Chapter 30: Hinata's Team
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Same day. Kakashi's hospital room
The jonin was finally sprawled out in bed, reading his little book as usual. The day had been… intense. He was still processing what he'd seen in the Land of Waves.
The way the door slid open without a sound caught him completely off guard, and in the doorway appeared an elderly woman known in and beyond Konoha.
"…Elder-sama?" Hatake's only visible eye went wide in surprise. He instinctively tried to hide the book under the blanket, but it was already too late.
"Exactly, brat," Utatane Koharu stepped into the room, her cane thudding dully against the floor. "I heard about your mission after your… 'vacation.'" She practically spat the last word. Then she quietly slid the door shut behind her. "You've completely lost both your strength and your wits, Kakashi. You let the enemy lure you into the simplest trap. You didn't do reconnaissance, despite the direct suggestion of the junior member of your team. You endangered genin and would be dead if not for my student. Over the years, the only thing you've really improved at is jerking off." Utatane jabbed her cane contemptuously toward the little book. "But in every other respect, you've just gone soft and predictable. I've got a few things to say to you."
Pointedly ignoring the chair, she stayed standing over his bed, looking down at him. What followed for the white‑haired man were twenty very humiliating minutes of insults, mixed with a tactical breakdown of exactly how he should have acted on that mission. Although Koharu definitely spent more time comparing his professional qualities to various types of organic waste…
The next day, I managed to join Hinata's team. Technically, they were called Team Aoba, since he was their commander. But it was more convenient for me to call them something else.
First thing in the morning, I dragged my ass over to their training ground.
"Yo," I called out, stepping out from behind a tree. "Feel like going on a mission?"
Just like that, I threw it out there.
Hinata lit up the moment she saw me and nodded without hesitation. Kiba and Shino exchanged glances. Their sensei, Aoba Yamashiro, looked up from the scroll he was reading and eyed me with interest.
"Uzumaki-san," he said calmly, then paused for a few seconds to think. "Unexpected. I believe your assistance would be useful to my team. And if we're going, we might as well take something more serious than a D-rank."
Holy shit. I thought I'd have to talk them into it… But here he is: sharp, decisive, reasonable, and flexible. Not like some other sensei… flashed through my head.
I nodded in agreement. A moment later, our ears were assaulted by Kiba's joyous yelp-slash-roar; he was clearly thrilled about a higher-ranked mission.
It turned out to be their first C-rank mission. Getting it really perked the whole team up. You could tell they were probably getting bored with constant work in Konoha. It showed especially on the dog boy. Riding that wave of positivity, Inuzuka called me his bro and, in his excitement, tried to hug me, but a fatherly smack upside the head calmed him down.
After that, we headed to the Hokage's residence.
Finding a merchant's missing daughter. That was the mission we were given.
A hundred kilometers is nothing to a shinobi. Moving at a leisurely pace along the tree branches, we reached the merchant's small estate in less than an hour. We were met by a sweaty, short man whose face showed a mix of desperation and hope.
"Shinobi-sama! Thank the gods you're here!" he wailed as his servants led us inside. "My daughter… She didn't just disappear, she was kidnapped! I've heard of this gang, and they're demanding a ransom! A huge ransom! I don't have that kind of money!"
He looked at us hopefully. The client didn't really understand why there was one more of us than usual, but he was clearly happy about it.
Aoba was about to open his mouth to offer sympathy and agree to the new terms, but I beat him to it, placing a hand on his shoulder.
"One moment, Aoba-san." I turned to the merchant, my tone going cold and businesslike. "So you're saying the mission's changed from a 'search' to 'combat against an armed group and hostage rescue'?"
"Y-yes, but—"
"You do value your daughter, don't you?" I went on, not letting him cut in. "Our team, as you can see, consists of young genin. We were also geared up for a different type of assignment. We're going to have to push ourselves to take on an entire gang. Risk our lives." I swept my gaze over my temporary teammates. Kiba, Shino, and Hinata were looking at me with a bit of skepticism, clearly not seeing yet where I was going with this. They were genin; beating up regular bandits really wasn't a problem for them. "Tell me, Mister Merchant, do workers you pay that little really bust their asses for you?"
The client went pale as he caught the hint. Aoba, on the other hand, watched with interest, seeming to understand I was giving his students a lesson they wouldn't find in textbooks.
"I… I…" the merchant stammered. "I'll increase the reward! Five times! Just bring my daughter back!"
I turned back to my temporary teammates. Their faces were stretched in shock. You could practically read on them something between Wait, you can do that? and Damn, this guy…
"Deal," I nodded, seeing from their faces that they agreed. "But there's one more condition. After we return your daughter, you're going to tell all your friends and colleagues what valiant shinobi work in Konoha, how lucky you were that I, Uzumaki Naruto, personally ended up on your mission, and what a kindness we showed you by agreeing to such modest terms."
The merchant nodded hastily, though in his eyes I clearly read the fleeting thought: Next time I request a mission from Konoha, I'm going to make sure you're not on it.
Once we were away from the house, Shino quietly remarked that it had been a pretty dirty move on my part to force the price up. Kiba, catching the vibe and being his usual brash self, decided to butt heads too, declaring that this was their mission and they'd try to finish it themselves first. To his surprise, I agreed.
"Fine. It's your mission now. I'm just support and a coordinator, if needed."
Then I explained what technique I'd be using to coordinate them.
Well, what did he expect when, basically, he asked me not to bother too much? Besides, there was another plus in this: Hinata's team would be able to polish their teamwork even more. And to make sure everything went even better, I added one last touch, speaking through the mind-link:
Yamashiro-san, don't interfere unless there's a real chance of someone dying. Let them show what they can do.
He gave a barely noticeable nod.
And Team 8, in fact, showed some solid teamwork.
Kiba and Akamaru, like hounds, picked up the girl's scent from one of her things, and in just an hour we were at the gang's hideout.
Shino sent his kikaichū out for recon, and ten minutes later we had a complete map of the hideout—an old, abandoned warehouse—and the exact number of enemies. Hinata, using her Byakugan, confirmed Shino's data and spotted several primitive traps on the approach.
For genin, their coordination was impressive, at least by what I knew of Konoha's average genin level.
The assault plan was simple and effective. Shino's bugs silently "put to sleep" the two sentries at the entrance, draining enough chakra to leave them weak and drowsy. Then Kiba and Akamaru crashed through a small wooden gate like a pair of rhinos, going in with their Fang Over Fang tactic. The move worked off the jutsu of the same name, where Akamaru takes on his master's form; then the two of them drop to all fours, leap, and spin rapidly, creating visible whirlwinds and delivering a barrage of quick strikes to their target. Right off the bat they created chaos and dragged most of the bandits' attention onto themselves.
That was when Hinata went to work. While everyone's eyes were glued to the Inuzuka's furious charge, she slipped into the building like a shadow through a side entrance.
I watched her especially closely. There wasn't a trace of her old hesitation left in her movements.
Coolheaded, with precise Jūken strikes almost invisible to their targets, she disabled the bandits in her path, shutting down their tenketsu. If Kiba was charging through like a runaway freight train, Hinata's actions were just as decisive, but completely different in their finesse and precision.
In one of the back rooms she found the merchant's daughter, tied up and scared. After freeing her, she gave the signal, and a few minutes later the entire gang was down and trussed up.
The leader of these poor bastards, by the way, turned out to be smart enough not to harm the hostage, hoping for a lighter sentence. He probably understood that this kind of business doesn't last long before you get bagged. What he didn't factor in was that confiscation of all his "hard‑earned" loot could also be part of the punishment. But he could be surprised by that in court.
After the beatdown… that is, the main part of the mission, I walked over and started praising the team's actions, especially Hinata's, which made her a little embarrassed.
Aoba also expressed how pleased he was with the team's results, talking about how much they'd grown…
After that, we returned the girl to the merchant. Sure, the mission hadn't been carried out perfectly; we could've arranged everything way more subtly. But it worked like this too, didn't it?
On the way back to Konoha, the group's mood was high.
Kiba wouldn't shut up about how he and Akamaru had wrecked the bandits, Shino nodded silently along, and Aoba listened with a faint smile, occasionally throwing in tactical comments. I, for my part, noted with satisfaction how well they'd meshed. Their specialties complemented each other perfectly. But what pleased me most was Hinata's progress. She hadn't just done her part of the plan—she'd done it coolly, efficiently, without a hint of her old indecision. A real shinobi had awakened in her… and it was disgustingly cute. With that face of hers she looked like an ultra‑cute combat kitten. If she had cried out "Nya!" with every strike, I would've just melted on the spot.
"I'd like to see how much you've grown," I said to Hinata the next day when we met at our usual training ground. "Want a quick spar?"
She hesitated for a moment, then determination flashed in her eyes. She nodded firmly, taking the Hyūga clan's fighting stance.
We'd done plenty of spars back in the Academy and even a few outside it. Hinata was used to me being stronger, and she knew that in a fight with me she didn't have to hold back.
I didn't underestimate her, rushing in right away with the kind of speed that usually left my peers stumped. I wanted to see her limit and how she'd react to real pressure. But what happened next genuinely surprised me.
Hinata didn't retreat or block. Instead, she started spinning, releasing blue streams of chakra from every tenketsu in her body.
"Kaiten!" Her voice, though quiet, was full of resolve.
A rotating sphere of blue chakra formed around her. Before I could reach her, I had to jump back so the technique wouldn't just launch me away.
I stared ahead in surprise. Absolute Defense… that's what they call it. She'd mastered one of her clan's most difficult techniques.
"Good, Hinata. Very good." I couldn't hide my admiration. "But you can't win a fight with defense alone."
"I know," she replied and, stopping her rotation, rushed into the attack herself.
Her movements had become faster and more precise; training in the clan had clearly intensified. Had she kept quiet about it just to surprise and impress me? It'd make sense—she knows my personality and could easily have predicted that. And that, together with what she was showing now, was really impressive.
She activated her Byakugan, and her chakra-laced fingers immediately went for my tenketsu.
I dodged her thrusts easily, and even parried some of them in a similar way, flooding my own limbs with chakra and releasing it at the moment of contact.
For several seconds, blue flashes and waves of chakra flew from us in all directions.
But she didn't give up, trying to force me into a combo. And I didn't back off, waiting to see what else Hinata would show.
"Eight Trigrams, Thirty-Two Palms!"
Her attacks turned into a flurry of precise, lightning-fast strikes. Our arms blurred from the speed. Two palms. Four palms. Eight. Sixteen. I parried each blow, not letting her hurt me—or herself. The exchange only grew in speed and power.
Thirty-two palms…
Hinata exhaled heavily as I knocked aside her final strike.
The fight stopped.
I wouldn't say it had been hard for me, but it wasn't exactly effortless either.
"Definitely chunin level," I said, without a trace of irony in my voice. "Kaiten and Thirty-Two Palms… Hinata, that's incredible progress. I'm honestly impressed."
A familiar blush spread over her cheeks, but she didn't lower her eyes. Instead, she looked up proudly… not at me, but off to the side. And that alone was already big progress…
"Thank you… Naruto-kun."
"This calls for a celebration," I suggested. "My treat."
The evening at a small, cozy restaurant that served the best dango in Konoha went by surprisingly easily. Hinata still got flustered when I praised her, but again, much less than before. She could hold a conversation, laughed at my jokes about Kiba and his "rhino" tactics, and even talked about her training and how cutely her little sister Hanabi huffs and puffs during practice. I pointed out that Hinata was no less cute during our spars, which made her blush even harder.
Our friendship, it turned out, was getting warmer and deeper. I felt calm around her. That comfort was a pleasant break from my endless race for strength and all my other dark plans.
All in all, the rest had gone well. I'd recovered my strength, helped a friend become even stronger and more confident, and spent time with someone I genuinely liked. But as I headed back late that night to my empty, quiet mansion, I knew the break was over.
Down in the basement, in the cold of the sealing fuin, the material I'd obtained in the Land of Waves was waiting for me. My main project demanded attention, and now I had everything I needed to take the next step.
It was time to push science forward.
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The jonin was finally sprawled out in bed, reading his little book as usual. The day had been… intense. He was still processing what he'd seen in the Land of Waves.
The way the door slid open without a sound caught him completely off guard, and in the doorway appeared an elderly woman known in and beyond Konoha.
"…Elder-sama?" Hatake's only visible eye went wide in surprise. He instinctively tried to hide the book under the blanket, but it was already too late.
"Exactly, brat," Utatane Koharu stepped into the room, her cane thudding dully against the floor. "I heard about your mission after your… 'vacation.'" She practically spat the last word. Then she quietly slid the door shut behind her. "You've completely lost both your strength and your wits, Kakashi. You let the enemy lure you into the simplest trap. You didn't do reconnaissance, despite the direct suggestion of the junior member of your team. You endangered genin and would be dead if not for my student. Over the years, the only thing you've really improved at is jerking off." Utatane jabbed her cane contemptuously toward the little book. "But in every other respect, you've just gone soft and predictable. I've got a few things to say to you."
Pointedly ignoring the chair, she stayed standing over his bed, looking down at him. What followed for the white‑haired man were twenty very humiliating minutes of insults, mixed with a tactical breakdown of exactly how he should have acted on that mission. Although Koharu definitely spent more time comparing his professional qualities to various types of organic waste…
The next day, I managed to join Hinata's team. Technically, they were called Team Aoba, since he was their commander. But it was more convenient for me to call them something else.
First thing in the morning, I dragged my ass over to their training ground.
"Yo," I called out, stepping out from behind a tree. "Feel like going on a mission?"
Just like that, I threw it out there.
Hinata lit up the moment she saw me and nodded without hesitation. Kiba and Shino exchanged glances. Their sensei, Aoba Yamashiro, looked up from the scroll he was reading and eyed me with interest.
"Uzumaki-san," he said calmly, then paused for a few seconds to think. "Unexpected. I believe your assistance would be useful to my team. And if we're going, we might as well take something more serious than a D-rank."
Holy shit. I thought I'd have to talk them into it… But here he is: sharp, decisive, reasonable, and flexible. Not like some other sensei… flashed through my head.
I nodded in agreement. A moment later, our ears were assaulted by Kiba's joyous yelp-slash-roar; he was clearly thrilled about a higher-ranked mission.
It turned out to be their first C-rank mission. Getting it really perked the whole team up. You could tell they were probably getting bored with constant work in Konoha. It showed especially on the dog boy. Riding that wave of positivity, Inuzuka called me his bro and, in his excitement, tried to hug me, but a fatherly smack upside the head calmed him down.
After that, we headed to the Hokage's residence.
Finding a merchant's missing daughter. That was the mission we were given.
A hundred kilometers is nothing to a shinobi. Moving at a leisurely pace along the tree branches, we reached the merchant's small estate in less than an hour. We were met by a sweaty, short man whose face showed a mix of desperation and hope.
"Shinobi-sama! Thank the gods you're here!" he wailed as his servants led us inside. "My daughter… She didn't just disappear, she was kidnapped! I've heard of this gang, and they're demanding a ransom! A huge ransom! I don't have that kind of money!"
He looked at us hopefully. The client didn't really understand why there was one more of us than usual, but he was clearly happy about it.
Aoba was about to open his mouth to offer sympathy and agree to the new terms, but I beat him to it, placing a hand on his shoulder.
"One moment, Aoba-san." I turned to the merchant, my tone going cold and businesslike. "So you're saying the mission's changed from a 'search' to 'combat against an armed group and hostage rescue'?"
"Y-yes, but—"
"You do value your daughter, don't you?" I went on, not letting him cut in. "Our team, as you can see, consists of young genin. We were also geared up for a different type of assignment. We're going to have to push ourselves to take on an entire gang. Risk our lives." I swept my gaze over my temporary teammates. Kiba, Shino, and Hinata were looking at me with a bit of skepticism, clearly not seeing yet where I was going with this. They were genin; beating up regular bandits really wasn't a problem for them. "Tell me, Mister Merchant, do workers you pay that little really bust their asses for you?"
The client went pale as he caught the hint. Aoba, on the other hand, watched with interest, seeming to understand I was giving his students a lesson they wouldn't find in textbooks.
"I… I…" the merchant stammered. "I'll increase the reward! Five times! Just bring my daughter back!"
I turned back to my temporary teammates. Their faces were stretched in shock. You could practically read on them something between Wait, you can do that? and Damn, this guy…
"Deal," I nodded, seeing from their faces that they agreed. "But there's one more condition. After we return your daughter, you're going to tell all your friends and colleagues what valiant shinobi work in Konoha, how lucky you were that I, Uzumaki Naruto, personally ended up on your mission, and what a kindness we showed you by agreeing to such modest terms."
The merchant nodded hastily, though in his eyes I clearly read the fleeting thought: Next time I request a mission from Konoha, I'm going to make sure you're not on it.
Once we were away from the house, Shino quietly remarked that it had been a pretty dirty move on my part to force the price up. Kiba, catching the vibe and being his usual brash self, decided to butt heads too, declaring that this was their mission and they'd try to finish it themselves first. To his surprise, I agreed.
"Fine. It's your mission now. I'm just support and a coordinator, if needed."
Then I explained what technique I'd be using to coordinate them.
Well, what did he expect when, basically, he asked me not to bother too much? Besides, there was another plus in this: Hinata's team would be able to polish their teamwork even more. And to make sure everything went even better, I added one last touch, speaking through the mind-link:
Yamashiro-san, don't interfere unless there's a real chance of someone dying. Let them show what they can do.
He gave a barely noticeable nod.
And Team 8, in fact, showed some solid teamwork.
Kiba and Akamaru, like hounds, picked up the girl's scent from one of her things, and in just an hour we were at the gang's hideout.
Shino sent his kikaichū out for recon, and ten minutes later we had a complete map of the hideout—an old, abandoned warehouse—and the exact number of enemies. Hinata, using her Byakugan, confirmed Shino's data and spotted several primitive traps on the approach.
For genin, their coordination was impressive, at least by what I knew of Konoha's average genin level.
The assault plan was simple and effective. Shino's bugs silently "put to sleep" the two sentries at the entrance, draining enough chakra to leave them weak and drowsy. Then Kiba and Akamaru crashed through a small wooden gate like a pair of rhinos, going in with their Fang Over Fang tactic. The move worked off the jutsu of the same name, where Akamaru takes on his master's form; then the two of them drop to all fours, leap, and spin rapidly, creating visible whirlwinds and delivering a barrage of quick strikes to their target. Right off the bat they created chaos and dragged most of the bandits' attention onto themselves.
That was when Hinata went to work. While everyone's eyes were glued to the Inuzuka's furious charge, she slipped into the building like a shadow through a side entrance.
I watched her especially closely. There wasn't a trace of her old hesitation left in her movements.
Coolheaded, with precise Jūken strikes almost invisible to their targets, she disabled the bandits in her path, shutting down their tenketsu. If Kiba was charging through like a runaway freight train, Hinata's actions were just as decisive, but completely different in their finesse and precision.
In one of the back rooms she found the merchant's daughter, tied up and scared. After freeing her, she gave the signal, and a few minutes later the entire gang was down and trussed up.
The leader of these poor bastards, by the way, turned out to be smart enough not to harm the hostage, hoping for a lighter sentence. He probably understood that this kind of business doesn't last long before you get bagged. What he didn't factor in was that confiscation of all his "hard‑earned" loot could also be part of the punishment. But he could be surprised by that in court.
After the beatdown… that is, the main part of the mission, I walked over and started praising the team's actions, especially Hinata's, which made her a little embarrassed.
Aoba also expressed how pleased he was with the team's results, talking about how much they'd grown…
After that, we returned the girl to the merchant. Sure, the mission hadn't been carried out perfectly; we could've arranged everything way more subtly. But it worked like this too, didn't it?
On the way back to Konoha, the group's mood was high.
Kiba wouldn't shut up about how he and Akamaru had wrecked the bandits, Shino nodded silently along, and Aoba listened with a faint smile, occasionally throwing in tactical comments. I, for my part, noted with satisfaction how well they'd meshed. Their specialties complemented each other perfectly. But what pleased me most was Hinata's progress. She hadn't just done her part of the plan—she'd done it coolly, efficiently, without a hint of her old indecision. A real shinobi had awakened in her… and it was disgustingly cute. With that face of hers she looked like an ultra‑cute combat kitten. If she had cried out "Nya!" with every strike, I would've just melted on the spot.
"I'd like to see how much you've grown," I said to Hinata the next day when we met at our usual training ground. "Want a quick spar?"
She hesitated for a moment, then determination flashed in her eyes. She nodded firmly, taking the Hyūga clan's fighting stance.
We'd done plenty of spars back in the Academy and even a few outside it. Hinata was used to me being stronger, and she knew that in a fight with me she didn't have to hold back.
I didn't underestimate her, rushing in right away with the kind of speed that usually left my peers stumped. I wanted to see her limit and how she'd react to real pressure. But what happened next genuinely surprised me.
Hinata didn't retreat or block. Instead, she started spinning, releasing blue streams of chakra from every tenketsu in her body.
"Kaiten!" Her voice, though quiet, was full of resolve.
A rotating sphere of blue chakra formed around her. Before I could reach her, I had to jump back so the technique wouldn't just launch me away.
I stared ahead in surprise. Absolute Defense… that's what they call it. She'd mastered one of her clan's most difficult techniques.
"Good, Hinata. Very good." I couldn't hide my admiration. "But you can't win a fight with defense alone."
"I know," she replied and, stopping her rotation, rushed into the attack herself.
Her movements had become faster and more precise; training in the clan had clearly intensified. Had she kept quiet about it just to surprise and impress me? It'd make sense—she knows my personality and could easily have predicted that. And that, together with what she was showing now, was really impressive.
She activated her Byakugan, and her chakra-laced fingers immediately went for my tenketsu.
I dodged her thrusts easily, and even parried some of them in a similar way, flooding my own limbs with chakra and releasing it at the moment of contact.
For several seconds, blue flashes and waves of chakra flew from us in all directions.
But she didn't give up, trying to force me into a combo. And I didn't back off, waiting to see what else Hinata would show.
"Eight Trigrams, Thirty-Two Palms!"
Her attacks turned into a flurry of precise, lightning-fast strikes. Our arms blurred from the speed. Two palms. Four palms. Eight. Sixteen. I parried each blow, not letting her hurt me—or herself. The exchange only grew in speed and power.
Thirty-two palms…
Hinata exhaled heavily as I knocked aside her final strike.
The fight stopped.
I wouldn't say it had been hard for me, but it wasn't exactly effortless either.
"Definitely chunin level," I said, without a trace of irony in my voice. "Kaiten and Thirty-Two Palms… Hinata, that's incredible progress. I'm honestly impressed."
A familiar blush spread over her cheeks, but she didn't lower her eyes. Instead, she looked up proudly… not at me, but off to the side. And that alone was already big progress…
"Thank you… Naruto-kun."
"This calls for a celebration," I suggested. "My treat."
The evening at a small, cozy restaurant that served the best dango in Konoha went by surprisingly easily. Hinata still got flustered when I praised her, but again, much less than before. She could hold a conversation, laughed at my jokes about Kiba and his "rhino" tactics, and even talked about her training and how cutely her little sister Hanabi huffs and puffs during practice. I pointed out that Hinata was no less cute during our spars, which made her blush even harder.
Our friendship, it turned out, was getting warmer and deeper. I felt calm around her. That comfort was a pleasant break from my endless race for strength and all my other dark plans.
All in all, the rest had gone well. I'd recovered my strength, helped a friend become even stronger and more confident, and spent time with someone I genuinely liked. But as I headed back late that night to my empty, quiet mansion, I knew the break was over.
Down in the basement, in the cold of the sealing fuin, the material I'd obtained in the Land of Waves was waiting for me. My main project demanded attention, and now I had everything I needed to take the next step.
It was time to push science forward.
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