Technecht: Death and Rebirth

[Alasw1]

The mine was a cold, dreary place for anyone, but for Nibel, it was a special kind of hell. The triangular mark on his palm isolated him even among the lowest of the low. It was a bad omen, conjuring fear in some and naked disgust in others.

A buzzer rang. Meal time.

Nibel set his tools down and fell in at the very back of the worker line. His fellow slaves didn't like him touching them. A look of disgust if he was too close; a shove if he made contact.

The cafeteria bustled with noise and the smell of food and coffee. It was divided in two: one side for free workers, the other for slaves. Nibel joined the slave line at the back, avoiding trouble. The mood in the queue was light, people chatting happily with the servers. The positive vibe died the moment Nibel reached the front. The server's face soured. He slopped food onto the tray and waved him away with a grunt.

But today was different. Nibel spotted an empty table. He wouldn't have to eat on the floor.

The relief lasted three bites.

A shadow fell over him. "Move."

He looked up at a group of men. "Please. I just want to eat like a normal person for once."

The biggest one grabbed him by his shirt and threw him to the floor. His tray clattered. Nibel got up, saw their faces, and knew he had no chance. He gathered his food, shoulders slumped, and left.

He walked to his usual spot by the window, ignoring the smirks and mocking stares.

He sat and stared into the star-dusted blackness, eating the tasteless slop. The numbness inside made it easier to swallow. When he finished, he left immediately. More people meant a higher chance of torment.

He went back to his work station—the one place no one else would be during rest periods. He was lost in his thoughts when the buzzer dragged him back to reality.

When the shift ended, a flicker of spirit returned. Slaves worked ten to twelve hours a day, but the rest of the time was theirs. Many used it to work for the mine's private shops, earning payment in goods or coupons, since real money was useless. The most popular payment was spices, to make the slop more tolerable.

Nibel worked an extra job, too. But he didn't care about spices. He worked for books. They were his only escape.

"Hello, Mr. Swaza," he said, a rare happiness in his voice.

"Ah, Nibel. Bad news." The shopkeeper wouldn't meet his eyes. "Management's new rule. We can't trade cultural items to slaves anymore. No more books."

Nibel's chest caved in. He'd known misery, but this was a clean, devastating break.

"But… why?" It was all he could say.

"Who knows? Don't want you educated. Or maybe they just enjoy it. I can still pay you in spices. We have a fresh shipment."

"No. That's okay." The words were hollow. He turned to leave.

"Nibel… the books you have. You need to give them to management. They've probably already cleared out the living quarters."

He walked back to his bunk, his mind empty static. His chest was tight. The walk felt like a march to the gallows. How was he supposed to endure the rest of his life with no escape? No friends, no family, only hatred.

He shut down.

Eat. Work. Sleep. A numb, robotic cycle.

Eat. Work. Sleep.

Eat. Work...

BOOM. An explosion ringed out in the distance..

The shock woke him from his stupor. Alarms blared. People panicked. Gunfire echoed, getting closer. Everyone ran. He followed.

"THIS WAY!" guards yelled. "FREE PERSONS TAKE PRIORITY! ANY SLAVE WHO IMPEDES EVACUATION WILL BE SHOT!"

Nibel watched the free persons rush past, then the other slaves. He was the bottom of the bottom, so he waited until every room was clear before moving.

They reached a secondary hangar. It held only a few small ships.

"FREE PERSONS ONLY! THEN THE STRONGEST SLAVES!"

He watched the boarding process. Some slaves begged or tried to push in. A guard shot one, and the rest fell silent. After the free persons boarded, there was little room left. The only slaves who made it on were the group that had bullied him in the cafeteria.

The gunfire was right outside now. The ships, still holding seats for missing free workers, decided not to wait. They departed.

Seconds later, new soldiers stormed the hangar. They wore black, skintight suits that covered them completely, with glowing lines tracing the fabric and lights for eyes. They looked like demons.

Nibel should have been terrified. He felt nothing. If he died here, it would be a relief.

One of them raised a device to his helmet. His voice boomed through the hangar. "We are from the Volsung Empire. This mine is operating illegally. The use of slaves is illegal under Imperial law. You are liberated. Former slaves, form a line for processing. We will take you to Nasturia for repatriation."

Freed? It had to be a trick. But why? They could just take them. They had the guns.

An Imperial ship landed. The former slaves formed a line, giving names and fingerprints. Out of habit, Nibel waited until the very end, keeping his distance.

This caught a soldier's attention. "You, lad. Why are you hanging back?"

"This is my place, sir. People don't like me near them."

"Why? Did you do something? A criminal perhaps?"

"No, sir. It's because I'm a Nibelung." He showed him his palm.

The soldier made a sharp, surprised sound. "Gunther! Has this mark ever been found on anyone else?"

"No, Sergeant. Not as far as I know. It's an exclusive trait."

The Sergeant turned back to him. "Sit over there. Rest. Eat this." He handed Nibel a bar. "We'll speak after the others are processed."

Confusion warred with the taste of the food. It was incredible, an explosion of flavours he never knew existed. The ecstasy of chocolate mixed with the fear that he was being set apart for execution.

He spaced out, watching the hangar empty. Eventually, the Sergeant returned.

Nibel decided to be direct. He had nothing left to lose. "Are you going to kill me for being a Nibelung?"

The soldier laughed. "No. Look at this." He pulled off his glove and held out his own palm. There, clear as day, was the same triangular mark.

 

[Alasw1]

Nibel and the other slaves were taken to the soldiers' main ship. Its scale was hard to grasp. After being separated, a soldier led him down countless corridors. They were utilitarian, but to Nibel, they felt luxurious. They were spotless, well lit, and made of unblemished metal. A far cry from the mine, where only air tightness mattered, not cleanliness. The air itself was a shock. The sharp, citrus scent of cleaning products was a complete novelty, overwhelming the chemical and sweat stained memories of the mine.

The man leading him seemed important. Everyone they passed saluted. Nibel's knowledge was limited to mine guards and old stories, but the respect was clear.

After half an hour of navigating, they arrived at a busy deck. Nibel's confusion grew. Why bring him here? Was the soldier really a Nibelung? He still doubted everything, but could not find a reason for the deception. Who would willingly bear that mark?

The people on the deck looked at him, puzzled. Before he could speak, the man in the central chair, the captain, he assumed, spoke.

"And this is?"

The soldier who led him nodded. "You're not going to believe this, Captain. Go on, lad. Show him your hand."

Nibel hesitated, then held out his palm.

The captain let out a bemused chuckle. "Is that what I think it is?"

"Yes, Captain. Our marks don't appear outside our bloodline. It's genuine."

Nibel caught the word. Our?

The captain smiled. "Men. Show him your hands."

In unison, every person on the bridge extended a hand. Each palm bore the same triangular mark. Finally, the captain showed his, too.

Nibel's mind stalled. He had never met another with the mark, and now he was surrounded by them. These were the men who had rescued slaves who despised him for this very mark. A spike of anger cut through his confusion.

"You look like you have questions, lad," the soldier said, noting his expression. "Well explain in due time. For now, sit and relax."

Nibel sat. "What happens to me next?"

"Nothing bad, don't worry. But your situation is particular. Well explain everything when we make port. Just relax until then."

"The Duke will want to know about this," the captain added. "He doesn't involve himself in recruitment, but this situation is unique to say the least. Doubt he would be happy if we didn't tell him."

The Duke? Recruitment? Nibel held his tongue.

"Until then, introductions," the soldier said. "I'm Sergeant Gerhard."

"And I am Captain Hrodwulf."

"They call me Nibel."

"Nibel?" the captain replied, slightly taken aback. "Short for Nibelung?"

"Yes. It's what they have always called me. Mostly derogatory."

"Well, that will not do. You'll need a first name. By law, our tribe must use Nibelung as our last name. If we all went by that, it would be chaos."

The captain's enthusiastic tone was alien to Nibel. His life had been defined by aggression, indifference, or passive cruelty.

"Well, I'm off to my duties," the Sergeant said. "You just sit tight, lad."

As Gerhard left, a crewman spoke up from his terminal. "Captain, we have detected two ships. They match the ones that escaped the mine. Your orders?"

The captain smiled, a sharp, predatory look, and turned to Nibel. "What do you think we should do?"

Nibel's mind filled with faces. The guards who pushed him, the management who took his books, the slaves who would not let him eat in peace. His breathing grew heavy, anger hot on his face. He wanted to say destroy them. But a lifetime of conditioned submission rose like a wall.

"I don't know, sir. It's not my place to say."

The captain laughed. "Well, kid, they made you into an obedient dog, didn't they? No offense. We're all dogs here, of one master or another. You'll fit right in." He turned and gave the order. "Destroy them." Then, he looked back at Nibel. "But remember, even a dog can learn to bite, you can still learn to control your own fate."

Nibel felt a brief, thrill watching the ships explode, a twisted satisfaction of seeing those who had mistreated him finally be punished. Then he remembered Swaza was on one of them. The shopkeeper had been indifferent, but never cruel. He had given him books. A wave of guilt washed that satisfaction away.

"I'm sorry," he whispered. "Rest in peace. And thank you."

---

The ship made port on Nasturia. The planet was habitable, but harsh. It was barren, largely infertile and battered by acidic rains. Technology made it comfortable for inhabitants in their artificial biomes which Nibel caught glimpses of during landing, but he was not destined for comfort. Sergeant Gerhard led him into a military base fully exposed to the bleak environment, past massive black airships, giant mechanised suits, and a constant flow of soldiers.

"Don't worry, lad, you'll not be stuck with me forever," Gerhard said, leading him towards the base.

Then suddenly the ground shuddered. A vast, cool shadow fell over them. Nibel looked up, and his breath caught.

A giant was landing. A bipedal mechanised suit, sleek and terrifying. Its armour was a black so deep it seemed to swallow the light. Two optical sensors shone from its head with a cold, blue glare. It stood over six meters tall.

Nibel stared, utterly captured. His question was a hushed whisper. "What is that?"

"That," Sergeant Gerhard said, a note of pride in his voice, "is a Technecht."

But it was the movement that seized him. It didn't clang or jerk. It moved with the fluid, predatory grace of something alive. The contradiction rooted him to the spot with a pure, uncanny dread. He couldn't look away. The terrible grace was beautiful, and the sheer impossibility of it held him completely.

He didn't get to stare for long. The Sergeant gestured toward the entrance, urging him inside. "Don't worry," Gerhard said. "You'll see plenty of them soon enough."

"I want you to meet Warrant Officer Godefrid. When he heard about you, he instantly volunteered to be your sponsor. He's eccentric. But he's one of the best we have. You can rely on him."

Godefrid was a tall man, impeccably groomed. His hair was slicked back, his face clean shaven, his uniform spotless. His wolf like grey eyes stared into Nibel, as if seeing through to his core. He smiled.

"Oh yes, yes. You'll do just fine."

Seeing Nibel's confusion, the Sergeant interjected. "Ignore it, lad. No one knows what goes on in his head. Just know you can count on him. Have a seat."

They sat around a low table. Godefrid never looked away, his fascinated smile deeply unsettling. Nibel thought of the darker things that happened in the slave quarters. He hoped that he didn't want him that way.

"Well, lads, where do we start?" the Sergeant began. "You're probably wondering who we are."

"The Volsung Empire?"

"The Empire is more like our owner. We're the Nibelung Servant Legion, the NSL. A segregated unit within the Imperial military. We specialise in operating Technecht suits and space warfare."

"What are Technechts?"

"Large mechanized suits for space and terrestrial warfare. Think of a giant humanoid robot you wear. It becomes an extension of you."

The concept was still abstract, but Nibel nodded.

"So why am I here?" he asked.

Godefrid leaned forward, his amusement plain. "I heard you were a slave. Sorry to break it to you, but this mark?" He held up his palm. "It also marks us as property of the Empire."

"But the Empire banned slavery."

"Our ancestors rebelled and lost," Godefrid said. "The Emperor gave them a choice: death or eternal service. They chose service. So the mark makes us property.
But here we can earn freedom. Kill enough enemies, rise high enough, and only the Emperor himself can give you orders.
That's the deal. Will you take it? Will you forge yourself a path through blood?"
Nibel looked to the Sergeant for confirmation.

"Remember, he's eccentric, but he isn't wrong," Gerhard said. "The army gives us freedom we wouldn't have elsewhere. Our unit is segregated, but we have the same rights. We can earn honour, even full freedom, through service."

Nibel looked down at his hands. "I am a coward. I endured abuse for years. I barely fought back. What can someone like me do here?"

Godefrid brought his face closer, his gaze intense. "That is what makes this so perfect. You start from the very bottom. Your ascent will be all the more glorious. No one started lower, and so, no one can climb higher."

The Sergeant cut in, his tone pragmatic. "We are familiar with this conditioning. We are confident we can undo it, if you let us. The choice is yours."

Nibel thought of all the abuse, the powerlessness, the resignation. He had already accepted death. This was a chance to fight for something more.

"So, what will it be?" asked the Sergeant.

"Will you seize your destiny?" Godefrid's voice was a low, fervent whisper.

"Yes," Nibel said. "Ill do it."

Godefrid's face lit up. "SAY IT."

"I'LL DO IT."

"No," Godefrid insisted, his voice bellowing. "SAY YOU WILL SEIZE YOUR DESTINY!"

Nibel took a breath, the words feeling foreign and powerful on his tongue. "I WILL SEIZE MY DESTINY!"

The shout echoed in the sterile room, leaving a ringing silence.

Sergeant Gerhard's initial look was pure confusion, his eyebrows raised. The timid, broken slave was gone, replaced for a single moment by this raw, shouting youth.

Then the moment passed. Nibel's bravado vanished. His shoulders slumped as a hot flush crept up his neck. "I'm sorry for shouting," he stammered, staring at the floor.

Gerhard's expression softened into a warm, rumbling laugh. "Don't worry about it." he said, a genuine grin on his face. "That's the first time you've sounded like a man, lad."

Across the table, Godefrid made no attempt to hide his triumph. His smile was one of pure, unbridled delight. He looked less like an officer and more like a child on Christmas morning.

 

[Alasw1]

Nibel awoke in a small, sterile room. It held a bed, a desk, a closet, a bookshelf, and a private shower. To anyone else, it would have been cramped and impersonal. To Nibel, who had slept on a worn-out mattress in a room with hundreds of other slaves, it was a sanctuary. He had slept so deeply that waking felt like surfacing from a long dive into dark water, and even a cold shower did little to shake the lingering haze of true rest.

A knock startled him. "Hello, can I come in?" It was the Sergeant's familiar voice. "Well, it seems I'm still your guide," Gerhard said, stepping inside. "There's paperwork to formalize your enlistment. This is usually a sponsor's duty, but Godefrid finds formalities boring and claims he has 'important duties.' So, you're stuck with me." He gave a weary smile. "We spoke of seizing your destiny yesterday. A fair warning: be prepared for that destiny to be regularly handed to you by fools with more rank than sense."

With a sigh, he gestured for Nibel to follow.

As they walked, Nibel gathered his courage. "You mentioned Godefrid is my sponsor. What does that mean, exactly?"

"Right, you wouldn't know," Gerhard said. "The system is second nature to us. We're a specialized legion. Our basic training happens when we're teenagers, where we learn the foundations of our roles. When we officially enlist, we're sent straight here. A sponsor, a veteran, takes us on as an apprentice to mentor us into our position. One day, you'll do the same for the next generation."

"But what about those who choose civilian life? Isn't that training a waste?"

"Honestly, few choose it. We're bred for this. The ones who do usually drop out early and sign with a corporation. The corps are happy to get an employee with no rights they can pay a pittance to."

Nibel nodded. "As hated as I was, my owners always made sure I was healthy enough to work."

"Exactly."
"But how will I catch up? I have no training. No education."

"Don't worry about that. We'll get you into shape. The Empire is just happy to have a warm body to throw at its problems. It's our job to make sure you're a body that survives the throwing."

Perhaps he should have been troubled by the dehumanizing language, but a life of slavery had, ironically, prepared him for the blunt realities of military life.

They arrived at a recruitment office, where a secretary acknowledged them with profound indifference. The familiarity of her annoyance was a strange comfort to Nibel; the secretaries at the mine had been the same. They were great equalizers, treating slaves and free workers with identical disdain for interrupting their day.

"How can I help?" she droned.

"We're here for enrolment," Gerhard said.

"Here. Fill these out."

"Not those. We need the Nibelung forms."

The secretary looked up, exhaling slowly. "Aren't your people usually enrolled by the rehabilitation centres you're raised in?"

"This is a unique case. Please find the form."

"Ugh. Fine. Give me a second." She shuffled off to a back room.

"What did she mean by 'rehabilitation centres'?" Nibel asked.

"Remember how we serve the Empire for our tribe's sins?"

"Yes."

"It's not just a metaphor. The official doctrine is that we carry the sin on a spiritual, even genetic level. This mark," Gerhard said, tapping his palm, "is supposedly the physical proof of a tainted soul. That's how they justify our servitude long after the original rebels are dust. The 'rehabilitation' is just learning our place and how to atone for a crime we didn't commit."

Nibel processed this. The Sergeant's tone held a bitter edge, a quiet anger that felt alien. Nibel's own spirit had been conditioned into submission, all resistance beaten out of him. He had never dared to feel anger about his fate, only acceptance. Before he could form a question, the secretary returned.

"Here. Fill these out," she muttered, slapping the forms on the counter.

The Sergeant gave her a thin, perfunctory smile. "Thanks."

He then turned to Nibel. "So, have you thought of a name?"

"I have. I think I'll keep Nibel."

"Nibel Nibelung? That's a mouthful. And wasn't it used as an insult?"

"It was. But it's the only name I've ever known. Changing it would feel like running from who I am. If I'm to seize control of my fate, I think that starts by seizing my own name."

"Wouldn't choosing a new name also be a form of control?"

"It would. But this feels more symbolic. It's a reclamation, not an escape."

The Sergeant nodded, his curiosity piqued but the clock ticking. "Fair enough," he said, ending the conversation there.

"Yoo-hoo!"
The call came from behind as Nibel walked back to his quarters. He turned to see Godefrid striding toward him, a wide grin on his face. "Did you miss me?"

Most would find the man's eccentricities grating, but Nibel felt a genuine flicker of joy. Godefrid was the first person who seemed genuinely interested in him, though he desperately hoped that interest was purely platonic.

"So, did you get all your paperwork done?" Godefrid asked.
"Yes. I don't know when the enrolment will be finalized, though."
"Oh, don't be silly. You were enrolled the moment you were born. The rest is just formality. Come, we have lessons to start."

Taken aback but with no reason to argue, Nibel followed him to a room filled with large, spherical pods.
"What are these?" Nibel asked.
"Training pods. Put these on." Godefrid handed him a black, skintight suit and a pair of wraparound glasses.

After changing, Nibel stood waiting. "What do I do now?"
"Get in."

Once Nibel was inside the pod, Godefrid's voice came through a speaker. "A quick rundown. The suit is a techsuit. It uses electromagnetic fields to control a Technecht. Simple, really. You move, it moves."
"And the glasses?"
"They let you see. Any other questions?"


Before Nibel could answer, the pod hummed to life. He was elevated, floating half a meter in the air. Metallic rings emerged from the walls, encircling his limbs without touching them, mirroring his every motion.
"You'll learn quicker this way," Godefrid laughed.

The glasses flickered on. One moment he was in a pod; the next, he was standing in the middle of a half-destroyed town. He looked down at his hands, massive, metallic claws. He moved an arm, and the Technecht's arm moved in perfect sync. The connection was so seamless it felt like an extension of his own body. He could even feel a simulated wind against the metal hull, or was it just a perfect, unnerving illusion?

A sudden warning scream filled his ears. A red exclamation mark flashed before his eyes. High-speed jets screamed past, dropping bombs that shook the ground. Nibel threw the mech to the ground, scrambling behind the ruins of a building. A furious artillery barrage began to pound the town into dust.

"You've got a gun! On your hip!" Godefrid's voice was calm amidst the chaos.

Nibel fumbled, grabbing the massive weapon. He fired wildly in the general direction of the artillery. Bullets whizzed past his head, from behind. He spun around to see fellow Technecht units, but a jet slammed into one, obliterating it in a fireball.

"KEEP SHOOTING!" Godefrid shouted.

Terrified, Nibel kept firing. Then he saw them: tanks, rolling into the town. His sole remaining comrade fired down at them before exploding into a shower of shrapnel under a concentrated shelling.

Nibel screamed. He destroyed a few tanks, but then a searing impact threw his suit to the ground. He looked down and saw his mech's legs sheared off. He looked up into the cold, glowing eyes of an enemy Technecht, its weapon still smoking.

The simulation powered down.

Nibel gasped, his heart hammering against his ribs. "What the hell was that?" The realism was absolute; it felt like he had truly died.

Godefrid laughed. "That's war, baby. How did it feel?"
"Terrifying! How am I supposed to survive that?" Nibel's voice was thick with frustration and defeat.
"To be perfectly honest, that was a nightmare scenario. Only the best of the best can survive it. Artillery, suicide jets, limitless tanks, and enemy Technechts in a terrestrial setting? It's a guaranteed loss. I just enjoy seeing new recruits panic. It's a guilty pleasure. That said… you held the line. Most people just run. You have some fight in you. It's interesting."
"Can we just do something normal, please? I'd like to build a tolerance before experiencing hell again."

Godefrid chuckled. "Alright, alright. Basic lessons it is."

The next simulation placed him in the void of space. Godefrid patiently guided him through the suit's functions: omnidirectional flight, the antimatter gun that could extend from a sidearm to a rifle, and the energy sword that drew from the same hyper-dense cartridges. He learned about the shield, capable of stopping most projectiles but vulnerable to a single hit from the powerful energy weapons.

After the lesson, Godefrid invited him to lunch.

He watched, amazed, as Nibel devoured the food. "Did they not feed you?"
"It's not that," Nibel said, almost choking on mashed potatoes. "On the mine, it was flavorless slop designed to keep us working. These new tastes… I can't pace myself."

Godefrid smiled, looking at him like he was a rescued animal. "Enjoy it, then."

"Can I ask you something?" Nibel said.
"Sure."
"Why do people hate us so much?" The vague answers about ancestral sins had never sat right with him. The sheer universality of the disgust seemed illogical.

"We're the cursed people. The traitors."
"I know, but why does everyone still care? No one alive experienced those crimes."

Godefrid's gaze held a deep pity. "Hatred is a seed inside everyone. Give people a target, and they'll happily water it. It's an outlet that makes them more docile elsewhere."

It made a bleak kind of sense, but it still felt incomplete. "But you're right, there's more to it," Godefrid added. "Why do you think the Empire needs a slave army?"

Nibel thought. "Because we're cheap? Disposable?"
"That's cute. You don't need this complex system for cheap and disposable. The reason is more sinister."
"So, what is it?"

Godefrid smiled again, but this time, Nibel could see a profound sorrow in his grey eyes. "I could tell you, but you'll find out soon enough. Trust me, this is better for your growth. For your way of thinking."
"My way of thinking?"
"It's not enough to be told an answer. To truly understand, you must recondition your mind to reach the conclusion yourself. Until then, the truth is just words." Godefrid leaned forward. "But remember that question: Why does the Empire need an army of slaves?"

 

[Alasw1]

Nibel woke up in his room once again, he washed his face and caught his reflection in the mirror. He paused, really looking at himself. He wasn't just a ghost anymore. A healthy colour was returning to his pale skin. The hollows in his cheeks were softening, and his blue eyes were finally clear of the old exhaustion. He ran a hand through his hair, his actual hair, which was growing in brown and unruly after a lifetime of forced shaves in the mines. He'd need a cut soon. His fingers brushed against stubble on his jaw. A shave, too. He surprised himself, realising he was actually thinking about how he would style his appearance, a thought that had never crossed his mind before.
But he didn't have time for that now. He could finally read. Since he'd missed out on a proper education, no rehabilitation home for him, he had to teach himself. Godefrid was supposed to instruct him, but found the idea boring and had just handed him the books instead. That suited Nibel; he could learn at his own pace.

The first book was a history and geography text. He learned their star system was controlled by three main powers. First, the Volsung Empire, the one he now belonged to. Second, the Union of Planetary Republics, or UOPR, which had nothing to do with unions or republics. It was a dictatorship under a strongman named Kamil Volkhan. Their method for keeping the "union" together was simple: they nuked rebellious planets into extinction, a threat they had only needed to use once.

The final power was the Sovereign Accord of Independent Nations, or SAIN. It began as a defense pact between independent worlds fearing annexation by the Empire or the UOPR, but it had grown into a nation of its own. The leader of its mutual defense organisation became the alliance's de facto leader. Unlike the Emperor, this leader was elected by the representatives of each member nation, though not all of them were democracies.

A fourth, smaller power existed: a single planet named Tellus. It was the most coveted world in the system, the only Terra-tier planet with Earth-like fertility, climate, and biomes. Its independence was guaranteed by an agreement between the three great powers; an invasion by one would be met by the other two. In a war like that, there would be nothing left to conquer.

Because of its neutral status, Tellus hosted the interstellar capitals of each great power. While each had a military headquarters on a home planet, they maintained diplomatic hubs on Tellus to facilitate negotiations with each other and their own territories.

The system's history was complex, too much to learn quickly. The settlers originally came from Earth, an alliance of nations that each sent a ship to colonise the nearest habitable planet. A miscalculation, or a wormhole, hurled them to this unknown star system instead. Faced with the unknown, they separated, each ship colonising a different planet. This was the event that created the empires; the inhabitants of each power were largely descended from the original ship that settled their world. New cultures and religions had formed under the pressure of their new environments and isolation from Earth, though they still carried echoes of their founding beliefs.

The new information fascinated him, but he had to close the books. Next was martial arts training.


Unlike other instruction, this was a group activity. It was a constant discipline, Godefrid had explained, one that kept them fit and directly impacted their control over the Technechts. It could also save their lives in hand-to-hand combat.

The teacher started them with basic exercises: running, stretching, push-ups. Then came the punches and kicks, repeated until the motions felt burned into muscle memory. After demonstrating a few grappling holds, it was time for sparring.

To Nibel's surprise, he was chosen first. Why put a complete amateur in the ring? Under the weight of everyone's stares, he couldn't back out. His opponent was a towering man who seemed three times his size. Nibel looked at him, his own frame still underweight from the mines. He had no technique, no fighting spirit.

"Begin," the teacher said.

Nibel didn't even have time to react. A punch slammed into his face, sending him to the mat. He tried to push himself up, but a swift leg sweep put him down again. Then the man was on top of him, fists pounding into his head and shoulders. Nibel could only curl up, arms shielding his face.

"Stop." said the teacher.

The weight lifted. His opponent returned to his starting position as if nothing had happened.

"Back in position," the teacher said, gesturing at Nibel.

"BEGIN!"

This time, his opponent charged with an elbow strike. Nibel barely got his arms up in time to block it. Why am I fighting him? Our skills aren't matched. He caught a quick glance at the watching soldiers. Two were smirking, friends of his opponent, probably. The rest just stared, their faces blank. Was this normal? Their bored expressions were a spark on tinder.

Rage boiled up in him. Is this why I signed up? To be abused again?

His anger crested. He threw a wild punch with all his strength. It was misplaced, slamming into the top of the man's skull. Pain shot through Nibel's hand, but it made his opponent flinch. Seizing the moment on pure animal instinct, Nibel lunged forward and bit down on the man's arm.

Blood filled his mouth. He bit harder.

"GET THE FUCK OFF ME!" the man shouted, hammering blows into Nibel's side, but he wouldn't let go.

"STOP!" the teacher yelled again. The class rushed in, pulling at them, and eventually pried them apart. A deep, ugly wound marked the man's arm.

"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU, YOU FUCKING PSYCHO?" his opponent screamed.

Nibel just stared back, his face smeared with blood, his mind a daze. What is wrong with me?

He faintly heard the teacher dismiss the class. Then someone took him by the arm, and he instinctively followed.

Snap. "Hey." Snap. "You there?"

"Huh? Sorry, who are you?" Nibel blinked, the world coming back into focus.

The young man was laughing, highly amused. "That was absolutely insane. Why did you do that? Ah, it doesn't matter. That asshole had it coming. He always goes extra hard on new guys. Put a few in the hospital. So, what's your name? How come I've never seen you before?" He kept rambling, a torrent of words, It was a stark contrast to what he had been accustomed to until then.

"I messed up, didn't I?" The realisation hit Nibel like a physical blow. Even in a fight, he must have crossed a line. Had he just ruined his new life?

The young man seemed to think for a second. "Naaah. I was about to mess with you, but that'd be cruel. The teacher asked the administration to relax the rules for his classes. Partly to overlook training mishaps, partly because he's a masochist who enjoys the hazing. Did you think it was a coincidence he put you against the biggest guy here before you even knew how to block? I mean come on"

Upon hearing he was safe every muscle in Nibel's body relaxed at once. He felt utterly exhausted, and now acutely aware of the overwhelming iron taste in his mouth. "Ugh." He gagged. "Is there anywhere I can wash up?"

"Yeah, 'course. Bathroom's nearby. I'll lead you."

Nibel scrubbed the blood from his face and rinsed his mouth until the taste of iron was gone. "Who are you?" he finally asked. "And… thanks."

"No worries. Name's Aelfraed. Another Nibelung, like you." The young man grinned. "Just… less feral."

"I'm not... that's not who I am." Nibel leaned against the sink, his hand throbbing. "I don't know what happened."

Aelfraed's laugh was quick and sharp. "What happened is you gave Karl a new scar and a story he'll be too embarrassed to tell. Hell of a first day."

Suddenly, a familiar voice sang out from the doorway. "Yoo-hoo! Mad Dog Nibel!"

Godefrid leaned against the doorframe, beaming.

"Well, hello there. And who might you be?"

"Sir. Aelfraed. New recruit." A tone of respect entered his voice. Nibel remembered the Sergeant saying Godefrid's high rank was earned, a fact his behavior often made easy to forget.

"Oho! And what's this? Taken a shine to my Nibel, have we?"

"Just showing the new blood where to clean up, sir. After he, uh, made a mess."

Godefrid's eyes flicked to Nibel's blood-splattered shirt. "So I saw. Nibel, a word. Biting is… inelegant. As your sponsor, I must officially discourage it."

"I'm sorry, sir," Nibel said, the words automatic. "I just… I lost control."

"Don't worry about it. Honestly, I'm ecstatic to see that fire in you at last. I want more of that fight. Just... channel it. Biting is ugly, animalistic. Find a more beautiful outlet for that rage, okay?" Godefrid winked.

Nibel just nodded, exhausted. "Yes, sir."

"Excellent. I have high hopes for you."

Everything Godefrid said felt like part of a larger, private context only he understood. Nibel knew by now that questioning him would only yield another vague answer. "Okay, sir. I will."

The days passed, settling into a new rhythm. His lessons proceeded normally. Godefrid was a sharp teacher, and Nibel's skills as a pilot grew rapidly. Aelfraed had taken a liking to him, so now he had two eccentrics to sit with at meals. After the sparring incident, people generally left him alone in martial arts, making the sessions calmer. His evenings were for reading, piecing together the world around him.

He had fallen into a routine. It gave him a sense of comfort he had never known. But like all things, it ended. With the arrival of the Duke, it was time for the formal welcoming ceremony.


Nibel stood in a vast hall, pressed shoulder-to-shoulder with the other recruits. Before them, a stage was framed by three massive emblems: the Imperial sigil, the stark symbol of the Military, and the heraldry of the Dukedom of Reginald. A stern officer waited to the left of the stage.

"ATTENTION!"

The command cracked through the air. Nibel's body snapped rigid, his spine straightening in unison with the hundred others around him.

"PRESENTING HIS GRACE, DUKE REGINALD THE SECOND!"

A man strode onto the stage. Even from a distance, his presence was imposing. He was dressed in a formal military uniform, all sharp lines and polished medals, but it was his face that held Nibel, a piercing, uncompromising stare that seemed to sweep over them all.

"SALUTE!"

As one, the crowd thumped their right fists over their hearts, a single, percussive beat echoing through the hall.

"AT EASE."

A collective shift ran through the ranks.

The Duke's voice was calm, yet it carried to the very back of the room. "When our ancestors came to this galaxy, they were naive. They extended a hand in good faith to their fellow colonists. The others saw it as weakness. And they were right." He paused, letting the silence weigh on them. "Our ancestors clung to democracy. They believed dialogue and voting would settle the galaxy. The other ships agreed, but only as lip service. While we talked, they simply took."

"That was until our founder, Emperor Volsung the First, experienced his first vision. He saw the old gods slaughtered by the god Alvaldr for their ineptitude. Alvaldr started as a lesser god, worshipped by few, but he grew tired of their complacency. He deemed them unfit to rule. So he slaughtered them and made himself the sole ruler of the heavens."

"So it was with Emperor Volsung. He was a lesser citizen who saw the failure of the false god of democracy. He knew he must follow Alvaldr's path. He, too, would slay the corrupt and establish himself as ruler above all, with only Alvaldr above him. And so he did. He carved out the empire we call home."

His gaze seemed to sharpen, focusing on the Nibelung recruits. "But time corrupts. That corruption festered in your ancestors. You forgot what the Emperor had given you. You rebelled against him, and in doing so, you rebelled against God. The mark on your right hand is the proof of that betrayal."

"Yet the Empire is generous. It gives you a second chance. A chance to redeem yourselves, to cleanse your spiritual sins. Prophecy foretells that when your souls are finally clean of this original sin, the marks will disappear. So rejoice. Rejoice at this chance to cleanse your souls through service to the Empire. Rejoice that through war, Alvaldr has given you the choice to control your fate and return to our ranks."

He leaned forward, his voice rising from a solemn tone to a ringing, fervent declaration. "And most of all, rejoice that you do this in His image! So while you are cursed, you are also the holiest unit in the entire Imperial military! Your service to the Empire and to God starts here! GO FORTH, MY SACRED SOLDIERS. YOUR WAR FOR REDEMPTION BEGINS NOW!"

He raised a fist over his heart. The entire hall of recruits mirrored the gesture in a single, thunderous motion, their voices crashing together:
"FOR VOLSUNG, FOR ALVALDR!"

 

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Dim orange lights lit the enclosed launch bay. Each Technecht stood sealed in its own pressurized cell, a metal giant in a metal closet. Nibel looked down the line. A narrow walkway of metal gridwork ran between the compartments, the only path in the cramped space. The massive outer hull plates were still sealed, hiding the void beyond.


"Warning: commencing depressurisation in ten minutes," a worker announced over the speakers.


"Hey, Nibel." Aelfraed's voice came through the comms. "You ready for your first mission?"


"It's hard to say before the action starts," Nibel replied. "But I can say I'm prepared." Months of training had built a shell of confidence. But the old hesitation, carved into him by a lifetime of servitude, was still there, deep down.


"I'm sure you are, lad. I checked your sims. A+ student. A miracle, given your teacher."


Godefrid's channel lit up. "I heard that, Sergeant," he said, sounding annoyed.


"You were meant to. I'd only be worried if you cared enough about your rank to do anything about it. But we both know that's too much bother."


Godefrid exhaled, a sound of mock defeat. "Well, you got me there."


"By the way, Nibel," the Sergeant added, "I wanted to ask you about something. Last time we spoke, we didn't have time."


"About what?"


"Your name. Why did you choose 'Nibel'? Didn't you want to start over?"


"I thought about a new name. But it would be less impactful than keeping my own."


"How so?"


"A new name would be like starting fresh. I don't want to leave my past behind. I want to change what the name means. I want to turn it from something that inspires disgust into something that inspires respect. I started with it, and I'll end with it."


"Well, lad, that's quite respectable. Putting it that way, I can't argue."


Godefrid chimed in with a low moan. "Ohhh, Nibel. Every time I think you can't make me happier, you prove me wrong. It's art. Your life is a tragedy, yet in sadness there is hope. Even with your name, you reflect that. Come, Nibel. Let us together build your legend."


"So, anyway," the Sergeant interrupted, "let's run the pre-launch checks."


"Guys, I'm here too, you know?" said Aelfraed. "I'm kinda nervous. This is my first time in actual space. Will it feel different from the sims? What about the recoil in zero-g? And..."


"Yes, yes, you're a big boy too, Aelfraed," Godefrid cut in, his voice flat. "You'll do great. Lovely. Amazing."


"I'm sure it will be fine," Nibel said. He was worried, too. "Sergeant, why is our first time piloting in space a combat mission?"


"Same reason you learn to swim by being thrown in the water. It's designed to break you in."


"Well, I don't know, sir. I never learned to swim."


Aelfraed laughed. "He can pilot a literal God of war but he can't swim. Quite the contrast."


"He does have a point, Nibel. We'll have to fix that," said the Sergeant.


"Uh-huh, that simply will not do," Godefrid added. "Your legend will be incomplete."


Nibel sighed. "Okay, okay. I'll find a pool when we're back. Besides, isn't it the military's fault for not training me?"


"I suppose you're right," the Sergeant conceded. "Swimming is taught at the homes. We overlooked that."


"Ooh, let's go to the public pool! Maybe we'll meet some women there," Aelfraed said.


"Leisure is on your own time," the Sergeant replied, his tone a formal reminder.


"Right. Yes, sir. My apologies."


Depressurisation commencing now. Starting launch in 10, 9, 8...


"Okay, get ready. On my mark, follow my vector," the Sergeant said, all business.


...2, 1, 0. Commencing launch.


With a deafening roar, the outer hull plates slid away. Nibel was slammed back into his harness as his Technecht was catapulted into the void. The Sergeant's unit shot forward, and the others fell in behind.


"Asteroid belt in three minutes. Prepare for immediate contact. Watch for gun nests dug into the rock."


"Roger," the group replied.


A laser shot whizzed past. Then Godefrid's Technecht surged ahead of the formation.


"SHIELD WALL!" the Sergeant yelled.


Nibel fell into place, his shield interlocking with Aelfraed's and the others. They advanced as one, a moving fortress, their combined fire systematically silencing enemy positions as they pushed toward the heart of the pirate settlement.


"Godefrid, anti-ship canons are yours," the Sergeant called.


"On it." Godefrid became a blur, his energy sword dismantling the massive turrets with surgical strikes. The moment the last one fell, the Volsung gunship moved in, its main cannons turning the central base into expanding debris.


"Disperse!" Sergeant Gerhard ordered. "They're pirates. Marked for death. No prisoners."


The squad broke apart, hunting through the asteroid cluster.


"Follow me." Godefrid's order was flat, devoid of its usual theatricality.


Nibel obeyed, trailing as Godefrid moved with a possessed, terrifying grace. He destroyed gunships and gun nests until they confronted a group of four enemy Technechts. Godefrid dispatched three in seconds, then opened a channel to the last.


"You. Do you want to live?" Godefrid asked.


"What the hell are you?" the enemy pilot stammered.


Godefrid aimed his rifle at the cockpit. "Last time. Do you want to live?"


"Y-yes."


"Nibel. Fight him. If you lose, he goes free."


"Him?" Nibel asked, stunned.


"That is an order."


"Really? You'll let me go if I fight this amateur?" the pirate sneered. "I saw how he moves. He ain't all that."


The condescension was a spark on tinder. That was the voice of the mines, and he refused to hear it anymore.


"Yes, sir. I'll do it."


He drew his sword. The enemy opened fire immediately. Nibel raised his shield, closing the distance through the hail of rounds. The enemy swung; Nibel parried. Before he could recover, the enemy Technecht slammed its head into his. The impact rattled him, a concussive shock through the frame. The pirate slashed again, and Nibel barely got his shield up in time.


"Remember, Nibel," Godefrid's voice was calm in his ear. "No rules in a fight to the death. He will use anything."


The words snapped him out of the daze. He kicked out, shoving the enemy back, then charged, returning the headbutt. He went for his sidearm, but the enemy was faster, its sword slicing through his Technecht's wrist. The hand, still clutching the gun, spun away into the void.


This is bad. The thought was cold and clear.


Adrenaline flooded him. He lunged, wrapping his Technecht's remaining arm around the enemy, pulling them into a brutal clinch. He headbutted the cockpit again and again, until the enemy's sword slipped away. The fight devolved into an ugly, close-quarters struggle. In the chaos, Nibel's functioning hand found the enemy's own sidearm, still holstered and forgotten.


He wrenched it free, pressed the barrel against the enemy's abdomen, and fired.


The struggling stopped.


Nibel stared at the dead Technecht, a dark smear of blood now clouding the hole in its torso. He felt a strange, hollow empathy for the man who had tried to kill him.


"I'm sorry," he whispered. "You fought well. Rest in peace."


"You did well," Godefrid said, his tone serious but with a note of respect. "You fought to the end. And you ended it with honour."


"Was that necessary?"


"Unfortunately, yes. You'll understand why, eventually."


Nibel said nothing. He maintained the silence all the way back.


Later, in the cafeteria, Captain Hrodwulf addressed the troops.


Well, you sorry lot somehow managed not to die. Even with pirates who've been doing this longer than most of you have been alive. So be proud. The soldiers raised their cups with a unified "Ayy!"

"Of course, half of you were just hiding behind the walking natural disaster we call Stormsverd, so let's not get too proud. The crowd laughed. "And I'd especially like to congratulate the new recruits. You handled the pressure well." Aelfraed raised his glass with a bright smile.

"Finally, I'd like to single out Nibel, who won his first duel today."


The room went quiet. Aelfraed looked at him, his face a mix of surprise and shock.


"Is that odd?" Nibel asked, uneasy under the stares.


"Yes," Aelfraed whispered. "Only veterans get into duels. Those pirates were good. For a rookie to win is unheard of."


Before Nibel could process this, the room erupted. Two soldiers hoisted him onto their shoulders, carrying him through the cheering crowd. When they set him down, the Captain approached.


"Congratulations, Nibel. Seems you're learning to bite" he said with a wink.


Then Godefrid was there, his familiar smile back in place. "Now your name has the respect you wanted. You're not a legend yet. But this is where it begins."

 

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Revised chapters 1&2 to remove the fluff and make them more fluid, matching later chapters.