"All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world...
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Possibly what happened. I'm leaving it up to reader discretion.Well... I am surprised that you didn't just go with it being an AU where Coil got ahold of Browbeat and he just named himself that as oppposed to Hardcase? ^_^;
Mwahaha.I think that this "swastika emblazoned knife" will paint Taylor as an e88 recruit or something.
Also, presence of the Joker's quote is making me fear for the already dubious sanity of those girls...
Following Taylor or looking for Lisa do you think? Personally I'd be more inclined to lean towards the former rather than the latter.Well, I think it feels likely that Aisha'll join 'em soon. That'll be an interesting conversation.
I'd say the former as well.Following Taylor or looking for Lisa do you think? Personally I'd be more inclined to lean towards the former rather than the latter.
She's not a psycho; She knows right and wrong, which makes her a sociopath
She's not a psycho; She knows right and wrong, which makes her a sociopath
Well, that was a fun read. Can I ask what the tone of this story is going to be? Like, did Ziz just fuck with this particular day to make some interesting shit happen, or are we getting a string of tragedy caused by some butterflies?
Butterflies are Ziz's bitch.
I don't know... While Aisha was clearly prepared to kill Sophia as her brother's murderer, or assist Taylor in doing that, mutilating corpses and hunting down Emma is going a bit far, I think.Or Aisha could make a quick trip to the Janitor's closet, break off a handle and return to turn Sophia into the 'second victim' of the Nazi Broomstick Murderer.
Maybe light Madison's corpse on fire to disguise the insect bites and write the words 'race traitor' in blood on the tiles while she's at it.
It would work, except Emma ran off.
If only there were an invisible assailant to take a red-headed bitchy-bitch to stabitty-stab town.
Wow. I use hyphenated words WAY too much.
Regent tends to be passive-aggressive and uncaring. If he'd been there, he might have done something, but as it all happened while he was out, he'd be "Oh well, what's on TV?"Hmm, a thought but Alec could actually support Lisa somewhat if he finds out what happened. Someone abusing his power to rape someone? Not exactly going to have the best associations given his experiences even given his emotional crippling, might go the other way too but just thought those might matter somewhat to how that situation resolves.
That's the idea
Just a few little nudges, here and there. The biggest alteration, of course, was the introduction of Hardcase.Well, this is interesting.
If it was a single butterfly, it was a hell of a one.
Mwahaha.All this talk about when Aisha will join them... Don't you people realize she's been there ever since Taylor showed up?
See aboveBut you bet she'll join up after hearing every one of them was involved in trying to avenge her brother.
Yes, you did.And dear god. Taylor, Lisa, and Amy (Vicky counts as part of Amy now), teaming up.... I'd say Coil was fucked, but I'm gonna take that a step further:
The Endbringers are fucked.
Yes, I said it.
Yes, they are.
It is. She finds enough satisfaction that 1) Sophia was killed by someone she was trying to kill, and 2) the knife that did it had a swastika on it. (Because she framed the Empire for Brian's murder ...)I don't know... While Aisha was clearly prepared to kill Sophia as her brother's murderer, or assist Taylor in doing that, mutilating corpses and hunting down Emma is going a bit far, I think.
It wasn't easy, without delving into OOC grimdark territory, but I think I managed it. Also, assembling that timeline was a bitch.Oh, wow! Before the end of this chapter, the story could be summed up as "And then it got worse." (even more that canon!).
That ... is the general idea, yes.But now! This chapter heralds awesome things! Yay! Honestly, given how much life has shat on those girls, I wouldn't begrudge them anything. As far as I'm concerned they can do anything or kill anyone they want and it's gonna be awright!
Go team No-more-fucks-to-give!
It's actually a running theme I've noticed in Ack's fics. Every single one of them starts of well written and well worth watching, with an interesting idea and premise. Too bad that few of them actually get anywhere (and it's a fair criticism. There are a lot of good fics with only a chapter or two).