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Hmm, he will leave after defeat of the Lich King, isn't he? He is preparing the heroes to his departure, maybe the power of light came with the cost of his body that's slowly disappearing?
Everything is possible I suppose.
Why? I like Bleach, and always thought that line was cool.
Like if it's from anime but sounds good, then it's cringe? You know there's a lot of philosophical stuff there that is good for you, even in this phrase, so calling it all cringe for quoting it from anime is strange, IMHO. Cringeworthy even
Small issue here. Ludicium means game. Iudicium with a capital i means judgement which is what i believe you meant to use.
I am having a hard time stomaching how utterly self-centered and crass Chromie is being here. Did she really forget that Alexstrasza just spent months, if for years, bound regularly raped, watching her children be enslaved and thrown into the war meat grinder as pawns for the Horde?Alexstrasza gazed down at Chronormu, a gentle smile growing on her face. "Hello, Chromie. It seems you got into a bit of trouble," she said with a teasing lilt in her voice. To this, Chromie huffed before wildly gesturing at Light's Chosen. "Do you know how many problems he's been causing for the Bronze?! The whole timeline is tangled up, and because of his echoing power, we cannot travel the timeline to fix it!" She stomped her feet on the ground, sounding almost childlike. "And not just that! He tied me up and kept me bound for so long!" Now she was just whining, a fact that seemed to amuse Alexstrasza to no end.
Chromie seemed to notice this amusement. "It is not funny!"
Small issue here. Ludicium means game. Iudicium with a capital i means judgement which is what i believe you meant to use.
There's no specific part to quote, but i'm a bit surprised that protag didn't make a pitstop while he was at Tirisfal... Sure the danger isn't time-critical but it's still kind of a big deal. And an opportunity to gather more paladin allies.
I am having a hard time stomaching how utterly self-centered and crass Chromie is being here. Did she really forget that Alexstrasza just spent months, if for years, bound regularly raped, watching her children be enslaved and thrown into the war meat grinder as pawns for the Horde?
Overall the story is nice, permanent outside PoV makes for an interesting change from the usual OP SI power wank, though the sheer fanatism going on basically everywhere makes me more than a little uncomfortable with The Light right now...
Cheers. I do not know Warcraft lore but this is quite compelling to read.
Oh... is it hard to follow? Since I've written it in a way that the reader would have a basic knowledge of Warcraft lore. I guess I should explain more who each persons are?
Lucky for you, the now thirty years old setting has a friendly tldr site if you want to get overview of it at whatever deepth you want.It's not hard to follow, secondary perspective helps a lot. I sometimes have to use a wiki/google images to look up images of locations or characters just to give my imagination something more to work with but I think it's alright.
I don't believe you need to change anything. I have read some Warcraft fanfics in the past and they are pulling their weight even if they are of dubious canonicity. So I don't know the lore per se, but I can recall tidbits - like that there is an undead army and so and there is something called the burning legion but I didn't know that they were related at all - that give me context to what I am reading.
Pretty good but it feels like an average dungeon experience. There's nothing personal, imo.
In the first scene Krasus suddenly became Uther, then Krasus then Uther again for no discernable reason.
Nice chapter like always. Is this the end, or is there yet more to come?
He should probably make a pitstop over Ulduar, because there's quite a few things linking the two... from the rather famous Lick King dream in Yog fight to the fact that Icecrown Citadel is made of Saronite, or what lurks in the hole under it's foundations...No it's not the end, there is still more to come. Not sure how much exactly, but Lich King is sort of the main focus.
He should probably make a pitstop over Ulduar, because there's quite a few things linking the two... from the rather famous Lick King dream in Yog fight to the fact that Icecrown Citadel is made of Saronite, or what lurks in the hole under it's foundations...
i'd argue that it'd probably be better if he instead did so personally. He's currently standing back to (apparently) let everyone build themselves up for the Big Fight against the Lich King, so it'd make sense that he'd go off to solo the pesky annoyance that could sidetrack everyone...It will be addressed, but he will not do anything himself personally so to speak.
i'd argue that it'd probably be better if he instead did so personally. He's currently standing back to (apparently) let everyone build themselves up for the Big Fight against the Lich King, so it'd make sense that he'd go off to solo the pesky annoyance that could sidetrack everyone...
More practically, keep everyone focused on the LK, meaning have them deal with the Sourge in general (Azjol Nerub dungeon?) while he deals with the rest: the blue dragonflight has been apparently appropriately intimidated so that leaves the living Vyrkul (ie: Utgarde), the Trolls (Zuldrak), Ulduar, and maaaaybe Sartharion (because the dragonflights can't do anything... ).
Some friendly interaction with the Tuskarr could make some nice interlude(s) with a less grimdark overall feeling.
Archavon and GoT Stratholme can probably be entirely ignored, and Rubis Sanctum(Halion) is post-LK in the timeline, though could be linked to Sartharion if you wanted.
I have to agree that how the loyal the Vyrkul have been made to the Lich King in canon is a bit strange.Nevertheless, this fact gnawed at him. The knowledge that their ancestors willingly chose to align with such a monstrous force and harbored such intense disdain for everyone else weighed heavily on him.