This started as fiction related to the Power Armor CYOA, though the characters and their stories...
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Very well done. You handled the change of POVs and tense changes expertly.
Morons in mecha suits.
I wish I could say that this would be uncharacteristic of people, but I can't.
... yeah, You keep using that excuse. I'm sure someone's gonna believe itAngel opened a fridge, grabbed an import beer. "My elf says exchanging bodily fluids gives her more nano healing shit. So we've been doing a lot of that."
Liking the fuck out of this! Hey, JMH, what's your policy on omakes? 'Cuz this CYOA's just lit a literary fire under my ass and I'm itching to write something.
I could have spent these 2400+ words on my stories, but nooooo, this plot bunny just had to open its trap...
How'd I do? Shamefur dishpray or something positive?
Since Matt's on the other side of the country, he'd never have cause to interact with the main plot or even be mentioned at all. Just another tale in a power-armor apocalypse.
Unless, of course, you felt like it. Which would make me super-duper splendiferously fantabulously ecstatic, but, ahem, your call.
I liked it.
Still, I wonder if this story is going to acknowledge Power Armor CYOA "canon"
... see, I don't really feel his angst.
Killing her wasn't the greatest thing, sure, but she shot first and had plenty of chances to break off hostilities. She wasn't just being defensive; she was specifically acting to kill him, by stabbing him in the back after attempting to light him up with a missile from stealth.
If you try that sort of thing unprovoked against someone who also has a power armour suit, then yes, you do deserve what you get.
Second, hey, OP, how are you handling suit upgrades? Any way to eventually increase the size, or swap chassis?
...Alien Biomorphs, eh?
How much later on? Are we talking months or days in? Every good story needs an antagonist.