi beamed. "It's miso."
"No, it's pork bone!" Konohamaru shot back.
Udon adjusted his goggles. "I think they're all good."
Hanabi blinked, then slowly sat down.
She needs friends her own age, Hinata thought, watching the awkward but earnest introductions.
She turned back to the menu and promptly froze.
The prices were… not what she remembered.
Ayame noticed instantly and slid a different menu in front of her. "Don't worry about that. Since you're Naruto's friend, you're paying the old prices."
Hinata let out a quiet sigh of relief and nodded. "Thank you."
Across the counter, Konohamaru, Moegi, and Udon were staring at their menus like they'd just seen a forbidden scroll.
Hanabi, meanwhile, barely glanced at it. "I'll have soba noodles," she said calmly.
Hinata glanced at her, surprised. Growing up in high society had clearly warped Hanabi's sense of what was normal. The prices meant nothing to her, while the others looked like they were mentally calculating their life savings.
"You three can order whatever you want," Hinata said gently. "I'll pay."
The three academy students stared at her like she'd descended from the heavens.
Half an hour later, Hinata leaned back slightly, rubbing her stomach. An impressive number of empty bowls sat stacked as she left the ramen shop.
She looked over at Hanabi, who had been quiet for most of the meal and did not eat a lot.
"So," Hinata asked softly, "did you have fun today?"
Hanabi nodded.
"Did you make friends with Konohamaru and the others?"
"I guess," Hanabi said after a moment. "At least… acquaintances. That'll be useful when I'm sent to the Academy."
"What?"
Hanabi looked at her, confused. "You know I'll have to go eventually, right? With you being the favored heiress now, it's only a matter of time before I'm placed with the branch family and start training at the Academy."
Hinata froze.
She knelt down in front of her sister, hands resting on Hanabi's knees. "Hanabi. Listen to me."
"I know. I should be proud of the curse mark."
The words hit Hinata like a slap.
Her hands tightened instantly, gripping the sides of Hanabi's sleeves as her voice sharpened in a way Hanabi had never heard before. "Hanabi. Who told you the curse mark is something to be proud of?"
Hanabi flinched.
"…Grandfather," she whispered. Fear flickered across her face. She had never seen Hinata look like this before.
Hinata had never held a good impression of her grandfather.
He was a man who placed the clan above all else. Once the clan head, now the most influential voice on the elder council, he carried himself like the traditions themselves answered to him.
And he had always favored Hanabi.
What that favoritism looked like had taken Hinata years to understand.
"What did he say?" Hinata asked quietly.
Hanabi hesitated, fingers twisting together. "He said… the branch house has it easier than most people in the Elemental Nations." Her voice wavered. "That they should be grateful. That serving the main family is an honor, and I should be proud if I'm ever chosen for it."
Hinata took a deep breath and spoke, carefully, deliberately. "The honest answer is yes and no. And it depends on what part of life you're looking at."
Hanabi looked up, confused but listening.
"Yes, in the sense that being born into the Hyūga branch family already puts someone above most people in the world. They belong to one of Konoha's most powerful clans. They're fed. Protected. Trained from childhood. The Byakugan alone gives them opportunities most shinobi will never even dream of."
Hinata softened her voice. "Compared to civilians who struggle to eat, or orphans raised by war, or low level ninja from minor villages… the branch family lives a safer, more stable life. That part is true."
Hanabi nodded slowly.
"But that's where it stops being simple."
The older sister knelt so they were eye to eye.
"The Caged Bird Seal changes everything. No matter how talented a branch member is, no matter how loyal or accomplished, they're never truly free. Their pain can be triggered at a thought. Their death can be ordered if it's convenient. Their body doesn't belong to them."
Hanabi's breathing hitched.
"That kind of control is something most people in the Elemental Nations don't live under. Even people with harder lives still own themselves. The branch family doesn't."
She swallowed. "So yes, they have privilege. But it comes at the cost of autonomy. Of choice. Of freedom. Some people might still choose that over starvation or war. Others wouldn't survive it."
Her voice trembled just slightly. "
That… that's what makes our clan so broken."
Hanabi's face crumpled.
"I don't want that," she whispered, tears spilling over. "I don't want to be punished. I don't want to disappear if someone decides I don't matter."
Hinata pulled her into her arms immediately. "It's okay," she murmured, holding her tight. "You don't have to be brave right now."
"I'm scared… I don't wanna mess up… I don't wanna be alone…"
Hinata stroked her hair, rocking her gently, letting her cry as long as she needed.
When Hanabi finally calmed, Hinata leaned back just enough to look her in the eyes. "Listen to me. You don't have to be scared."
Hanabi sniffed. "I don't?"
"No. Your big sister's here to protect you." Hinata smiled softly. "All Hanabi chan has to worry about is making friends, doing her school assignments, and figuring out what she wants. Everything else is on me."
Hanabi stared at her for a second, then hugged her again, harder this time.
Life was looking good for the two sisters as Hinata and Hanabi grew closer over the weekend. And then came the news that Team 7 had returned to Konoha.
"Hurry up. We do not want to keep your boyfriend waiting."
"He is not my boyfriend," Hinata yelled back, blushing as she brushed down her shirt. "How do I look?"
The seven year old gave her a long, judging look.
Hinata was wearing a black short sleeved T shirt that fit slightly loose. Her bottoms were high waisted white shorts. On her legs, she wore dark ankle socks that contrasted with the light shorts and helped ground the outfit.
She also had a few accessories that completed the look. A black choker style necklace, a longer necklace with a circular pendant, and small hoop earrings.
"Naruto will fall head over heels the moment he sees you," Hanabi said, much to her older sister's embarrassment.
They walked toward Ichiraku Ramen, which was the obvious place Naruto would go the moment he came back.
Hinata turned out to be right.
Seated in front of a mountain sized bowl of ramen was Naruto Uzumaki. He was a lot taller than Hanabi expected, his presence somehow bigger than the room itself.
"Hey there, Hinata," Sakura greeted, scooting over to make space.
Sasuke gave a short wave, while Oscar still floated in a bowl with lukewarm water.
Naruto slurped loudly, then looked up mid chew. "Hey!" he grinned, mouth full of noodles.
A few strands of broth soaked noodles went flying.
Hanabi raised an unimpressed brow, then turned to her sister. "I genuinely do not get it. What do you see in him?"
Hinata ignored her little sister. "Naruto kun… your hair."
"Oh, yeah!" Naruto pushed back a few crimson locks. "What do you think?"
Hinata blushed faintly. "It is… beautiful." Her fingers twitched slightly, as if itching to reach out and touch it.
Stop staring.
"Wait. Weren't you blond? Why dye it red?"
Naruto blinked at Hanabi, confused. "What's with this sassy lost child?"
Author Note:
Firstly, I want to apologize for the late upload. The delay was honestly just life being life. This past week had me running around nonstop, doing things back to back until I was completely drained. By the time I finally had a moment to sit down, I was too exhausted to think straight, let alone write anything that felt worth posting.
Anyways, let us get into the Q and A.
1. How does the Hornet Ring affect Gentle Fist?
The answer is actually pretty simple if you have played the Dark Souls games.
The Hornet Ring is a ring in Dark Souls and Dark Souls Remastered that once belonged to the Lord's Blade Ciaran. It boosts critical attack damage by about thirty percent, enhancing backstabs and ripostes. It also alters the animation of these attacks when used against humanoid enemies, such as NPCs or other players.
So translating that into my story felt fairly natural.
Gentle Fist already revolves around what would count as critical hits. The Hornet Ring amplifies that impact.
That amplified version is what I am referring to as the Death Fist.
2. What is the Death Fist?
The Death Fist is not canon. It is my attempt at a logical and dangerous evolution of the Gentle Fist.
At its core, the Gentle Fist works by injecting chakra directly into the chakra pathway system, which runs alongside and through the internal organs. The chakra disrupts or overwhelms the opponent's chakra flow, damaging the surrounding organs in the process. Depending on how precise the strike is, the target's chakra circulation can be destabilized or completely shut down.
We see this clearly during Neji's fight with Hinata in the Chūnin Exams, where her chakra flow is disrupted to the point that she can no longer properly perform Gentle Fist techniques herself.
Now, we also know something important from canon. Chakra can be converted into elemental chakra. That is the foundation of ninjutsu.
So the Death Fist is built on a simple but terrifying question.
What happens if you apply elemental chakra through Gentle Fist?
Instead of injecting regular chakra into the chakra network, the user injects elemental chakra directly into the internal organs and pathways. Internal organs are already fragile. Introducing elemental chakra into them is catastrophic. Fire would burn from the inside. Lightning would disrupt nerves and muscle signals. Wind would shred tissue at a microscopic level. Any elemental application would result in near instant death if executed cleanly, because internal organs are really squishy.
That raises the obvious question. If this is possible, why has elemental Gentle Fist never appeared in canon?
To answer that, I looked at another jutsu that attacks the chakra network directly.
The Rasenshuriken.
When the Rasenshuriken detonates, it creates a vortex filled with countless microscopic wind blades. These blades pierce every cell in the target's body, severing them from the chakra circulatory system. The damage is so severe that the victim permanently loses their ability to mold chakra, and even advanced medical ninjutsu cannot repair it.
Naruto himself suffered backlash from this technique when he first used it against Kakuzu. His own chakra network was damaged simply by being too close to the attack.
That became the key limitation for the Death Fist.
The Death Fist is a double edged technique. Yes, it will kill the enemy if it lands properly. But it also damages the user's own chakra network due to the violent elemental feedback traveling through their body. Just like the early Rasenshuriken, it is not something that can be used repeatedly without consequences.
In short, the Death Fist is not a clean upgrade. It is a desperate, lethal evolution of Gentle Fist that trades safety and sustainability for absolute killing power.
3. Didn't Hinata invent the Twin Lion Fists Jutsu?
The answer is both no and yes, depending on which source you look at.
In the anime filler, it is shown that sometime during Part II, after Hinata learns about Naruto's new technique from Ino, she trains with Neji and develops the Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists. That version strongly implies that Hinata either created or at least pioneered the technique herself.
However, if you go back to the manga, there is no indication that Hinata invented the jutsu at all. On top of that, the Fourth Databook on page 256 explicitly states that the Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists is a high level secret Gentle Fist technique taught only to members of the Hyūga main branch.
Because of that, I chose to go with the latter interpretation. It is a Hyūga clan jutsu, specifically a main branch technique, and that distinction matters.
I have some very interesting plans for this technique.
4. Are the Kaguya clan and the Hyūga clan related?
Canonically, there's no direct confirmation that the Kaguya clan and the Hyūga clan are related. However, considering Kaguya Ōtsutsuki possessed both the Byakugan and the Ash Bone Pulse, it's reasonable to draw a parallel to how the Senju and Uchiha clans inherited different aspects of Hagoromo's power.
I chose to tie the Kaguya and Hyūga clans to Hamura instead of Kaguya herself for a few reasons. First, attributing both clans directly to Kaguya would imply she had a third lineage branch, which complicates things unnecessarily. Second, in canon, Hamura is largely left empty-handed in comparison to Hagoromo, despite being just as important.
So for this fic, I've added a headcanon: Hamura became known as the Sage of the Moon, and from his lineage arose two clans. The Hyūga inherited his eyes, while the Kaguya clan inherited a twisted reflection of his physical power. This mirrors the Senju–Uchiha split.
That's It… For Now.
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As always, I want to thank you all for taking the time to read, comment, and follow along with this story. Your feedback means more than you know, and it helps push me to make each chapter bigger, sharper, and more true to the worlds of Naruto and Dark Souls.
Until next time, Praise the Sun.
—Adam