Considering that the original story (Available here) is on indefinite hiatus, I found myself...
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Thank you! I do have some of the next chapter done up, but I'm not quite sure where to really go afterwards. This scene basically popped into my head and demanded to be made manifest, and I'm basically winging it from here. I've got no real clue where Halfmask was going in regards to the plot, so this train is off the rails.
Heh, Hopefully I can live up to it.
Ikr? So much of what she say just didn't add up. Someone should have called her on it.If this was a normal post-gm crossover, I would've said that it would've been better if the revelations were spread out and teased at, showing the confusion of the cast as they try to piece together her past.
On the other hand, this being a continuation and having read the original fic, thank fucking god, finally.
All aboard the therapy train, CHOO CHOO! This world refuses to fall to the grimdark bullshit!When I first started reading the original very I was fucking elated, I'd love the concept that being said towards the end the story quickly began going back to the inevitable "being Taylor is suffering." So when you first thing you did was stop that shit dead start shoving Taylor to the road to recovery I was in fucking heaven. I don't mind angst but Jesus Christ the girl was just recovering there was no fucking reason to do it exactly like that. Remnant is full of drama and you can keep a story compelling without just being "lol, here's random depression and angst". The idea itself was fine but the implementation happened with all the subtly and foreshadowing a car crashing through an airplane's windshield while thousands of feet in the air. So I'm beyond pleased the direction things are going. That's not to say this story should be without drama but I sincerely hope it smoothly slides into place rather just staking it in with a hammer as well as not solely focused on Taylor. Otherwise excellent job so far, I'm excited for more.
That's not to say this story should be without drama but I sincerely hope it smoothly slides into place rather just staking it in with a hammer as well as not solely focused on Taylor. Otherwise excellent job so far, I'm excited for more.
[Individual (Jaune Arc)]: Designate [Ally], possible meatshield. Tertiary protectant.