Galacticplumber
Not too sore, are you?
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Considering his only remaining attachment is Itachi, and that he doesn't live for much of anything else? The two are entwined.
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Dude, were good. Finish it when the inspiration strikes.I feel like a heel.
Guys, coming back to the story after my long break forced me to realize just how friggan out of my depth I am. With Daisuke and Anko, where I want to go with the story, I...I can't do it. I don't have it in me.
So I'm sorry. You guys waited so long for me to come back and, well, now I'm realizing just how screwed I am if I try to continue.
That said, I swear I will finish this, guys. I just need to take some time and get some applicable life experience.
If it sounds hollow, I'm sorry and I understand.
I hope to see you next time I start up the fic.
~Fulcon
OMG, thought this was abandoned until I actually went back to SB to check. Turns out this moved here. Thought all my support on patreon was for naught haha. Time to catch up! My goodness. Silver lining is that I have a tone to read!
Do you need a hug, man? Because this doesn't exactly sound healthy from a mental perspective, or a creative one. Any other time I'd probably make a quip about how it's the perfect opportunity to make him less preachy and hypocritical, but after your sevenish month hiatus, it does't feel right to do so.This has become, at it's core, a self-indulgent power fantasy with a preachy, hypocritical and overpowered MC that I've come to despise. But I still feel the need to write it.
I really enjoyed part 1 and most of part 2 especially when he was trying to "find himself" in the begining but it feels like the story is going off track
Do you need a hug, man? Because this doesn't exactly sound healthy from a mental perspective, or a creative one. Any other time I'd probably make a quip about how it's the perfect opportunity to make him less preachy and hypocritical, but after your sevenish month hiatus, it does't feel right to do so.
So, the harem is a go. I'm honestly kinda hoping that Hisako doesn't join. I don't think Hisako is a good fit for Daisuke. She keeps imposing her values onto him. But if it does go down that route, well, I trust you.
Glad you're back. Was worried you wouldn't continue this. Hope you have a good rest of your day.
The solution is to find a way to have someone convince him to stop being that. Probably without even referring to it. Maybe an older, wiser person who also wants to share chakra and jutsu with people?with a preachy, hypocritical and overpowered MC that I've come to despise.
The solution is to find a way to have someone convince him to stop being that. Probably without even referring to it. Maybe an older, wiser person who also wants to share chakra and jutsu with people?
Maybe he runs into the Sage of Six Paths and they start talking about an entirely different thing and he takes a revelation and eventually enlightenment from it? In a non gamey way, not as a perk, just as something he earns.
No worries, everyone needs an uncle Iroh.
Nice to see a return to this, hopefully Daisuke reconnects with Naruto and co, kinda miss the interaction between them all.
This has become, at it's core, a self-indulgent power fantasy with a preachy, hypocritical and overpowered MC that I've come to despise. But I still feel the need to write it. To those of you who dropped this fanfic, more power to you. I'd hate to cause you to feel like you're wasting your time.
It was always about the character interactions (to me at least) and the violence served as a vehicle to progress it, without the other characters it just feels kinda empty. Sure he fought a giant monster and it is a good fight scene and I like it as that but I find it less memorable than that time Daisuke formed a book club with his friends. You're writing still great but the whole god thing just feels kinda meh, I have no idea how else to explain it just I have a feeling its only a matter of time till he devises some cunning plan to defeat his enemies and I'm sure it will be awesome don't get me wrong but I wanna read about twelve-year-old child soldiers and a traumatized reincarnate talk about their feelings. That seems to be where this story is going and i will absolutely keep reading, probably re-read it all for the third or fourth time as well.
...Do you wanna take a break and move to something else for a bit? I see that you wrote another chapter of Giving Up as well as this chapter, but it seems like this has become more of a chore to you than something to enjoy. Furthermore, I think that if you wanted to end here, or write an epilogue arc, it would work just fine. He's a god, he's setting up his personal family, and he's working to make the world a better place. That sounds like a mighty fine place to end it if you want to.
At the end of the day, #1 priority has to be your mental health. If you can't post a chapter and feel a sense of accomplishment, then what's the point?
RL first second and third, checketh thine self before ye wrecekth thine self
It was always about the character interactions (to me at least) and the violence served as a vehicle to progress it, without the other characters it just feels kinda empty. Sure he fought a giant monster and it is a good fight scene and I like it as that but I find it less memorable than that time Daisuke formed a book club with his friends. You're writing still great but the whole god thing just feels kinda meh, I have no idea how else to explain it just I have a feeling its only a matter of time till he devises some cunning plan to defeat his enemies and I'm sure it will be awesome don't get me wrong but I wanna read about twelve-year-old child soldiers and a traumatized reincarnate talk about their feelings. That seems to be where this story is going and i will absolutely keep reading, probably re-read it all for the third or fourth time as well.
(Looks at his lap-tops(torso-top?) clock, sees its past three am, remembers he has like three tests this week and needs to write a months worth of notes for multiple subjects "Ahh shi!!")