Hye
Reader of The Long Words
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How long ago did he post this chapter on SB?]You should check on Spacebattles were there are 4 more chapters since he updates there first
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How long ago did he post this chapter on SB?]You should check on Spacebattles were there are 4 more chapters since he updates there first
Hmm... I might do that, it's just this is one of two stories i follow on QQ. It's basically the only reason i have the Latest Alerts tab open for QQ. If i started to follow it there, i won't look at QQ again for a looong time. So unless he doesn't update faster on here in the near future, i'll stay here. Besides, i like QQ layout more than i like SB. But thanks for telling me.
Oh, Come ON! That's just cheating!
Is... Is there something wrong with the update? There seems to be quite a large lack of replies and/or likes. Even 6½ hours after you posted it.
Sadly, no. It only worked because Jack's using Eden's Broadcast Shard, which Dracul's power had already touched, and that he was unknowingly using it to try and figure out Rolyat...I mean, uh, Taylor. That let Dracul hack his way back through the connection and make his displeasure and contempt known. In theory, someone else with a communication Shard could end up getting a talking-to by our favorite Vampire Lord, but it's unlikely.Truly today is a glorious day. A whopping 6 stories have updated so far, and it's not even midday, with 3 of them having more than 4k words. Possibly 4 of them, seeing as i don't know how many words this has.
It's nice to see Jack being on the other side of manipulations for a change. I was surprised to see Dracul popping out and talking to Jack. Are we gonna see more of him, talking to other Parahumans?
First of all I assume that you mean he is an Eden trigger (he got his shard from the ones Eden shed before crashing) and not that he is a cauldron cape.
Aah, well. Sadly we won't be seeing any more Dracul shenanigans, then. I always thought it was Scion's Broadcast Shard. Jack isn't a Cauldron Cape, right? I guess Eden managed to send out shards, don't know why it shouldn't have managed it.Sadly, no. It only worked because Jack's using Eden's Broadcast Shard, which Dracul's power had already touched, and that he was unknowingly using it to try and figure out Rolyat...I mean, uh, Taylor. That let Dracul hack his way back through the connection and make his displeasure and contempt known. In theory, someone else with a communication Shard could end up getting a talking-to by our favorite Vampire Lord, but it's unlikely.
Because Eden isn't dead-dead? Maybe it's more like brain-dead. Body still alive, but no one is home. It could also be that it's hard-coded into the shards to pursue conflict.Then why is he the way he is now?
With Eden dead all her Shards should be dead as well and not promoting conflict.
So why is he seeking out conflict?
Well, it is as it's been said by a grumpy old imp "Power corrupts, but ultimate Power is a whole lotta fun"It could sense that if Jack had become Lord of Darkness, he'd use the power for his own fun, and nothing else.
I know he's a natural trigger, and didn't get his powers from a vial. I...honestly can't remember if he had an Eden shard in canon, though when I read Worm, I got the impression that he did, and that it was one of the dead shards, too. So...yeah. It's a bit messed up.First of all I assume that you mean he is an Eden trigger (he got his shard from the ones Eden shed before crashing) and not that he is a cauldron cape.
But is that canon? Or is it something you decided to add to make sure the conversation in this chapter happened?
Which person?Funny thing: As a result of all this, had Cauldron gotten really lucky and dosed the right person with a vial?
He just said. The right person
Yes, but I'm asking who that right person would be.
It's obvious that the right person would be Canary. I think she would fear her power enough, that she would be cautious in using it
She's 15. So yeah. That's counting the three months she was in the ground, too. Not counting them...um, still 15.It's obvious that the right person would be Canary. I think she would fear her power enough, that she would be cautious in using it
Edit: Btw, how old is Taylor currently? 15? 16?