Chapters
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"Only one person has shown themselves to be more skilled than me." Shark nodded. "I'm looking at him, right now."
center of the courtyard. After confirming it was seemingly no ones, he got to claim it and gave it to me."
Should be "you're" (Also, Flip Turner, you suck! You're nowhere near as awful as some of the other characters, but that bar is deep underground so no points there)
"every one" instead of "everyone" I am almost certain.
"I'd say it's a little to earlier to go saying that." Tori retorted.
"Every bit of defense I whittle down, is one more layer of defense you lose and one step further I take to reclaiming Master Hyperion." Tori drew. "With this next monster, I'm about to take several steps towards that goal.
I release my Meltiel to summon Airknight Parshath(LV5/1900/1400)."
"I may have lost some control over this duel, but it's easily regained with the monsters at my disposal!" Flip drew. "I set one monster before activating Book of Taiyou. This spell allows me to flip this set monster into face up attack position.
Say hello to Slate Warrior(LV 4/1900/400)." A blue fiend in orange attire appeared.
Say hello to Slate Warrior(LV 4/1900/400)." A blue fiend in orange attire appeared. "By being flipped face up, he gains 500 ATK and DEF." Slate Warrior(LV 4/2400/900 effect). "He'll use all that power to wipe your Airknight off the field."
You're, btw.
Another case of somebody's speech being broken into two paragraphs without quotation marks at the start of the second to indicate continued speech."Warrior of Zera is actually where Zeradias began his journey, with plenty of others like or beyond it able to claim the same." Tori informed. "On the path my deck takes, Zeradias is by no means the end of this particular journey.
Zera discovered the Sanctuary in the Sky to become Zeradias, and when the time was right, he was promoted. This can be achieved in duel by releasing Zera himself to special summon him. I call upon Archlord Zerato(LV 8/2800/2300)." A taller Zera with wings appeared.
Fairly sure you want "single" here.
Wrong warning, Tori. You should have warned him against playing that card against Flip, not against accepting it.
This is missing a closing quotation mark. (Not continued in the next paragraph, after all)"I just don't like making enemies. Some people might say I'm too forgiving, but that's who I am. My dad always said dueling was meant to bring out the best in people, so that's how I duel.