Frishmous
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Do not necro. This is against Rule 7.
Spelling/Grammar errors in chapter 2:
Vise-Capitan - Vice-Captain
its needless to say - it's needless to say
Bunkai - Bankai
Induction - Introduction
precious time I have no - precious time I have now
reading something interesting up, - reading up on something interesting
Avasi - Awasi
I was read to give up on trying to understand what was her deal - I was ready to give up on trying to understand what her deal was
There was no surprises as we sparred - There were no surprises as we sparred
Will dictate it more then - will dictate it more than
There might be more I missed, but these are the ones that stood out to my untrained proofreading eyes.
Vise-Capitan - Vice-Captain
its needless to say - it's needless to say
Bunkai - Bankai
Induction - Introduction
precious time I have no - precious time I have now
reading something interesting up, - reading up on something interesting
Avasi - Awasi
I was read to give up on trying to understand what was her deal - I was ready to give up on trying to understand what her deal was
There was no surprises as we sparred - There were no surprises as we sparred
Will dictate it more then - will dictate it more than
There might be more I missed, but these are the ones that stood out to my untrained proofreading eyes.